HOME | DD
Xyralis β popsicle COnsume
Published: 2018-07-06 20:09:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 545; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
I JUST REALIZDEE THE CANVAS IS SUPER SMALL OOPS i forgot to resize it beforehand lmaoi really wanna learn good lineart so i tried this out ;__; ended up painting over it anyways OOPSΒ
im super on a art block but this pretty much willed it away so i think i can work on my next & last AT!! yeet
edit: me, realizing i never posted this monkaS
Related content
Comments: 13
Vision:
This piece just screams color!! I love how you chose these neon, summery colors. It totally fits with the overall look! The red hair that the girl has contrasts nicely with the background. I think that you captured the feeling of "summer" very well in this piece.
Originality:
I think that this stands out among your art because it's one of the few that includes humans. Of course, that isn't to say that it's lesser or better in any way - but I digress. The way that you captured the bright green in their eyes as well was very striking!
Technique:
I will be completely honest here and say that I LOVE your painting style. It is cleanly rendered while still maintaining that painted look. A few things that did stand out to me was how her left arm seems to be much more cleanly defined than the rest of her lower body and perhaps even her face - which can be attributed to your experimenting with lineart. One of the other things I noted was how her nose seems to blend into her face (it's still better than the noses I paint), and doesn't have the same amount of contrast that is supplied in the rest of the painting. Paired with the brightness of her eyes, looking at her face is a little difficult for me (although that might just be because my eyes are weak.) I also love how you rendered the perspective of the painting! It stays consistent while also being expressive.
Impact:
Honestly,, it's just really good. This painting makes me want to go to my fridge and eat some ice cream!
General: In general, this painting is really good. Print-worthy, even! Although before we reach that step, I think that bringing out more contrast in the skin by darkening darks and adding some solid white highlights could definitely make this painting pop! Overall, I think that your attempt to add clean and solid lineart to this piece worked well! I look forward to more works uwu
π: 0 β©: 0
Simply amazing! The Perspective is good, the porpotion of the drawing are perfect!Β
You combined the soft shade really good but, some places need a bit more attention/detailing,
but all in all it's a good start you made here. You shaded the hair very well, refering the skin and clothes, you
could have add a bit more cell shading to it, to make everything more consistent and detailed. You are on a good way, I hope you won't understand my critic wrong.Β These are only little suggestions
for youΒ οΏΌ
The blue color tone on the whole art with the white lighting was a nice mix. It shows the depths of the image so well.
The blue sky and sea background with the white clouds are so engaging. It gives a positive view on the image. I also love how you make the meeting point of the sea and sky.
π: 0 β©: 1
yeaah, there are definitely some hings i could improve- thank you for the critque! i'm glad you liked my little piece of art
π: 0 β©: 0
I DON'T KNOW REALLY honestly lmao
BUT THANKS!!!!! yeet
π: 0 β©: 0
what the FUUUUUUUUUUUCK
FLORA HOW IN THE DING DONG CHING CHONG IS YOUR ART SO GODDAMN GOOD
LIKE HOLY FUCK INSTA NUT
also i love that title
inhale popsicle
c o n s u m e i c e
π: 0 β©: 1
ssuususgghshskw yes inhalation popsicle thank You ;_;
π: 0 β©: 0
THANK UU!! your art is super rad too tho ;__;
π: 0 β©: 0