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YamiUmiRyu — Late B-Day to Me: Mental Break

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Description This was a rant made two days before my birthday, while a friend of my was rotting my mind worst than TV and probably beat out Joker's "Literary Torture." I just got pissed off royally just hearing all the crap one of acquainatences have caused. Below is my essay.

WARNING: Read description only at your own risk. Contains unsuitable materials for Yu-Gi-Oh! and Pokemon fans that may enduce nausea, vomiting, ulcer, stroke, heart attack, respriatory arrest, and bleeding in the eyes; and may enduce mental instabilities that include death in brain cells, mental shatter, desire to be blind, desire to gouge eyes out, and thirst to go on homicidal manias. This deviant is not responsible for the side effects listed above or other related side effects. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.

[Anonymous, known as Dead] had desired many things, most of which has come undone if not even starting. I myself had the experience but I needed some other opinions. Gema J. Gall was great help. She has had the “pleasure” of involvement for several projects, including a Yu-Gi-Oh!/Inu-Yasha crossover (which had never found it’s place in the popular fanfiction.net). As authoress, she had laid out the rules. One being no Original Characters, meaning the casts based by both Takahashi’s alone. [Dead] was not amused and threw tantrum of the said rule. After several days he had tried again, authoress asked him to make a plot. ….The only plot was a grave.

As co-author, [Dead] is in his own little world. He has no idea what lies beneath the image of characters. In fact, interpretation is so poor the Yu-Gi-Oh! Rating would jump from PG to R. Within experience from Gema J. Gall, he had forgotten everything of Tea and Rebecca’s love for Yugi and has turned rivalry over to a different character, an Original Character no less, and causes tension between both Tea and Rebecca. He has forgotten that Seto Kaiba, in character, is a reserved and determined duelist who will take charge at anything that he sees needs his attention and would more rather bust in and do what he needs than make random threats hoping that’ll come to pass his desires. He has forgotten other character personalities; Mai suddenly becomes over-protective of his Original Character, Joey suddenly takes insults from Original Character lying down, and everyone makes way for said Original Character to be the hero.

Original character from [Dead] is [Deadman]. [Deadman] only appears as a modest character, if one were to draw him right off the bat. However, just like every other character, his story runs deep. Associating with the cast of Yu-Gi-Oh!, [Deadman] has left some horrid marks that could forever scar the characters and their personalities. In placement, he is Mai’s cousin. [Deadman]’s involvement was with that of the female cast. [Deadman] has made out with everyone but Ishizu, and has become the rope in tug-o-war between Rebecca and Tea, with both of them forgetting all about their prior loves, Yugi and his pharaoh partner. [Deadman] also has wheeling as matchmaker, pairing characters with others and inevitably destroying the pair. Continuing on, [Deadman] was selected as the Millennium Key’s bearer after Shadi could no longer hold it for no reason at all. In the universe, [Deadman] would have considered being abusive of his Millennium Item, using it in confrontation he had no business in. In an unpublished event, Shayla, Gema J. Gall’s original character, should have confronted her mother herself; Shayla’s mother denies being the parent in question. Instead, [Deadman] steps in and tries to use the Millennium Key to try and show Shayla’s mother that she is lying. (Ever stop to consider that Shayla’s mother is lying intentionally?) As any character in the Yu-Gi-Oh! universe, [Deadman] was a duelist. His deck was a beatdown deck, using all powerhouses from Kaiba’s, Yugi’s, and Joey’s decks among others: deck built includes Alpha the Magnet Warrior, Baby Dragon, Battle Ox, Beta the Magnet Warrior, Celtic Guardian, Dark Magician, Dark Magician Girl, Gaia the Fierce Knight, Gamma the Magnet Warrior, Mystical Elf, Red-Eyes Black Dragon, Summoned Skull, Vorse Raider, Big Shield Gardna, Copycat, Gearfried the Iron Knight, Goblin Attack Force, Time Wizard and, Witch of the Black Forest. Magic Cards are Change of Heart, Dark Hole, Harpie's Feather Duster, Monster Reborn, Mystical Space Typhoon, Polymerization, Pot of Greed, Raigeki and Swords of Revealing Light. Trap Cards include Kunai With Chain, Magic Cylinder, Mirror Force, Negate Attack, Seven Tools of the Bandit, Spellbinding Circle and Trap Hole. [Deadman]’s arsenal included a fifth Blue-Eyes White Dragon. –We all know there were only four cards created with that title right? So where did that one come from? His father, where did HE get that?— As a person physically, [Deadman] is an agile character. For his young age and height of 5’3” he is able to perfectly imitate Johnny Cage and strong enough to out muscle Bandit Keith and Joey Wheeler. Personality-wise, [Deadman] is either the hero to all praise, or the victim to all sympathize so long as he is perpetually in the spotlight.

[Dead] has attempted a pokémon idea while in co-authorship with Gema, which included characters actually catching the legendaries and using them. And using his self-inserted character, [Walking Corpse], to claim rights to the Legendary Bird pokémon, honestly it’s the excuse to actually use Ho-Oh. Other wrongs include making Cassidy of the second Team Rocket Duo a child rapist, and forcing another pairing between and original character and a canon, Shayla and Brock.

My experience with [Dead] can be summed up as well. I have a Yu-Gi-Oh! GX fiction in the works that he had ATTEMPTED to co-author. His progress was virtually fruitless as he only provided false images of grandeur and little ideal. As far as progress, he only came up with “Jade” and “Harrison.” I created Jade Llora, a Ra Yellow Student using a Beast deck and has the coin-toss personality, kind and gentle, then vicious and merciless; and Harrison Wolfram, an Obelisk Blue student that wields a unique deck which limits the opponent’s effect monsters while strengthening his own Normal Monsters, and is one of Artemis Minh’s rivals as duelist and artist. Other non-contributions include the four sagas that are in line for the fiction: Neo Rare Hunters Saga, Luminita Saga, Noah Saga, and Shadow Realm Revival Saga. Despite his involuntary attitude, submissions of duelists have been entered from the readers, among them Iago Lark and Kokuro Samé.

Added: [Dead] will stop at nothing to make sure his characters have spotlight, even in the better ranks. While my co-author, [Dead] AGREED to have [Deadweight] be in Slifer Red. But then under the table, not only did he force an author to "volunteer" and submit his character, but [Dead] also stabbed me in the back while I was numb and turned [Deadweight] into Ra Yellow.

Character inquiry, [Deadweight]; just the same, in Yu-Gi-Oh! GX fanfiction, one [Deadweight] has a magician deck with a Dark Magician. In the world of Yu-Gi-Oh! Dark Magicians are very rare, and so shall they be rare in the Next Generation. [Deadweight] also becomes infatuation target for Rei, who was greatly a fan of Ryo Marufuji first. [Deadweight] has not done anything heroic or notable to bypass Ryo. [Deadweight] was provided with no past or the personality that makes him a plausible and believable character. More information cannot be provided due to co-authorship ending in dead halt.

Another detail of co-authorship was the failed idea of a Pokémon fiction using his character (name long-since forgotten). He would be the starting trainer, collecting badges—sounds like Ash Ketchum already—and after walking out of the Rustboro Gym with his StoneBadge and Treecko, the city is ablaze with Aqua and Magma’s gang war. In the fray [Dead]’s Original Character was saved by my own character, Keroku. Keroku has all of her badges but is making an effort of year-long training before facing the Elite Four. One way or another Keroku agrees to travel with this starting trainer (a.k.a. his guardian in Hoenn.) No further progress afterwards due to next fiction idea and leaving this one in the dust.

Zoids got no farther either.

In conclusion, [Dead] refuses to take into consideration ANYTHING. He does not take the research of what he plans to fan fiction for, nor does he take into consideration who the other, or his own, characters are. These are only a few examples of repeated occurrences that have occurred with these two authoresses and at least a dozen more on FF.N

This rant has used up its character limits to continue for Courageous Dragon Knight, B.K. (Before Kenyon); Yu-Gi-Oh Apocalypse and Pokemon Neo.
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Comments: 34

kuro-kai08 [2011-07-13 03:55:15 +0000 UTC]

lol

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sentan40 [2011-05-08 02:59:23 +0000 UTC]

she reminds he of the l4d witch

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to sentan40 [2011-05-08 08:02:45 +0000 UTC]

"You have disturbed the Witch...with your insane haxing!"

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LinzieFey [2009-05-27 19:40:19 +0000 UTC]

I have put this rant in to my fav's so that other artist's and OC creator's who out of boredom deside to go to my page would chek it out if not out of curyosity atleast out of boredom and understand how a sertain OC's attatude can get on people's bad side realy fast if sayd OC is a major Marry-Sue or Gary-Stu that has gonne far of the limit's of anoing ' perfection', I my self who has made ALL of my oln OC's akt like one big-fat-happy-family, blood conection or not can say that compare to that my own haven't gonne one inch near the line of being concidered a Marry-Sue or Gary-Stu, BUT that IS my own jugement on my OWN OC's I'll leave the desishion to tose who would show interest in cheking them out IF I deside to let the world know about them.
Whit that over I would say good-bye to you naw since this coment is getting WAY too long, so Good-Bye!
(P.S.: I guess you would have figured it out by naw, but i'm the worst speller I know.English isn't my mother-language)

chu! <3

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to LinzieFey [2009-05-27 23:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh this here? This rant is basically my summary of experience. If you want to see some of his trash firsthand, go to 's page and look for "Raw Bonds." They're RP excerpts that highlight how this idiot throws canon out of character farther than Superman can leap, and the original characters and how they act...excuse me while I crawl into a fetal position in a corner until the nightmares go away while I'm awake.

I swear, this guy had gone so far out of his way to leech off of fanfic writers and pissing THEM off that there is a coalition against him meant to hunt down and warn the future 'leeched' writers of his stupidity.

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LinzieFey In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2009-05-28 10:20:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm no expert but I can tell 'original' from 'snobish', and what he show's as his OC is definetly snobish, no ofence to respektive creator who is probably a lil ku-ku him self(no ill will intendet)
On witch side of her galery do you find the "Raw Bonds"?

chu! <3

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to LinzieFey [2009-05-30 05:15:53 +0000 UTC]

it's near the beginning, when you first open up the gallery and see all those pics of Korea, hit the fourth page link on the bottom.

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LinzieFey In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2011-11-04 16:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Ok, dude. I just checked out my own 2009 comment on this RANT and was like:

OHMYGOSH I spelled bad! xD
Anyway, my opinion on this stays still. I don't believe an OC like [Deadman,-weight,-whatever] should be allowed to exist.

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to LinzieFey [2011-11-04 20:43:51 +0000 UTC]

lol funny how I'm not the only one who looks back on own ancient work and cringe for stuff that to us now seem like common sense to avoid or whatever. I know I feel like that with my more ancient photoshops.

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LinzieFey In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2011-11-04 20:53:03 +0000 UTC]

True.
I look at works of mine I used to think was epic and go: Holly ****!
xD

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to LinzieFey [2011-11-05 03:14:04 +0000 UTC]

As per this idiot he has been completely removed from my acknowledgement of existence and I give my regards to anyone who has the misfortune of being his next victim.

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LinzieFey In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2011-11-05 09:54:28 +0000 UTC]

*nods* Best way to go :]

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LinzieFey In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2011-11-04 20:52:21 +0000 UTC]

True.
I look at works of mine I used to think was epic and go: Holly ****!
xD

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sorenfan777 [2009-02-08 04:05:51 +0000 UTC]

I made it all the way to the end of the Yu-Gi-Oh Rant!!
I am a little scared and tired now XD
EPIC WIN ranting XD

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to sorenfan777 [2009-02-08 09:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Scared you should be. I died a lot inside with these experiences. I'm sure others with similar can share the same.

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sorenfan777 In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2009-02-08 16:21:17 +0000 UTC]

indeed

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Dynamoe [2008-06-02 00:21:26 +0000 UTC]

I quit watching Pokemon when Misty left You'd think by now Ash would be in his mid 20's and Pikachu would have died of old age.

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to Dynamoe [2008-06-02 20:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Aaaah I think Pika's far from it. Remember Pooka in the surfing episode?

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Dynamoe In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2008-06-02 22:08:10 +0000 UTC]

Actually, no ;-(

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to Dynamoe [2008-06-03 00:25:04 +0000 UTC]

Well Pooka belongs to a surfer whose dream was to plant his flag on the highest leak of a rock like his idle...Pooka has to be at least 50 years old.

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Dynamoe In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2008-06-03 01:40:49 +0000 UTC]

I do remember that one now Pooka had a knack for sensing the waves

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YakasushiX [2008-05-20 01:36:43 +0000 UTC]

...i could only understand some of it...

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to YakasushiX [2008-05-20 01:55:29 +0000 UTC]

This is really just a LONG rant about what this idiot of the internet has done to destroy the fanfictions that are otherwise respectable. He is really the original character that completely alters the universe of which his character inhabits so he is the hero, idol, victim, and love interest.

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YakasushiX In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2008-05-20 19:04:03 +0000 UTC]

ok i think i understand it better now O-O

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Kimba13 [2008-04-02 20:10:50 +0000 UTC]

????
My mind stopped working.

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to Kimba13 [2008-04-03 00:07:47 +0000 UTC]

I truly apologize but you have been warned, this...excuse of scrapped organs thrown together has done nothing but leech and deceive what true creativity knows. I still need to properly destroy several images that this cosncience-deprived (insert own term, "human being" would be launched completely out of context here) conned me to do...by means of a 45-lb pull compound bow.

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Kimba13 In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2008-04-04 18:59:16 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhhhhhh!I understand most of what ya said,but I'm only 12.

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EccentricPapillon [2007-12-31 20:35:10 +0000 UTC]

My mind stopped working after paragraph three.

Help keep brain cells alive! Say 'no' to OCs that aren't thought out well!

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to EccentricPapillon [2007-12-31 23:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you as you have made my day! Finally it is not just Gemajgall and me who think the same way.

And thank you for the Anti-Hax slogan!

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EccentricPapillon In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2007-12-31 23:26:07 +0000 UTC]

It seriously did! I felt way more stupid after reading what that guy did than before I read it! But, hey. You warned me. Did I listen...? Nooo...

And, no problem. I'm an avid Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu hater, so, hey. It works.

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YamiUmiRyu In reply to EccentricPapillon [2008-01-02 03:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Which leads me to ask. which third paragraph? The third paragraph of the essay after the warning or the third paragraph of the entire description--the first after the warning?

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EccentricPapillon In reply to YamiUmiRyu [2008-01-02 03:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Third after the warning.

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gemajgall [2007-04-11 15:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Completely sad but completely true. And you didn't even mention half of what he's done...

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DarkEmbrace219 [2007-02-27 23:35:21 +0000 UTC]

...?
wth?
lol
j/k

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