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Published: 2014-07-23 23:11:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 11284; Favourites: 164; Downloads: 0
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Description Who else is psyched for RWBY volume 2! I know I am!

I've had this comic idea for many months, but I never quite knew how to go about it, and I wasn't motivated enough. This is the 1st comic featuring all of team RWBY! (and Jaune ) Please excuse the crappy flame behind Ruby, I don't know how to draw/colour them.Β  Any advice?

With this piece finally done, I'd like to know what you all think, comments are always appreciated! Thanks for your time and I'll see you soon!
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Comments: 59

blued1500 [2015-12-29 10:00:08 +0000 UTC]

clever at the bottom^^ nicely done

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xelianthought [2014-11-29 12:24:36 +0000 UTC]

Nice!Β 

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YOYO409 In reply to xelianthought [2014-11-29 16:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Blakesstalker [2014-09-11 03:08:09 +0000 UTC]

i dont know if you did this on purpose or not but am i the only one who noticed where Yang's hands are?

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YOYO409 In reply to Blakesstalker [2014-09-11 13:08:39 +0000 UTC]

It was completely by accident. I only noticed it after I inked the drawing and by then it was too late. Oh well, it's not an issue; it kind of works especially if you're a bumblebee shipper
No, I'm sure you weren't the only one to notice where her hand are.

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Blakesstalker In reply to YOYO409 [2014-09-11 19:35:59 +0000 UTC]

wait…now i feel jealous of Yang

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YOYO409 In reply to Blakesstalker [2014-09-11 21:41:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure a lot of people are jealous XD

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Blakesstalker In reply to YOYO409 [2014-09-11 23:07:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah but im her stalker…

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YOYO409 In reply to Blakesstalker [2014-09-11 23:14:27 +0000 UTC]

That's very true, how ever I'm sure that there are other stalkers aside from you.

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Blakesstalker In reply to YOYO409 [2014-09-11 23:18:59 +0000 UTC]

well that may be true but im the only person willing to call myself her stalker so im far superior to them…unless their Sun…

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YOYO409 In reply to Blakesstalker [2014-09-11 23:22:03 +0000 UTC]

You are the master stalker, Sun doesn't stand a chance!

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Blakesstalker In reply to YOYO409 [2014-09-11 23:50:08 +0000 UTC]

well Sun is the only one getting any bellabooty so i guess not

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xelianthought [2014-09-09 11:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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Alpha-12 [2014-09-04 02:24:40 +0000 UTC]

en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barrett_XM500
Ruby should work for Barrett-I can't imagine her not being promoted.

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TheAthkore [2014-08-20 11:57:14 +0000 UTC]

The feels from the Yin to my Yang i.i

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crazed-monkey [2014-08-16 22:10:19 +0000 UTC]

I think Yang just copped a feel....lucky.

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YOYO409 In reply to crazed-monkey [2014-08-17 08:26:11 +0000 UTC]

Yes she did... she's very lucky.

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TheSilverFoxy [2014-08-15 04:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me or does this remind me of Goldilocks?Β 

I tackled that with a Yang!Β  Β 

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YOYO409 In reply to TheSilverFoxy [2014-08-15 14:03:28 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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jhkhy [2014-08-13 02:45:24 +0000 UTC]

bumblebee for life

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Hazzamo16 [2014-07-31 17:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that's just adorable... However, Ruby, on fire, running at five hundred mph.... That is not something I want to imagineΒ 

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YOYO409 In reply to Hazzamo16 [2014-08-04 20:39:48 +0000 UTC]

I don't think anybody does...

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Hazzamo16 In reply to YOYO409 [2014-08-04 22:50:31 +0000 UTC]

It will end all life as we know it

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TraceMem [2014-07-24 19:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Cute idea and comparisons.

Yang sure is huggy in that last panel.

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YOYO409 In reply to TraceMem [2014-07-24 19:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

Of course! How else would she show her affection?

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skyking96 [2014-07-24 13:09:09 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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dv330 [2014-07-24 11:21:32 +0000 UTC]

This is so funny and well drawn. Really good puns.
Can you tell me if volume 2 will be on youtube or only on the rooster teeth website today and if there is any st time when they release it?
( i know its today but im so hyped i cant wait)

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YOYO409 In reply to dv330 [2014-07-24 17:20:47 +0000 UTC]

I may be wrong but, I would think that just like before, they'll release it on the rooster teeth website today then youtube a week later...

I think I read that it will be uploaded at 7.00PM CST (central standard time) Which should be around about midnight for me over here in the UK

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dv330 In reply to YOYO409 [2014-07-25 12:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Ok thanks for the answer. I had to stay up till two in the morning but it was absolutely worth it
What do you think about the first episode? Did you like it as much as i did?

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YOYO409 In reply to dv330 [2014-07-25 12:14:15 +0000 UTC]

It was amazing! I had a smile on all the way through, and when it was finished, I re-watched my favourite bits. Then once done, I went to bed feeling giddy like a little school girl and couldn't sleep because of all the excitement for what's to come.

What about you what did you think? What did you like?

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dv330 In reply to YOYO409 [2014-07-25 15:09:25 +0000 UTC]

I think the food fight scene was the best. I liked almost everything in the episode except that nora won the little food fight vs yang(i still believe yang is stronget and that she would win in a real fight) and that sun kinda admitted that he has a crush on blake. I like bumblebee more. Oh and emerald is kinda nice but still evil. Other than that everything is awesome

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randomenemy321 [2014-07-24 10:42:02 +0000 UTC]

NawwwΒ 
And yup, can't waitΒ 

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TridentMeister [2014-07-24 03:42:30 +0000 UTC]

it bothers me that Quiet is twice misspelled as Quite. is that a possible fix or no?

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YOYO409 In reply to TridentMeister [2014-07-24 07:56:23 +0000 UTC]

Whoops, I double checked my spelling and grammar but I guess that got past me. Thanks for the heads up, it's fixed now.

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TridentMeister In reply to YOYO409 [2014-07-24 15:26:28 +0000 UTC]

no problem. I almost missed it myself because my brain autocorrects the words I see unless I continuously read it

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Aqua311 [2014-07-24 02:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! did a similar 4koma awhile back.

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YOYO409 In reply to Aqua311 [2014-07-24 08:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

I'm not surprised that someone did a similar comic before me, since I was quite slow off the mark in regards to ideas and in making RWBY art in general

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dinobot2000 [2014-07-24 01:45:59 +0000 UTC]

This is really good. Great job with yangs puns, I burst out laughing reading the entire comic.
My advise to you though............Keep doing what your doing cuz its awesome XD

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YOYO409 In reply to dinobot2000 [2014-07-24 08:14:02 +0000 UTC]

While reading your comment I was like: "they like the comic and the puns!" (I was so proud of myself in making the puns) Then I read "my advise to you though............" I was like: "Aw crap, what did I do wrong..." Then I realised it wasn't anything bad at all! Β  (hope you enjoyed this little story of my emotions )

In all seriousness, thank you for the lovely comment I appreciate it!

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dinobot2000 In reply to YOYO409 [2014-07-24 08:59:43 +0000 UTC]

No worries. You've been very welcoming on my comeback to da. I was on a 3 year break.

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YOYO409 In reply to dinobot2000 [2014-07-24 09:06:38 +0000 UTC]

3 years?! Damn that's a long time. I'm glad you came back, your art is awesome

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dinobot2000 In reply to YOYO409 [2014-07-24 18:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. And it is a long time. Life had been and is still keeping me busy. But i wanted to get back into at least one of my dying hobbies. I really like drawing. It's a nice release from everyday life. It's quite stress relieving actually.

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YOYO409 In reply to dinobot2000 [2014-07-24 18:39:45 +0000 UTC]

Agreed, drawing is a good form of escapism, as long as you don't stress yourself out over it

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dinobot2000 In reply to YOYO409 [2014-07-24 21:02:26 +0000 UTC]

For sure. People these days think dA is just for being popular and having everyone praise their art. But it's just a place to make connections and express yourself. share the things you love.Β 

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YOYO409 In reply to dinobot2000 [2014-07-24 21:29:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah i agree, I also think it's a community where you share the same interest(s) and can be used to grow as artists no matter what your art is.

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dinobot2000 In reply to YOYO409 [2014-07-24 22:32:02 +0000 UTC]

you hit it right on the nail

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TearofLight [2014-07-24 01:41:43 +0000 UTC]

Aww! This is awesome! I love it.

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YOYO409 In reply to TearofLight [2014-07-24 08:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad that you loved it!

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Cambosa1 [2014-07-24 01:29:34 +0000 UTC]

BUMBLEBEE!

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YOYO409 In reply to Cambosa1 [2014-07-24 08:20:42 +0000 UTC]

[BUMBLEBEE INTENSIFIES]

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