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wiloyn [2011-04-03 19:23:31 +0000 UTC]
T~T
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Galiexb [2011-03-21 18:16:28 +0000 UTC]
I really love how you color your comic it's nice to look at
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Yakalentos In reply to Galiexb [2011-03-21 18:19:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you like it. ;3
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Star-Swirls [2011-03-21 10:04:36 +0000 UTC]
Woah indead!
Powerful attack! >:3
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Mort-Adhara In reply to Yakalentos [2011-03-21 05:48:02 +0000 UTC]
On the spot, so to say... Welcome >w<
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Jamiefury [2011-03-20 18:59:10 +0000 UTC]
i love seeing your drawings because they are pretty cool how you done the style of them !
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MaxwellPettit [2011-03-20 17:15:17 +0000 UTC]
lol "Give it Back!!!" :3
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DarkPhe0nix [2011-03-20 13:13:47 +0000 UTC]
these are very well drawn comics.I like the first panel with Umbreon in it.the colouring is amazing
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Electric-Raichu [2011-03-20 09:11:18 +0000 UTC]
Phew. I've just finished reading all 63 pages!
This is lovely work. You're improving as you go on, too. I liked the shading and graphics on the last row.
The storyline is not bad, but at the moment there doesn't seem to be a strong plot to it. I think you need to work on that a bit. There are loose ends which is the only reason it still has my attention.
Aside from that, I enjoyed reading it. Please give us the next installment soon!
BTW Why don't you submit it to some groups, like draw-em-all ([link] ) and poke-fanclub ([link] )? That way you'll get more readers and also more feedback.
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Yakalentos In reply to Electric-Raichu [2011-03-20 09:30:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And yeah, I know about the problem with the storyline. I tried doing all the plotting before starting the comic, but the story changed as more and more pages were made. XD
Funny, I thought of submitting some of the pages to those groups the other day. I'll be sure to use that advice!
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Electric-Raichu In reply to Yakalentos [2011-03-20 09:58:04 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... yes you need to be careful of that. Sometimes you do get ideas along the way, but you have to judge them carefully.
Sometimes you can take advantage of the idea and use it to improve the story. Other times, the idea will change the plot so much that it will detract from the ultimate resolution or theme you have in mind, no matter how good the idea is.
Basically, you need to learn how to decide what to do with each flash of inspiration you get. Harness it for the benefit of your story, or put it aside for another day if it will harm the story. You, the author, need to stay in control.
Hope this helps!
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Yakalentos In reply to Electric-Raichu [2011-03-20 20:20:48 +0000 UTC]
Some wise words from the experienced artist. It sure will help, thanks a lot!
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Yakalentos In reply to Electric-Raichu [2011-03-21 17:20:32 +0000 UTC]
From what I have seen.. (aka Pokemon Life) at least a decent artist. 👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Yakalentos In reply to ShinshiaNeko [2011-03-20 08:57:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I think this is my best as well. ;3
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starfire-wolf [2011-03-20 02:57:30 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, pages 62 and 63 had so much action in them xD
I loved that last 2 panels on pg 62 and 63- they have so much movement in them :'D
You're great at doing action scenes c:
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ParodyHam [2011-03-20 02:49:42 +0000 UTC]
Wow!! The final panel is spectacular! Actually, the entire comic is awesome this time especially! ^_^
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MildDestruction [2011-03-19 23:41:31 +0000 UTC]
Ooo the pretty eyelashes! XD I cant wait for next page!
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maru--ato [2011-03-19 23:01:36 +0000 UTC]
Action!!!!
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AoZune [2011-03-19 21:52:05 +0000 UTC]
I really love the bottom right expression , and what a wonderful shading , perfectly accorded to the expression x3
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Yakalentos In reply to AoZune [2011-03-20 08:58:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you x3
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AoZune In reply to Yakalentos [2011-03-20 14:27:52 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome :3
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Lonelysoul45 [2011-03-19 20:36:48 +0000 UTC]
YAY!!!! MISSION ACCOMPLISHED
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BlueLightningStrike [2011-03-19 20:12:30 +0000 UTC]
You're fairly good at making these comics. XD
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