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EverydayHeroGSH [2016-01-13 13:00:35 +0000 UTC]
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Hello, I really like the dynamism of your picture; like, the colors and the positioning of the characters really make the picture come alive. Your lines are also sharp and well-placed, which is good.
Judging by the way you colored it, I assume you were using a sponge or something like that (please correct me if I am wrong, and if that is the case please forgive my ignorance). I understand that it might be hard if you are using such a tool, but you might want to make sure that your colors don't get "hairy" at the edges, by coloring all the way to the line. I think it would give the picture more "substance", for the lack of a better word. Also, along those lines, you may also consider adding some impression of a sky to complete the background, especially since there is an airplane.
Other than that, I think it is a nice piece that quaintly captures the spirit of Studio Ghibli. Keep it up!
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yuuh-chan In reply to EverydayHeroGSH [2016-01-13 13:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Hello! Thank you so so so much for the kind critique!
I was actually quite unsure when I was coloring, and had a little trouble of how I'd like it ot look and for how I'd do that! I used some nature default brushes that Photoshop had that actually kind of look like a sponge hahaha!
I'll try to work on everything you said, thank you so so so much!!
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jcpeters726 [2016-01-13 12:58:01 +0000 UTC]
adorable <3
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