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Description I want to move
to Miami

sip
Cuban coffee

scream love
at the rafters

make this
the beginning

of every new poem

I want to paint
a portrait

of a man
covered in rabbits

I will call it
'man covered in rabbits'

(it will revolutionize the art world)

I want to
want to
need to
breathe and
leave things be
when I believe
I need
the things
I want
before they're leaving
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Comments: 207

YouInventedMe In reply to ??? [2018-10-29 17:21:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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SonjaBrava [2011-06-14 17:13:53 +0000 UTC]

I want to move to Miami too.
Nice poem.

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YouInventedMe In reply to SonjaBrava [2011-08-26 23:30:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot.

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SonjaBrava In reply to YouInventedMe [2011-08-28 22:29:36 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome.

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EmmaSloane [2011-06-12 16:36:44 +0000 UTC]

so many undiscovered treasures here.
hope you found Miami.

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YouInventedMe In reply to EmmaSloane [2011-06-12 17:55:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you
and
thank you

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LNIN9 [2009-11-06 10:38:55 +0000 UTC]

for want of....

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YouInventedMe In reply to LNIN9 [2009-11-11 01:58:19 +0000 UTC]

of a want

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sumarlegur [2009-09-16 17:02:53 +0000 UTC]

I want to paint
a portrait

of a man
covered in rabbits

I will call it
'man covered in rabbits'

I don't know why, but I really liked this part.

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YouInventedMe In reply to sumarlegur [2009-09-16 17:08:25 +0000 UTC]

works for me

thanks

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vampireempress [2009-09-07 04:13:37 +0000 UTC]

i want to paint
a portrait
Shane
covered in rabbits

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YouInventedMe In reply to vampireempress [2009-09-10 21:52:28 +0000 UTC]

have at it! <3!!!

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LNIN9 [2009-08-29 03:15:44 +0000 UTC]

BAM!

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YouInventedMe In reply to LNIN9 [2009-08-29 03:27:04 +0000 UTC]

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speculum-reflections [2009-08-28 23:04:50 +0000 UTC]

just amazing. :]

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YouInventedMe In reply to speculum-reflections [2009-08-28 23:54:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

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Cibbwin [2009-08-23 21:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Your artist's comment is genius. And I definitley understand. I love the 'revolutionize the art world' bit, especially.

I'm always joking with friends that our bullshit will win Grammys and such.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Cibbwin [2009-08-23 22:12:40 +0000 UTC]

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EatingMyOwnFears [2009-08-17 03:25:28 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to EatingMyOwnFears [2009-08-17 23:17:48 +0000 UTC]

!

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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-08-18 03:50:48 +0000 UTC]

hehe I really like this

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Satah [2009-08-11 01:09:45 +0000 UTC]

"(it will revolutionize the art world)"
ahaha. i do not doubt it

wonderwonderWONDERFUL ending.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Satah [2009-08-11 02:58:55 +0000 UTC]

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mreid973 [2009-08-08 22:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Found through DLD. I like this because, in its straightforward simplicity, it speaks to anyone who has ever had artistic leanings -- regardless of whether or not these leanings are supported by talent. Well done.

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YouInventedMe In reply to mreid973 [2009-08-08 22:33:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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captain-radness [2009-08-08 06:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow. If everything was this genuine, I'd read more poetry.

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YouInventedMe In reply to captain-radness [2009-08-08 21:29:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

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luminousmoon [2009-08-07 20:40:10 +0000 UTC]

It reminds me of my best friend

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YouInventedMe In reply to luminousmoon [2009-08-08 04:16:32 +0000 UTC]

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Wackyjax [2009-08-07 16:44:48 +0000 UTC]

I love this piece. The last bit reminds me of song lyrics.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Wackyjax [2009-08-07 19:17:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Piscesandthediamonds [2009-08-06 05:14:59 +0000 UTC]

congrats on the DLD

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YouInventedMe In reply to Piscesandthediamonds [2009-08-07 19:09:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks, love

it's odd to be on the receiving
end of one

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Eloquent-Weapon [2009-08-05 16:25:53 +0000 UTC]

Shane, this is some of your best work. ever. IMO

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YouInventedMe In reply to Eloquent-Weapon [2009-08-07 19:00:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

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Eloquent-Weapon In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-08-22 08:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome.

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Formlessforce [2009-08-05 15:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem! :] I had a good chuckle at

"I want to paint
a portrait

of a man
covered in rabbits

I will call it
'man covered in rabbits'

(it will revolutionize the art world)"

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YouInventedMe In reply to Formlessforce [2009-08-07 19:00:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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rlkirkland [2009-08-05 14:48:21 +0000 UTC]

I do

understand

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YouInventedMe In reply to rlkirkland [2009-08-07 19:00:25 +0000 UTC]

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Pickled-Poppy [2009-08-05 06:59:55 +0000 UTC]

big ol' congrats on the DLD

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YouInventedMe In reply to Pickled-Poppy [2009-08-07 19:00:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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pardonM3 [2009-08-05 05:50:23 +0000 UTC]

DLD!

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YouInventedMe In reply to pardonM3 [2009-08-07 19:00:05 +0000 UTC]

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DailyLitDeviations [2009-08-05 05:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here [link]

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.

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YouInventedMe In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2009-08-06 19:48:54 +0000 UTC]

oh my! thanks, guys.

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Osiristhrasher06 [2009-08-05 05:32:13 +0000 UTC]

All I can do for this one is just avidly stare (like this: O_O) and begin a slow clap.

I've always wanted to start a slow clap.

Lovely, Shane.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Osiristhrasher06 [2009-08-06 19:47:08 +0000 UTC]

I've always wanted to be slow clapped.
thanks very much, my friend.

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mcnorris [2009-08-03 20:23:21 +0000 UTC]

outstanding friend, just outstanding!

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YouInventedMe In reply to mcnorris [2009-08-06 19:39:45 +0000 UTC]

thank ya much

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