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YoungLadyArt — Return of the Scar - part 1
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A comic book created by a fan
We're going back to history Return of the Scar.
It will be a multithreaded and dynamic adventure full of emotions!!!!!
But as the narrator said: Let's go back to the past and let's see what happened !!!!!!
Why Kion is evil !!!!!
Why does he want to kill his sister?!
Which led to all this!!!!
Learn only reading, very carefully!!!!!!
Of course, your ideas are welcome,whoever invented something wonderful will be awarded
like 2 great people Anthone 795 and Dinofanx.
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Comments: 18
2nd panel: Kion? Is... is that you?
3rd: I am not sure... a lot has happened
4th: and a lot has changed...
5th: Please, Kion.
Help me!
Why... why are you just standing there?
6th: What are you waiting for?
Good question, Kiara...
I typed lines that are supposed to be green in Italic
This page is good, I didn't really find anything that HAD to be changed drastically...
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Ok, for the general overview, I'm glad the dialogues are fairly ok.
I will see them here again and we'll see what I change there.
Thanks that you found the time for this comic book
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Hehehe, do it, Kion, you know you have to, you know... you want to.
That's my inner Scar speaking from me. XD
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Oh, not nice, not nice.Someone here is persuading him to go wrong.
Let him not listen, that whisper
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Hehehehe, I am affecting good characters in a bad way and bad characters in a good way.
I feel like I should've asked how did Kiara even end up in this position but... minor thing?
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Oh bad characters are very interesting at all.
I could say, but I will leave you in this ignorance.
I know, I know. I builds tension. You know that expectation has a good effect on the recipient
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So is this your story that you have been working on? Kion look so menacing (gasp) Is that Kiara?
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Yes, this is the story about which what time we wrote.
He looks so threatening, he looks at his sister Klara but he has reasons for this, and what happened earlier has consequences what is happening now.
I do not want to give spoilers in this story.
But I will try to spice up this story, for now there is such a begining.
There are no descriptions, explanations or dialogues.
But there will be are some moments that you like, good and bad moments.
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So this is flashforward and the story will begin with the origin of why Kion is so dark? Looking forward for this
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Yes ..... I will try my best to do it Kion Bad boy number one .
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Bad boy, Kion
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Easy without emotion, it's only 1 page
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