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Published: 2006-08-07 21:26:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 2002; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 25
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Description Model: Mariya
Lens: Nikkor 18-70 mm 3.5-4.5G ED-IF AF-S DX (say that ten times fast)

I wanted to try an outdoor portrait, so I asked my friend to model for me in a nearby meadow. There isn't much grassy land there that isn't covered with layer upon layer of beautiful and itchy flowers and plants, but I did manage to find this little spot, so I told her to lie down and she cheerfully complied. By the end of the shoot, she was covered in soil, bitten by at least three different species of insects, and had a genuine flesh wound on her leg. My job here is done.

Please give critical feedback! Tell me what I'm doing wrong
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Comments: 58

Hedniskhjartad [2008-07-08 23:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Amazing composition.

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yevgeny In reply to Hedniskhjartad [2008-07-20 05:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I don't think there's anything amazing about it, but it's nice to hear anyway

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Hedniskhjartad In reply to yevgeny [2008-07-20 08:43:38 +0000 UTC]

No! I really think you made a great choice with how far left the model is. It works so well.

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rio8807 [2008-06-23 07:24:01 +0000 UTC]

wow really nice ^___^ i love the eyes and the focus is great O___O

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yevgeny In reply to rio8807 [2008-06-26 05:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ill23 [2007-01-01 20:11:10 +0000 UTC]

wow!! yes!!! her eyes!!!! O_O

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yevgeny In reply to ill23 [2007-01-02 06:24:19 +0000 UTC]

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omgitsralu [2006-12-04 23:30:46 +0000 UTC]

wow
you can actually see the clouds in her eyes!
amazing shot.
its really calm, but like exciting id say
i wouldnt change anything about it

good job

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yevgeny In reply to omgitsralu [2007-01-02 06:24:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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SucieDesigns [2006-11-12 21:32:49 +0000 UTC]

An unusual but successful angle. I love the reflections in her eyes.

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yevgeny In reply to SucieDesigns [2006-11-13 03:47:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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bigshotdan [2006-11-05 11:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Tell you what you're doing wrong?! Not much!

If anything, I'd say there's marginally too much light on Mariya's face. That's about it, and it may be down to the camera's metering, given the dark surrounds. One thing that brightness gives, though, is a wonderful look straight into her eyes. The colours are superb. Nice work!

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yevgeny In reply to bigshotdan [2006-11-05 22:40:50 +0000 UTC]

I was going for the highlight on her face on purpose, because that's the whole focus of the shot. But I think I see what's bothering you: The three almost-white spots, two on her cheeks and one between her forehead and nose? Those bother me, too. Next time, I suppose I'll have to get some reflectors and diffusers on set. (Or just use the burn tool in Photoshop. )

Thank you so much for the feedback!

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bigshotdan In reply to yevgeny [2006-11-06 13:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Pleasure - and you hit the nail on the head; it's just those 'ghostly' white parts that are slightly distracting. Otherwise, no dramas!

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kenjified [2006-10-09 15:41:35 +0000 UTC]

you know what i like abou yours. everything matches so perfectly. even tho it has a darker aura about it, everything in it fits very well. from the type of shrubbery, to the color of the grass, the color of the dress, the exopsure, the color of her hair but what i think works best is the bright reflection in her eyes. that just makes the entire picture come together!

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yevgeny In reply to kenjified [2006-10-10 17:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. Glad you liked this one too!

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Trisha-T [2006-10-08 18:25:22 +0000 UTC]

i love the angle and the colors...very nicely done.

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yevgeny In reply to Trisha-T [2006-10-08 19:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Trisha-T In reply to yevgeny [2006-10-09 00:34:51 +0000 UTC]

your welcome.

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narabia [2006-10-01 10:36:23 +0000 UTC]

all is done well here - nice composition, good exposure and light, lovely colors

.... contrary to your [link]

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yevgeny In reply to narabia [2006-10-01 20:36:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I'm learning! (I hope. ) Feedback is always helpful!

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ratulangi [2006-09-04 13:22:16 +0000 UTC]

luv it ...

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yevgeny In reply to ratulangi [2006-09-04 17:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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java-jim [2006-09-04 11:14:06 +0000 UTC]

As far as I can say, you did everything right
I like the dark tones of the hair and the environment which contrast with the skin. Also the juicy green is very nice!

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yevgeny In reply to java-jim [2006-09-04 17:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I appreciate the feedback!

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java-jim In reply to yevgeny [2006-09-04 20:30:50 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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NessaLuinwe [2006-09-03 19:09:26 +0000 UTC]

I love this.. ! Great colours, nice model..

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yevgeny In reply to NessaLuinwe [2006-09-03 23:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And, yes, she is

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NessaLuinwe In reply to yevgeny [2006-09-05 13:12:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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s15jesusfreak [2006-09-03 19:06:09 +0000 UTC]

A very interesting pose; great eyes! ^.^

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yevgeny In reply to s15jesusfreak [2006-09-03 23:01:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you She has to take credit for the eyes, though!

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s15jesusfreak In reply to yevgeny [2006-09-04 01:36:46 +0000 UTC]

well yes, but you captured them! ^.^

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yevgeny In reply to s15jesusfreak [2006-09-04 01:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Yesss, I captured them, and now they are mine! Gleeheehe

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s15jesusfreak In reply to yevgeny [2006-09-04 03:29:59 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Aderet [2006-09-03 18:05:22 +0000 UTC]

Very Nice Angle!!!!
I love it

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yevgeny In reply to Aderet [2006-09-03 18:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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mitatos [2006-09-03 17:59:24 +0000 UTC]

ooooo mariyaaaaaaaaa mariyaaaaaaa

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yevgeny In reply to mitatos [2006-09-03 18:44:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure what that's a reference to, but, in Russian, there's a famous folk song called "Kalinka Malinka," so when I read your comment I immediately thought of singing it with the words "Mariya Mariya"

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mitatos In reply to yevgeny [2006-09-03 18:54:41 +0000 UTC]

hhahah , yea i know about that song it was in the game tetris i think hihiihhi , but i also know the song Mariya mariya , and ur mariya in
pic its a very good looking women i fellt in love for the first seight

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yevgeny In reply to mitatos [2006-09-03 23:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Actually the song in Tetris is called "Korobushka" but close enough

Thank you for the compliments, I'll be sure to relay them to the model

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mitatos In reply to yevgeny [2006-09-04 01:07:36 +0000 UTC]

noooo it is kalinka i remember that and it starts faster and faster

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yevgeny In reply to mitatos [2006-09-04 01:47:38 +0000 UTC]

No, it's Korobushka Alternately spelled Korobeiniki: [link]

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mitatos In reply to yevgeny [2006-09-04 15:57:56 +0000 UTC]

see this link: [link]
its of the game Tetris the name of the song is Kalinka (TOD Remix) hahah but nevermind
take care

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yevgeny In reply to mitatos [2006-09-04 17:34:55 +0000 UTC]

Ahh that's a different Tetris. The original had different music. Oh well. Cheers!

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mitatos In reply to yevgeny [2006-09-04 18:18:42 +0000 UTC]

hahhaa ok cheers KALINKA

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Muskeg [2006-08-20 04:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Very nice image. I like the reflections in her eyes.

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yevgeny In reply to Muskeg [2006-08-20 05:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Compliments of quantum electrodynamics.

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mrru [2006-08-08 19:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Her eyes are natural.. mm i don't think so?
but i think that this effect is wonderful.
i have similar photo.

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yevgeny In reply to mrru [2006-08-08 19:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Actually, they are, I just increased contrast a little. No photomanipulation here.

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KsenKAT [2006-08-08 05:46:31 +0000 UTC]

Her eyes are beautiful, I love the pose! And the focus is amazing, I think this shot is perfect!

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