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Yo-Snap ā€” Constantine

Published: 2014-08-06 16:31:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 566; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 2
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Description Safe to say that I'm more proud of this one.
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Account--Moved [2014-12-25 16:36:10 +0000 UTC]

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We'll start with negative because there is not a whole lot wrong with this piece.
I can't really agree with the placement of Constantine's tail, I just don't feel like it should be THERE. I also feel like his bowtie shouldn't be to the side; but rather in the front. The big thing I didn't like is his chest area. It went from furry to smooth (due to his vest?) and the white spot there on what looks to be his arm just doesn't look right. The bottom half of this picture (chest & tail) are very confusing to me, because I had to put a lot of thought in to decipher what was what.

Now for the postive: I love his color scheme. They all go together quite nicely, and that's important, bdcause you wouldn't want him a colorful mess, being the mysterious looking fella he is. I absoulely love the design of his monocule. It's unique.. You did a magnificent job on the shading and the background. I love how you used contrast by highlighting the edge of his ears while they were against the black background to make it easy to decipher that his ears and the background were not one. Constantine has a facial expression that goes with his form, which I love. He has a very interesting design, he just catches my eye.

This is a very good piece of art. Almost Every little thing you did made him pop. He's absolutely gorgeous, and I just love love love what you did with him! Great job on this piece; I absolutely love it! Keep up the great work! I look forward to seeing more from you e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Yo-Snap In reply to Account--Moved [2014-12-25 17:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the critique!!! This is actually the very first one I've ever gotten! So thanks!

I can see what you mean by the negative stuff about the piece. I guess I need to work on the way that I portray specific poses in characters then. Thanks!

I'm happy that you think I made it pop! I like to know when I did an okay job at doing that with I need to have be the focal points of a piece.

The detail is all KiruKrono 's! Here's the original picture that he was drawn in:Ā Clockwork Ā (Beautiful, isn't it?)

Again, thank you for the critique! It's very much appreciated!!!

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Account--Moved In reply to Yo-Snap [2014-12-25 18:33:02 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I may critique more of your work ^^

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DeanAndClark [2015-02-20 02:18:25 +0000 UTC]

COOL!

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Yo-Snap In reply to DeanAndClark [2015-02-20 02:19:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy you think so!

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DeanAndClark In reply to Yo-Snap [2015-02-20 02:37:42 +0000 UTC]

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b1k [2014-11-01 11:54:12 +0000 UTC]

It's cool and cute!

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Yo-Snap In reply to b1k [2014-11-01 13:08:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy you think so!

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IrishBeckyCartoons [2014-08-09 15:41:52 +0000 UTC]

The shading turned out perfect! And I love the black and white/shadowy effect.

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Yo-Snap In reply to IrishBeckyCartoons [2014-08-09 21:46:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it!

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Crosslock2 [2014-08-07 00:14:04 +0000 UTC]

Look, it's him again

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Yo-Snap In reply to Crosslock2 [2014-08-07 00:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Indeed!

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KiruKrono [2014-08-06 20:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Ah! he looks amazing!

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Yo-Snap In reply to KiruKrono [2014-08-06 20:38:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy you think so!

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BlueWolf62128 [2014-08-06 17:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Aww man I want that monocle. XD

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Yo-Snap In reply to BlueWolf62128 [2014-08-06 18:12:36 +0000 UTC]

It's so cool!

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NirvanaInKarma [2014-08-06 17:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Put this fellow in a Sly Cooper game and he'll fit right in

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Yo-Snap In reply to NirvanaInKarma [2014-08-06 17:45:15 +0000 UTC]

He's going to be part of another video game! I don't know if it's going to be a series or what... Actually, I don't really know anything about it.

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NirvanaInKarma In reply to Yo-Snap [2014-08-06 19:32:33 +0000 UTC]

Is it an indie project?

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Yo-Snap In reply to NirvanaInKarma [2014-08-06 20:06:50 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if anything any of us will do can be considered ANYTHING but "independent." We're all too busy for any of it to matter, anyhow.
I don't know when he's going to start the game. He said he had been playing around with coding and stuff earlier in the summer, but has been so busy recently that I haven't even been able to talk to him outside of dA.

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NirvanaInKarma In reply to Yo-Snap [2014-08-06 20:08:34 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully it takes off one day.

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8OV [2014-08-06 17:36:44 +0000 UTC]

the lighting in the background and the shading on the character work sooooooooooooo well together. love it when you do this kinda shading.

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Yo-Snap In reply to 8OV [2014-08-06 17:44:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it!

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Undead-turtle [2014-08-06 16:32:30 +0000 UTC]

You should be, it's awesome! ^^

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Yo-Snap In reply to Undead-turtle [2014-08-06 16:33:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy you think so!

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Undead-turtle In reply to Yo-Snap [2014-08-06 16:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, you're very welcome. ^^

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