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Description give me crits plz

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Comments: 16

phyrexianrevoker [2013-05-26 19:57:22 +0000 UTC]

If you could add something to this, I would say make the temple look older.
A lot of time passed, since plants have been growing everywhere.
Try to make it look like ruins.

Also, the roots of the trees will force the structure, causing cracks.

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phatpandax3 [2010-11-08 07:25:31 +0000 UTC]

love the textures! the lighting is handled beautifully in my opinion

there's just one little detail that bothers me though, the one squiggle near the upper left area. it looks too much like a mcdonald shaped squiggle instead of some nice dense foliage

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yefumm In reply to phatpandax3 [2010-11-08 07:50:04 +0000 UTC]

yea i see it, ill get right on it

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Nin-jueTheKirin [2010-11-08 06:39:52 +0000 UTC]

i'm likin' where this is going

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yefumm In reply to Nin-jueTheKirin [2010-11-08 06:52:31 +0000 UTC]

is THAT right?

what can i fix?

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Nin-jueTheKirin In reply to yefumm [2010-11-08 07:08:45 +0000 UTC]

a hint more contrast between the closest pillar and the yellow glow

something to make it "pop"

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yefumm In reply to Nin-jueTheKirin [2010-11-08 07:49:46 +0000 UTC]

ok ill keep that in mind, but i want to keep to focus on the statue

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Nin-jueTheKirin In reply to yefumm [2010-11-08 07:53:29 +0000 UTC]

well true, so only do it a tad

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yefumm In reply to Nin-jueTheKirin [2010-11-08 08:12:31 +0000 UTC]

yea it helped

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Nin-jueTheKirin In reply to yefumm [2010-11-08 08:18:33 +0000 UTC]

yay!

what happens if you do the same at the corners?...

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yefumm In reply to Nin-jueTheKirin [2010-11-08 08:55:08 +0000 UTC]

i dunno
letss seeeee

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griffsnuff [2010-11-08 04:52:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow that is some really great light D8 <3

I love the color choices for this, it would be even more awesome if you added dark blues the closer you get to the foreground as long as you have used so much orange

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yefumm In reply to griffsnuff [2010-11-08 04:53:42 +0000 UTC]

yea thats what i was thinking, ill put in some.
thanks.

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Emodnet [2010-11-08 04:43:23 +0000 UTC]

wow thats super cool, i love the lighting, but i especially love the plants growing and engulfing the ruins

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Outofthepicture [2010-11-08 04:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Love the concept and the feel. Colors sweet too. Perhaps a little more dark in the right-downish corner would have made the light in the back, where the statue is, more prominent. Anyway nice work.

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yefumm In reply to Outofthepicture [2010-11-08 04:52:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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