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katy2516 [2020-12-09 01:48:35 +0000 UTC]
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kopelowitz [2016-08-28 03:47:02 +0000 UTC]
Aw poor baby! Idk why I'm just now reading this but I'm very exited to read more!!!Β
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YouAreCool10 In reply to kopelowitz [2016-08-28 21:16:11 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, I'm glad! XD I hope you keep enjoying it!
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Silencc10113 [2016-08-23 18:35:57 +0000 UTC]
You pull me in, and then a cliffhanger XD
A dangerous game, but looking forward to the next chapter :3
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Silencc10113 In reply to YouAreCool10 [2016-08-23 18:55:35 +0000 UTC]
It's true, this can't be denied XD
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YouAreCool10 In reply to Silencc10113 [2016-08-23 19:09:41 +0000 UTC]
THAT ICON IS LITERALLY MY LIFE! XD WATERMELON!
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Silencc10113 In reply to YouAreCool10 [2016-08-23 19:19:02 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL DAY
THEY GOT HELMETS ON THEIR HEADS
BUT I GOT A WATERMELOON INSTEAD.
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YouAreCool10 In reply to Silencc10113 [2016-08-23 19:33:14 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS LIFE SAVING!
HE ALMOST DROWNED WHILE OUT BOATING
BUT I'VE GOT A WATERMELON TO KEEP ME FLOATING!
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Silencc10113 In reply to YouAreCool10 [2016-08-25 15:59:16 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS RELAXING!
HE TOSSED AND TURNED TO THE SOUND OF THUNDER
BUT I GOT A WATERMELON TO SOOTHE MY SLUMBER!
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(I'm sorry, I am a quoting fool XD )
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YouAreCool10 In reply to Silencc10113 [2016-08-25 16:59:10 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS HYGIENIC!
SHE WASHES WITH PANTENE
BUT I'VE GOT WATERMELON TO KEEP ME CLEAN!
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(Hahaha, it's okay I'm doing it too XD)
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gabimello [2016-08-23 00:36:00 +0000 UTC]
Poor kid! Just going through a trauma conga line. Falling facedown into cement's gotta hurt...
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gabimello In reply to YouAreCool10 [2016-08-23 01:26:09 +0000 UTC]
I can see you're gonna give good old R.R. Martin a run for his moneyΒ Β
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nscmseiyaryu [2016-08-23 00:00:55 +0000 UTC]
Poor little guy, he's going to be feeling that in the morning.Β
Little con/crit, one sentence is repeated in the next paragraph below the first one.Β
Β "the human's hand crushed him against the human's chest. Oliver groaned in agony. His ribs ached and his lungs begged for oxygen. The human's hand retreated and Oliver greedily gulped for air. He hated this. He hated feeling so helpless, so pathetic."
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YouAreCool10 In reply to nscmseiyaryu [2016-08-23 00:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh year definitely.
Oopsie! Thanks for letting me know XD
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elise127 [2016-08-22 23:39:59 +0000 UTC]
This is really interesting!! I can't wait to see where this goes ^^
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