Comments: 29
sunshinegypsy [2012-02-06 08:04:32 +0000 UTC]
it shakes away
reasons to
sleep
it wakes to
great grief
Not only is this poem amazing and perfect with this picture... it's just exactly how I feel right now and I didn't really understand that until I read this. Sometimes you think things might be small and really they're just huge and you're looking too close.
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TwistedAlyx [2010-03-31 17:22:30 +0000 UTC]
Super cool.
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spoems [2010-03-27 19:48:32 +0000 UTC]
extremely cool!
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YouInventedMe In reply to spoems [2010-06-11 22:57:39 +0000 UTC]
thank you, shane2!
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gerohaki-akira [2010-03-24 12:42:04 +0000 UTC]
i like the title, plan it/planet, never thought of that one before.
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vampireempress [2010-03-24 06:27:29 +0000 UTC]
love it and love you! reminds me of some old journal (which is a little childish & clichΓ©:])[link]
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YouInventedMe In reply to Setzuo [2010-03-24 09:24:19 +0000 UTC]
haha. I'm sure you're being too hard on yourself,
but thanks.
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RUNNrabbitRUNN [2010-03-24 02:21:35 +0000 UTC]
excellent, i loved it thru and thru!
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YouInventedMe In reply to alapip [2010-03-24 09:26:23 +0000 UTC]
thank you, good sir.
I can always count on you for
a comment more elegant than my
submitted poem.
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alapip In reply to YouInventedMe [2010-03-24 14:11:56 +0000 UTC]
awww, just my need to say what i saw.
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hell-on-a-stick [2010-03-24 01:05:45 +0000 UTC]
YARG I IS COMING TO CONSUME THE COSMOS...
well put together
giggly
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BibliolepticAttack [2010-03-24 00:43:38 +0000 UTC]
"it wakes to great grief"
one day i'm going to steal that line.
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