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Published: 2008-07-15 18:46:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 4657; Favourites: 111; Downloads: 223
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Description a quick pic of ayeka, i suppose her waking up and having a cup of coffee and a doughnut

not much to the motivation behind the pic expect it started as something else, but i suppose the evolution of the pose sorta created what you see now

i know people have asked in the past why the hell i never do much in terms of clothing and what not, i guess i focusing on the body, although not so much for fan services, but i guess since i am still trying to learn the inner workings of figure drawing, i suppose, because i did not get much of the life drawing experience in college, (the department did not have much in the way of funds for stuff like getting models)

so i am still trying to understand what 'look' of fat really would look like overall, but i am guess in reality a weird a weird art nerd and not so much a perv when it comes to this, but i am not sure anybody really cares about about my 'motivations' for what i do,

any who, i am open to comment and critiques, but please at least make them some what imformative
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Comments: 19

Avoirdupois-X [2008-10-10 03:51:35 +0000 UTC]

I love all the creases and rolls and I think you did a great job on the arm fat

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zanza316 In reply to Avoirdupois-X [2008-10-10 03:53:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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ChronoWeapon [2008-07-18 21:38:02 +0000 UTC]

Your pretty good with the anatomy, however, I must say her facial expression seems... lifeless rather than "I just woke up". Her eyes reflect that emotion, now I have some troubles with the eyes myself so I've tried many different things with eyes. Try drawing her pupil in first and working around with the rest of the eye. The pupiless look, I believe is meant to symbolize death or unconsciousness. Otherwise you seem to have a good hold on everything else.

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zanza316 In reply to ChronoWeapon [2008-07-19 02:08:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks

your right about the eyes, i suppose i am not one who is really that great when ti comes facial features and what not, but i do need to really re work the eyes, sometime in the future

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HokageIzlude [2008-07-17 23:24:37 +0000 UTC]

This is much better, but her eyes look kinda lifeless like.

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zanza316 In reply to HokageIzlude [2008-07-17 23:27:45 +0000 UTC]

ah

i suppose so

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Avoirdupois-X [2008-07-16 05:47:18 +0000 UTC]

My only critique is that she's so skinny! Well done as always

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zanza316 In reply to Avoirdupois-X [2008-07-16 13:27:32 +0000 UTC]

heh

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Robot001 [2008-07-15 19:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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zanza316 In reply to Robot001 [2008-07-15 22:10:32 +0000 UTC]

*nods*

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Robot001 In reply to zanza316 [2008-07-15 22:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Agreed.

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ramblerPL [2008-07-15 19:34:07 +0000 UTC]

mmm looking great, and exciting good and tasty job!

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zanza316 In reply to ramblerPL [2008-07-15 22:12:38 +0000 UTC]

ah

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ramblerPL In reply to zanza316 [2008-07-15 22:44:30 +0000 UTC]

can't wait for another one! how about drawing a few drawings based on theme forced feeding?

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zanza316 In reply to ramblerPL [2008-07-15 22:45:38 +0000 UTC]

*shrug*

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gaaraoutcast101 [2008-07-15 19:25:38 +0000 UTC]

looks nice. one of the things i think you should work on is the eyes. probably one of the main things in your artwork that bugs me.

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zanza316 In reply to gaaraoutcast101 [2008-07-15 22:06:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks

hmmmm, about the eyes, i suppose sorta like the semi-pupilless look that i do from time to time with them, although i am not sure if every body like it as much as me, if that is what you mean, if not i am sure what you mean for it, but i know that is likley some are i just need to generally work on under the broad spectrem of facial designs in general, which is one area i lack much in the way of development and progress

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gaaraoutcast101 In reply to zanza316 [2008-07-16 18:56:15 +0000 UTC]

ok. just a suggestion. i personally try and go for the anime-esque style eyes. the one with half a million lights in their eyes and such. but thats just me. ^^

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zanza316 In reply to gaaraoutcast101 [2008-07-16 19:02:59 +0000 UTC]

ah

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