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A la campagne, près du Havre
11/08/2010

Traitement HDR :
Photoshop CS5

Photographie :
Canon EOS 1000D
HDR 3 expos

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Comments: 19

majhul [2012-03-25 18:15:37 +0000 UTC]

As someone who has been doing HDR for a while now, my critique of this pic is as follows:

1. Compositionally, it too lopsided. You could perhaps try and perspective correct it in PS.
2. The church is also not properly vertical.
3. The sky looks too unnatural, and looks like a layer or a replacement sky and detracts from the architecture.
4. Get Photomatix Pro or a dedicated HDR app if you really want to do HDR
5. I would have placed myself further back to take the shot to get more of the site in the pic and then cropped it down.
6. Your HDR process hasn't pulled out enough detail in the church, particularly in the shadow areas.

Did you do 3 handheld exposures or on a tripod? If they were handheld, pic your best exposure and create two more +/-1 and then reprocess.

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Yoshituro In reply to majhul [2012-03-25 19:36:36 +0000 UTC]

I admit that I was very amateur at this moment
I had 3 exp + tripod.

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majhul In reply to Yoshituro [2012-03-25 19:46:43 +0000 UTC]

No prob. I am happy to help. Keep trying. How are you setting exposure?

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Yoshituro In reply to majhul [2012-03-25 22:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Hum, manually, directly on the camera.

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Lankie [2010-09-01 01:49:08 +0000 UTC]

This is a fantastic shot, I really love it

The vivid colours, especially the sky but also the green of the tree and the flowers are very well caught. However, on the flipside I personally think the contrast on the building itself is too high. I find the tower quite a jarring subject because of the dark brickwork. Also, I have to say the tilt of the building annoys me for some reason, it looks like it is unintentional as it is only a little off-kilter.

That said it is a beautiful pic

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Yoshituro In reply to Lankie [2010-09-01 07:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Waow. I thank you for your very detailled comment

I'm proud of the colors too, I think the contrast is good (sky, green, etc).
Thank you for your opinion
Yeah for the tilt, you are right It could be better if I kept my tripod but... I haven't it this day

Thank you again

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Lankie In reply to Yoshituro [2010-09-01 13:05:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the beauty of this site, is that it is all subjective, so opinions abound
Glad to help a fellow photographer

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Yoshituro In reply to Lankie [2010-09-01 13:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah, you right

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euroxtc [2010-08-15 21:22:21 +0000 UTC]

I love the pink/purple flower in front of the Church.

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Yoshituro In reply to euroxtc [2010-08-16 08:30:40 +0000 UTC]

haha

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euroxtc In reply to Yoshituro [2010-08-16 11:08:50 +0000 UTC]

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Yoshituro In reply to euroxtc [2010-08-16 14:50:17 +0000 UTC]

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euroxtc In reply to Yoshituro [2010-08-16 18:18:28 +0000 UTC]

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Yoshituro In reply to euroxtc [2010-08-16 18:56:49 +0000 UTC]

HAAH

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euroxtc In reply to Yoshituro [2010-08-16 19:21:13 +0000 UTC]

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Anthoblack [2010-08-15 12:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Jolie petite Γ©glise ^^

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Yoshituro In reply to Anthoblack [2010-08-16 08:30:30 +0000 UTC]

^^

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psychnerd19 [2010-08-15 10:48:31 +0000 UTC]

j'aime beaucoup les couleurs

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Yoshituro In reply to psychnerd19 [2010-08-15 10:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Merci mon amie

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