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Songal [2018-09-18 02:31:47 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on reaching this in one more page!!
Trust and its many forms
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YamaDoragon In reply to Songal [2018-09-18 06:22:50 +0000 UTC]
Correction: pages. These updates are not a single page, but multiple pages put together. The number in the title stands for the page numbers.
Also I'm not quite sure why you're talking about trust in this particular update
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Songal In reply to YamaDoragon [2018-09-18 18:34:21 +0000 UTC]
*facepalms* I keep forgetting, sorry.
Maybe I'm just misinterpreting things I see then, sorry again.
It's all great no matter what my stupid brain decides to write
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YamaDoragon In reply to Songal [2018-09-19 09:04:56 +0000 UTC]
Having own interpretations are fine as I've made some things very vague, but you didn't quite explain what exactly made you talk about "trust" and why.
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Songal In reply to YamaDoragon [2018-09-19 20:52:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh.
Well I guess how Sari, even though she still holds her knife to the Devil Bat, follows it without real question.
And how Lulu just trusts these two men to lead them to Sari, but from what I've seen she's kinda at her last resorts
And of course Remu's trust in his wolves.
That's the best I can type out.
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YamaDoragon In reply to Songal [2018-09-20 06:32:46 +0000 UTC]
Hold on, now I'm confused about your interpretation of Sari's situation, your statement "holds her knife to the devil bat" doesn't make any sense to me.
Sari's knife holds certain symbolism (I love doing symbolism in my stories): she used that knife to remove the bridle from Peikko when she left him, and in the face of (assumed) danger she raises it against a beast, thinking that only one of them can leave that situation alive - yet, she falters and leaves the knife behind her when she chases that same beast.
As for Lulu letting the two miners guide her and Remu following his wolves in order to find Sari, there isn't really that big theme of "trust" hidden there - it's all just so the story and characters could get to certain crucial point.
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YamaDoragon In reply to Songal [2018-09-20 14:15:02 +0000 UTC]
You mean the devil bat Sari encountered at the lake?
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Songal In reply to YamaDoragon [2018-09-20 14:21:12 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was the one in the cave? Okay now I'm really confused.
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YamaDoragon In reply to Songal [2018-09-20 14:34:45 +0000 UTC]
...does it look like a devil bat to you?
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Songal In reply to YamaDoragon [2018-09-20 19:52:06 +0000 UTC]
I guess it did...
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YamaDoragon In reply to Songal [2018-09-20 21:44:27 +0000 UTC]
Even though devil bats are red, have wings and look like bats - and this creature lacks all these characteristics?
I am just really baffled by how you confused this creature with the bats.
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Songal In reply to YamaDoragon [2018-09-21 04:05:36 +0000 UTC]
Guess it was in the face.
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Songal In reply to YamaDoragon [2018-09-21 12:43:46 +0000 UTC]
Sorry. I guess I just thought it was a subspecies or that Sari saw the similarities.
What can I do to fix my mistakes?
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YamaDoragon In reply to Songal [2018-09-21 15:26:34 +0000 UTC]
You don't need to do anything. At least you realize now they're different.
Though, I have some concerns how much you even understand the story if you thought this character was a bat...
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Songal In reply to YamaDoragon [2018-09-21 20:23:52 +0000 UTC]
Yeah.
Like I said, I thought it was because it looked similar, that's all.
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Songal In reply to YamaDoragon [2018-09-24 13:08:35 +0000 UTC]
Some thing are similar but yes I know they are different.
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