Comments: 19
ChronoWeapon [2008-07-18 21:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Your pretty good with the anatomy, however, I must say her facial expression seems... lifeless rather than "I just woke up". Her eyes reflect that emotion, now I have some troubles with the eyes myself so I've tried many different things with eyes. Try drawing her pupil in first and working around with the rest of the eye. The pupiless look, I believe is meant to symbolize death or unconsciousness. Otherwise you seem to have a good hold on everything else.
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zanza316 In reply to ChronoWeapon [2008-07-19 02:08:02 +0000 UTC]
thanks
your right about the eyes, i suppose i am not one who is really that great when ti comes facial features and what not, but i do need to really re work the eyes, sometime in the future
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HokageIzlude [2008-07-17 23:24:37 +0000 UTC]
This is much better, but her eyes look kinda lifeless like.
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Robot001 [2008-07-15 19:44:42 +0000 UTC]
Nice.
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ramblerPL In reply to zanza316 [2008-07-15 22:44:30 +0000 UTC]
can't wait for another one! how about drawing a few drawings based on theme forced feeding?
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gaaraoutcast101 [2008-07-15 19:25:38 +0000 UTC]
looks nice. one of the things i think you should work on is the eyes. probably one of the main things in your artwork that bugs me.
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zanza316 In reply to gaaraoutcast101 [2008-07-15 22:06:07 +0000 UTC]
thanks
hmmmm, about the eyes, i suppose sorta like the semi-pupilless look that i do from time to time with them, although i am not sure if every body like it as much as me, if that is what you mean, if not i am sure what you mean for it, but i know that is likley some are i just need to generally work on under the broad spectrem of facial designs in general, which is one area i lack much in the way of development and progress
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gaaraoutcast101 In reply to zanza316 [2008-07-16 18:56:15 +0000 UTC]
ok. just a suggestion. i personally try and go for the anime-esque style eyes. the one with half a million lights in their eyes and such. but thats just me. ^^
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