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Published: 2006-11-27 00:36:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 70; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Oh, how time serves no justice - distance no mercy. "If only." I am forever captivated by your lonely spirit. As for mine - what is this you speak of? Something long ago lost and forgotten, burried at sea - my bloody heart devoured by the lurking sharks. Only bits are left as evidence that a whole had ever existed - only bits regergitated in pity. Mornful I wait now for this lonely spirit to come along. Take it as a whole - give it not back, but keep it. May I die in your arms - my last breath in your embrace.Related content
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Heh... interesting analogy... O.o Thanks though
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interesting peice
love the opening line though;
"Oh, how time serves no justice - distance no mercy"
very captivating
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Don't ya just love it when inspiration strikes, and you have to write like mad?
The beginning and end sound like longing for someone, but the middle sounds regretful.
(I think I just over analyze things ^^)
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Perhaps there was too much feeling behind the few lines in order to have it make sense... lol Longing for someone they should have waited for from the beginning... Already they have been through the pain of love, and now they are waiting for that one, the one that they will die with... something like that anyway... short on time, sorry lol
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