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Yourarenotright — Nightmare or Future?

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Published: 2014-09-23 11:24:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 8403; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 10
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Description I had an idea for the plot of Divergence, but in it well... this happens. Soooo... should I put it in? I think I'll leave it up to you to help influence my choice, though I must say, I like thisplot-line  that I made...
Link to Divergence: www.fanfiction.net/s/10497661/…
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Comments: 62

Yourarenotright In reply to ??? [2016-10-03 15:00:07 +0000 UTC]

The original actually had him at Beacon.

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RENEGADE010 [2015-03-28 16:42:34 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes the best way to protect someone is to leave them behind.

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RENEGADE010 In reply to RENEGADE010 [2015-03-30 16:00:16 +0000 UTC]

Quick Q in divergence will you keep the arkos or no?

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Yourarenotright In reply to RENEGADE010 [2015-03-30 00:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Jaune knows that better than most people seem to think

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moltake226 [2015-01-05 05:04:37 +0000 UTC]

Jaune cant do what needs to be done inside of Beacon, he needs to leave and go do what must be done to see to it that the world becomes peaceful and not like his world. Pyrrha would see him and try to stop him only to fail. This, in turn, makes Pyrrha want to get stronger, if only to 'save' Jaune. While Jaune gets to go out and fuck with the people/things/whatever that make the world into what his world was like.

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Yourarenotright In reply to moltake226 [2015-01-06 04:59:27 +0000 UTC]

It's more than that, but essentially yes, that's the gist.

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Brend839 [2014-12-27 21:56:19 +0000 UTC]

I'd say to do it as a Code Geass or Itachi (Naruto) like thing. make them hate him to make them stronger.

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Yourarenotright In reply to Brend839 [2014-12-27 22:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Jaune is willing to do what it takes.

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Dark5ythe [2014-12-10 15:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Battling against all odds just to save his friends from their demise, he would hurt them rather to lose his friends. Well the plot thickens, intriguing plot really want to know what will occur, only time will tell. Nice work.

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Yourarenotright In reply to Dark5ythe [2014-12-11 01:07:17 +0000 UTC]

It will hopefully

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Meleesmasher [2014-11-14 03:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Hmm I would say put it but there is a lot of factors as to why Jaune would simply snap like this.

Im more or less in the maybe area. 1/2 No, 1/2 Yes.

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Yourarenotright In reply to Meleesmasher [2014-11-14 12:56:04 +0000 UTC]

alright. thanks for the comment!

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bruiser128 [2014-10-19 00:55:35 +0000 UTC]

It's like they always say, "Everyone and thing has an ugly side to it".

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Yourarenotright In reply to bruiser128 [2014-10-19 07:12:09 +0000 UTC]

yep oh btw thanks for the faves!

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bruiser128 In reply to Yourarenotright [2014-10-19 13:01:39 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.^^
Just wondering but do you think Pyrhha is the least well developed character on the show?

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Yourarenotright In reply to bruiser128 [2015-01-02 18:07:26 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good.

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bruiser128 In reply to Yourarenotright [2015-01-02 18:26:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry but could you elaborate on that answer?

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Yourarenotright In reply to bruiser128 [2015-01-03 02:17:06 +0000 UTC]

She has been fleshed out a bit, but not nearly as much as some of the other characters.

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bruiser128 In reply to Yourarenotright [2015-01-03 03:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I agree, even after the little tidbit of information
she still comes off as a Erza Scarlott ripoff.

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Darkninja117 [2014-10-07 21:49:12 +0000 UTC]

yes, put it in!

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Yourarenotright In reply to Darkninja117 [2014-10-07 22:56:14 +0000 UTC]

okay

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ODSThero [2014-10-06 03:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Please just be a nightmare.

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hades-keyholder In reply to ODSThero [2015-02-08 16:05:51 +0000 UTC]

Pyrrha Please jaune don't go

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ODSThero In reply to hades-keyholder [2015-02-09 05:11:38 +0000 UTC]

Please don't say that.

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Yourarenotright In reply to ODSThero [2014-10-06 17:59:34 +0000 UTC]

one can hope

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ODSThero In reply to Yourarenotright [2014-10-11 02:36:33 +0000 UTC]

I hate it when you say that.

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Yourarenotright In reply to ODSThero [2014-10-11 09:05:19 +0000 UTC]

why

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ODSThero In reply to Yourarenotright [2014-10-13 04:03:43 +0000 UTC]

Because I always get the feeling a story of yours has this not as a bad dream, but a prediction.

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Yourarenotright In reply to ODSThero [2014-10-19 07:17:56 +0000 UTC]

is it now?

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ODSThero In reply to Yourarenotright [2014-10-19 07:25:51 +0000 UTC]

I have no clue, WHICH PISSES ME OFF!!

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Yourarenotright In reply to ODSThero [2014-10-19 07:28:07 +0000 UTC]

oh well live with your ignorance.

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ODSThero In reply to Yourarenotright [2014-10-19 07:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Story of my life.

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Yourarenotright In reply to ODSThero [2014-10-19 08:59:43 +0000 UTC]

Mine too.

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hades-keyholder [2014-09-29 18:32:21 +0000 UTC]

rwby stop jaune  by Break his legs

Pyrrha will drag jaune back in Her room

rwby team love it

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Yourarenotright In reply to hades-keyholder [2014-09-30 02:59:14 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha! They'll definitely try!

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hades-keyholder [2014-09-29 14:47:33 +0000 UTC]

vote yes

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Yourarenotright In reply to hades-keyholder [2014-09-29 17:37:36 +0000 UTC]

okay

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darkshadow1997 [2014-09-27 19:20:33 +0000 UTC]

You should definitely add this, i really love a plot like this and read something similar like how the main character thinks he a threat to others or something among those lines and his friend(even crush or family) tries to stop him even if they have to fight him but loses and begs him not to go.

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Yourarenotright In reply to darkshadow1997 [2014-09-28 03:15:05 +0000 UTC]

another vote for the yes!

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supernobodyhome [2014-09-25 11:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Definitely add this in, especially since you like the plot line you've thought out.

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Yourarenotright In reply to supernobodyhome [2014-09-25 18:52:24 +0000 UTC]

okay then another vote for yes

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AndreiNOOB [2014-09-25 10:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Hm, this'll make an interesting plot. I'd love to see it. I'll wait anyway.

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Yourarenotright In reply to AndreiNOOB [2014-09-25 18:52:39 +0000 UTC]

alright another yes vote!

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InvoicingQuasar [2014-09-23 22:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Soooo he's leaving and she tried to stop him? But maybe he went to far ._.

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Yourarenotright In reply to InvoicingQuasar [2014-09-24 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]

Her damage ins't permanent.

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InvoicingQuasar In reply to Yourarenotright [2014-09-24 01:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Well... maybe not her physical damage

but her feels ._.

And her little head thing

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Yourarenotright In reply to InvoicingQuasar [2014-09-24 01:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Jaune will protect his friends, even if that means he has to beat them down.

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InvoicingQuasar In reply to Yourarenotright [2014-09-24 01:52:27 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait man, your stories are really good

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Yourarenotright In reply to InvoicingQuasar [2014-10-11 09:17:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Drow79 [2014-09-23 20:48:13 +0000 UTC]

It could work, he might need to go off one his own to get revenge on Roman or maybe even his uncle, something along those lines. I say go for it, it will be an interesting twist from the canon storyline.

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