1Robin-Lover1 [2007-09-15 21:33:11 +0000 UTC]
wow, this story is really captivating, right from the very first sentence! i really like your style of writting- very satisfying and soothing, and you have already created a very interesting main character. Good balance of dialogue and description as well. It was a very moving story. Obvious parts about not being able to see your reflection when your a vampire- i never thought of it as sadening before- but reading that scene made me realize how awful that would be, let alone all the other sacrifices you would have to make.
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