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Youkai-Yoko — Midsummers Night Swim
Published: 2011-09-23 22:26:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 942; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 10
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Entry for a contest.
I had a lot of fun drawing this. Nyan is the red head, Aisu is the pink, and Aoi is the Blue. They are adorable~
Colored with prismacolor pencils, prismacolor markers, ballpoint pen, and white out.
Nyan, Aisu, Aoi (c) Paigee
Art(c) Me
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Comments: 23
It's very nice! i especially like the water, i'm not good at drawing water.. if i could give you a piece of advice, i'd say pay more atention to the shape of the face, make the cheeks higher, closer to the eyes, then taper the jaw line until the chin...aslo, you shouldn't make the arm a striaght-ish line, instead make it more rounded, and remeber to taper it in at the elbow, then back out on the forearm similer to this ) ( and the hands should be bigger... the easiest way to get the best resaults is to modle your picture after your own body, look at your hand, and compare it to the size of your arms, and then draw what you see..
hope i was of some help to you
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^-^;
This is actually a chibi, so most anatomy I usually use for regular bodies go out the window. I know what I did "wrong", Especially the hand, I made it that small on purpose (huge head, weird body with small hands) thank you though.
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Yeah i realized that later when i read some of the other notes.. you're welcome anyways!
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No worries! Thank you for the critique! I appreciate it none the less. I'll be sure to work on it more in my next arts.
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Yep, thats my entry. ;v; I'm glad you like it.
Thanks!
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Very cute pic, I think Nyan is my fav :3. And you did such an awesome job with the water, super cool -_^.
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Thank you! Nyan was a joy to draw, I'm already working on some more art of her. xD
awwws, thanks, I tried my best with the water. ;v;
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No problem, you're welcome Youkai-Yoko ^^.
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Thank you so much! Thats very sweet of youuuuu~ ;v; I'm still trying to improve.
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awwws, thank you so so much! ;c;
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Uwah! That's so beautiful, that must've taken ages! I also entered paiges contest ^^ tehe, I need to finish my entry for chibi draw though :S
Even though I have nooo chance of winning against this xD it's just stunning
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Thank you! ;v;
Actually, It took me about a day on and off to finish this. I get fridays off, so I had time to finish coloring. :>
oh! Good luck!
awwws, don't say that, you never know who might win!
Thank you agian, and excited to see your entry!
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Aw thanks^^ did you see the winners for the back to school contest, they were amazing<3 I managed to send my chibidraw one in, aha, I was going to send a different one but I didn't have time to colour it all because it was suuuuuper big x( haha, oh well, good luck!
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maybe you could still color it or recycle it for another drawing. ^-^;;
Oh! I'll be sure to check your entry out.
Anyways, good luck!
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maybe^^
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At heart, I'd like to say that this art piece is truthfully spectacular.The concept you have actualized is utterly surprising. The quality of this artwork makes it distinguishable that you did the best you could with your undiluted variety of talents. The form of this artwork is exactly suitable for the emotional notion that I sense you are striving to create, but now that I think about it this comment is likely irrelevant. On the other hand, I feel that your implementation of form could have been handled better as I see that it doesn't match the capability observable in the rest of the art work. To complete this critique I would like to declare that it has been a treat to invest energy in this review for you and I hope it will motivate you to increase the power level of your artwork.
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Thank youfor this comment. The time you invested writing this blew me away (and so fast too!) ;v; I will take your comments and try to improve!
I agree, I could use some more anatomy lessons, and will try to improve my chibis. :hearts:
Again, thank you so so much for the lovely critique!
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