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Description                                                       "How do you feel?"



The mood was despondent this night: Rain was still pouring furiously down at everyone, most of them were injured, some of them even unconsciousness. Unfortunately they've already reached the end of their plan...resume :
-Ben was involved in the whole Mr. Burwell case.
-Ben was also there to hurt Claire, for unknown reasons.
-Another man assisted him... But who was he?
-Both of them had the same body structure, which Remi confirmed.
One thing what they didn't knew, was where the culprits were, or where they were hiding. Maybe the men were closer than everyone thought:  

"Claire! Wake up! Please.."
Hershel tried to shake her awake, as she promptly fainted again, after she warned the whole group around her. A tear ran down Flora's pale cheek, when she realized that Claire was terribly weak. She lied in Hershel's arms. Then suddenly she opened her dark eyes again, smiling slightly.
"Oh Dear, please stay strong. I just need you to be awake till we're at home. And don' worry I'm... Ahhh."
Hershel folded his arms in front of his stomach, wanting to push the pain away.
"What's wrong Professor?"
Luke asked, worried about his 'father'. No-one cared about his injuries, at that point.
"I assume, it's from the hit I received from the assistant. I don't know how he did that, but I passed away immediately."
"Uh.. you aren't fine at all.."
Finally Claire found her voice, after she frowned in anxiety.
"Don't fret my love. I'll be okay. Just try to be awake. Could you.. give me... your arm?"
She held it up, as he bend down, to pull her up. Her arms were around his wet T-shirt on his waist.
"Do you think you can walk back home?"
Remi said from behind. She quiet concerned, after all both were weak and looked as if they were near to die.
"Thank you, but I think I can. It isn't very far from here. I..."

"There you are, Layton!!"
'Ben' ran towards the group, screaming:
"You really thought, you hung me up!"
Laughing devilish, he made his way to Luke and Flora.
"Remi! Call Chelmey!"
Hershel threw her, his phone with a strong pass to. Then she eagerly searched his name on the phone display, as Flora yelped!
"What?!"
Luke totally forget to watch over her, between Claire and Hershel's Conversation. 'Ben' utilized the situation shameless.
"If you call the Inspector, then she'll have to pay that with her little princess life!"
His eyes widened, when he saw that the man placed a sharp knife right on her chin:
"Don't. Call. Him!"
Luke yelled at Remi, before she nearly pushed the 'call' button.    
"Ha ha, you're so easy to extort! Now.. let me play this game along.."
'Ben' walked a few meters back, with Flora in tow. Shocked, Claire watched the scene; but didn't intervened. How could she? She barely spoke a bit at this time.
"Luke, Hel-"
"Shut up, Princess!"
He said, while he roughly put his long hand over her mouth. Flora only stared at her Boyfriend, showing him that she's afraid. Massively afraid.
"So, Layton... How do you feel?"
'Ben' questioned sarcastically, while he paced up and down, through the crowd.
"What do you want from us?"
Hershel returned hard.
"What I want from you? Oh.. there are many things, to hate about you. Did you ever lost a thought on that?"
He shook his head in disbelieve, as he got closer and closer to him, with every step he made towards the two.
"Don't you even dare to come a millimeter closer! I've got a knife.. you know that, right?"
"Or course I do! No one question to you: Would you really kill this innocent girl for hurting me?"
The knife on Flora's chin, wandered down to her neck..
"Certainly. Why not?"
"You're a sick man!"
Luke couldn't hold it any longer..
In the meantime of this little talk, Remi, who everyone included 'Ben' ignored, lurked up right behind his back...ready to kick his a**.
Hershel knew what she was doing and helped her by distracting him...Then the instant came..
"Haaa!"
She screamed loudly. Just then 'Ben' turned around, when she struck.
"Yes!"
"Luke, Luke!"
Flora ran up to him, as fast as she could and found herself in his wet arms.
"Thank you again, Remi!"
Hershel said, waving her to him and Claire over.
"I can't leave.. he still hears us."
"Oh, very well then. Luke could you help Claire for a second, please ?"
He nodded, walked to her and took her arm around his shoulders to support her. Luke grew pretty fast the past year, so.. that it would be an easy job to keep Claire straight up.
Meanwhile Hershel went to 'Ben', kneed down and asked him:
"How do you feel, Ben? Isn't it just marvelous to your own face, right in the mud?"
Smiling at him, Layton added:
"Tell me where your assistant is!?"
The man on the ground moved slightly, spitted grass out of his little mouth and replied:
"Over my dead body, Layton! I won't!"
He was quiet stubborn with that:
"No Problem, I can arrange that.. Remi!?"
Feeling her foot moving away from his slender back, he feared to die.. This woman was just too tough for him..
"Do that! I'd rather die with my pride than giving up so easily!"
Remi smirked at the Professor and told:
"Get ready to go K.O. in... 5, 4.... 3, 2... and..."
"Alright, Alright! Stop it!!! Please!!"
Luke raised an eyebrow: 'Layton, you evil genius.', He thought and glanced at the two women in his arms..
"Tell me.. where is he?!"
Then 'Ben' finally spoke barely audible:
"He's waiting for me.. near to the second hand shop."
"Oh, that's why we bumped into you, when we went to the shop. You visited your assistant. Perhaps, you were planning all this at the moment!"
Luke remembered back to the scene that happened yesterday.
"..."
No comment.. was he leaked out? Maybe.. But they had to find his assistant and know who he even is!
"It was nice to meet you... sir. Sadly we all have to leave you now. We need to find a certain man who aided you."
Layton said, with a little smile on his lips. After that he shook his head to the direction of the girls and his apprentice.. which Remi followed. The group left the park.. injured but with new knowledge.



At Hershel's Apartment:

"Flora? Do you feel alright?"
Luke sat on the edge of his bed, as he stroke her wet hair out of her face.
"My Hands and my feet feel numb, but otherwise I'm fine."
Weakly she smiled back at him.
He was so glad that everyone survived after this dangerous night. Still.. something was bothering him: 'Ben's assistant. They still had to approach him and interrogate the unknown man. But when? Sooner or later? Luke knew that he would be gone, if they wouldn't show up the next 15 minutes. Another question was: would Hershel even be able to leave the Apartment again? After his blood loss? Actually Claire, Flora and the Professor should be in the Hospital. But we all know them: They would go nowhere before the whole nightmare was ultimately over.
"Luke?"
Flora finally tore him out of his thoughts.
"I'm sorry. Please, give me your Hands... I'll warm them up.."
Softly he grabbed her small Hands and squeezed slightly, so that they would get faster to their normal temperature. Flora merely closed her eyes, feeling the heat returning to her subcooled body. Then she unforeseenly said into the silence:

"Luke.. I love you."
He fondly smiled at her, letting her Hands slip out of his own and placed a gentle kiss on her forehead.
"I love you too, Flora."
Giggling, She moved to his lap and looked up to him, saying:
"Too sad that you'll have to leave.."
Luke frowned, as he removed his Hand from her cheek:
"Regrettably I have to. But I'll return soon."
"Promise?"
"I Promise!"
Flora sleepy grinned at him, as she suddenly felt his soft lips upon hers. Why couldn't this moment last longer?



In Layton's Room:

"Hershel, don't go. You have to rest a while and treat your injuries. It's important!"
Claire said quietly from his bed.
She was dressed in one of his long, dark brown suit trousers and wore a white chemise he possessed. Her hair remained moist, which she got use to.
"I've no time for that. 'Ben's assistant is waiting for us. Ouch.. Ahh.."
Once more he stood up from the chair he sat on and felt the pain of his foot grow stronger every second he moved it in any way. His Hands were already cleaned and in white bandages.
"But you have to take the Time! No matter how. This is about your well being Hershel, not about a puzzle you can't solve that easily."
She almost had to get angry to get his attention.
"Well then. I hope you realized that I'm ready to go."
He murmured the last sentence, as he took off his black shoes, he bought knew on a market. After that he sat down right next to her and wrapped her in an embrace. "I'm just concerned about you, Hershel. And you also know why."
She averted her glimpse from him..
"Do I, dear?"
He said clueless.
"Yes, you do. I told you that I never had it easy with men.. I can't lose you. It would be too much to stand."
'Hershel.. you're unbelievable!'
He thought, after forgetting such a thing.

* knock, knock *

"Who might that be?"
Layton asked himself, when he clambered out of his bed and ignored the pain as he slowly opened the door:



                                                                 "Remi?!"


To be continued...
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Comments: 36

faartjeXx [2010-11-10 17:36:13 +0000 UTC]

*gasp* yaaay remi!
and again my sistermagnificent ^^
love you dear

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to faartjeXx [2010-11-11 15:29:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you sooo much!!
glad you've liked it^^
pls reply when you're here ^^
Love you too

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faartjeXx In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-11 18:27:09 +0000 UTC]

hey there you're welcome
love ya sis

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RemiAltava [2010-11-08 17:07:09 +0000 UTC]

Meine Lieblingsstellen sind, wo Remi 'Ben' verprügelt und Angst einjagt und als Remi (total dramatisch) an Laytons Tür klopft

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to RemiAltava [2010-11-08 20:01:37 +0000 UTC]

halt alles was mit remi zu tun hat ^^
danke fürs lesen !!

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RemiAltava In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-08 20:31:09 +0000 UTC]

...Ja, sorry...
aber kein Problem~

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KurooTsukki [2010-11-08 15:32:47 +0000 UTC]

Will Clive appear too in the story (sorry, I'm a Clive-freak^^)?
Like I said some chapters ago: Should I copy and paste the whole story to show you what I liked?

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to KurooTsukki [2010-11-08 15:40:52 +0000 UTC]

you can! but you don't have to.. just say it in your words^^ would be interesting to know!
Honestly, I don't think that he will appear in this story.. but i will continuing.. like i write the story along but with another title.. this one's called Jealousy... the next one could be.. i don't know xD still have no idea.. don't even know the ending of this story!
and thank you so much for the watch
Luv ya

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KurooTsukki In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-08 15:47:04 +0000 UTC]

Well, I loved that part with Layton...and Claire...and Luke...and Flora... I can't decide XD

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to KurooTsukki [2010-11-08 15:53:56 +0000 UTC]

so you've liked it all?.. ^^
soo glad <3 and thank you that you've took the time to read it all the way through i'm stunned
THANK YOU!

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KurooTsukki In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-08 16:46:25 +0000 UTC]

Hey, you said that you will read my whole story too ^^

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to KurooTsukki [2010-11-08 16:56:07 +0000 UTC]

yess i promised that!
still waiting for your sequel^^ but don't rush..

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Unknown-Diva [2010-11-07 21:46:57 +0000 UTC]

I came, I read, I comment, I love <3
And again I say. I LOVE THIS STORY <3

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-08 11:49:53 +0000 UTC]

aww you're so sweet my dear <33
I'm glad that you've liked it!
are there some news from the site you've posted it as well?? xD
thank you hun!

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-08 12:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Ofcourse I like it <3 I love your storys :3

No, there is no news. It is readed, but there are no comments --'

^.^ No thank my dear <3

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-08 15:36:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you do!
oh.. that was clear^^ but still i'm happy that it was readed by someone.. in holland right?
love u

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-08 18:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeps. Holland is my country. Not a very nice one, but alright XD

<3

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-08 20:03:09 +0000 UTC]

aww noo!! it's a beautiful country!! i've been there and loved it! <3

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-08 21:05:54 +0000 UTC]

I think o.O
I don't really like it, but alright xD I spent my whole life in Holland.
You're German, right?
I love Germany, It's just a minut of 30 from my city xD

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-08 21:08:07 +0000 UTC]

oh no i'm not.. i'm from switzerland.. which is right under germany^^
and i speak german too (french, italian, english and much more^^)
love languages^^
Yeah switzerland isn't very special for me either.. but there are many people who love the mountains

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-08 21:59:45 +0000 UTC]

Uhm.. I have contact with a German too. I think I've made a mistake

Anywayz. Uhm.. switzeland.. I don't know much about that country. Without the ski resorts ofcourse XD

I don't like languages. That's because I'm a dyslectican Is that correct English? xD
Whatever. I must learn how to life with it and it's quit easy if you know it xD

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-09 17:37:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah.. probably! I know our country isn't that famous as yours^^
yeeess it was correct!
I'm sure it is.. but isn't it sad somehow?.. sorry don't want to bother you
love you

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-09 18:28:32 +0000 UTC]

I can life with it. And most of the people know about it, so thay shouldn't attack me with it.
I suppose that wasn't correct English o.O

Love you too

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-09 19:27:38 +0000 UTC]

aww dear don't worry about your grammar! it's good how it is.. <3
and i'm glad that no-one teases you!.. i know what i'm talking about..
Love you more

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-09 19:54:48 +0000 UTC]

You really don't know about me...
Many people in my class teasing me, but I don't know why D:
Tomorrow I gonna talk with my mentor(?) about it. I hope it will work D:

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-09 20:11:34 +0000 UTC]

actually i don't, but i hope that it'll chance with time
and i hope that they stop it.. really they have nothing better to do .. isn't it just sad, when you think about it? .. mean people !!
don't listen to them, dear!

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-09 20:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Thay are really... sad. I really hate them, but alright. I hop my mentor can fix it, like two years ago when an other mentor of mine did the same thing ^.^
I don't listen to them, but they drive my totaly crazy T_T

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-09 20:48:36 +0000 UTC]

oh.. try to forget and ignore them! that's the best you can do..
yeah hope it'll work! Really!

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-10 08:47:19 +0000 UTC]

I hope, I only can hope it will stop.
Today i have that little talk with my mentor, so I gonna cross my fingers T_T

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-10 12:33:49 +0000 UTC]

I will too! <33
I'm gonna write my new chapter now^^ so hope you're day's going to be good..

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-10 15:56:08 +0000 UTC]

I think.. That boy wouldn't do anything anymore (6)
When you're ready, I gonna read it <#

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to Unknown-Diva [2010-11-11 15:41:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad he won't (otherwise i'll kick his a*s personaly!!) but i seriously would.. *insertswearinghere*
soo i'm gonna upload my next chapter this friday.. sorry for the waiting

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Unknown-Diva In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-11 17:22:47 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't matter. I gonna read that chapter... tomorrow. As soon as I can xD

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LexLight92 [2010-11-07 20:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Gotta love the LukeXFlora moment.
PS: Very good!

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xxLaytonxLukexx In reply to LexLight92 [2010-11-07 20:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.. finally they've got a moment
Thank you so much for reading and commenting again!

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LexLight92 In reply to xxLaytonxLukexx [2010-11-07 20:20:18 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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