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There's a lot happening here. XD

But before I stalk explaining:

I am planning to make another short storyboard scene. But that's probably the last of Electrive detective since I also want to try it with my other characters. However, some of these sketches happened AFTER the storyboard I'm preparing to make. Just saying so no one will get confused.


So...

Yeah, Metalman is also a suspect. XD The most terrifrying for Elec that is. XD
 There will be multiple appearances of Quickman acting like an asshole towards Elec. XD And because of the cover ups that seem to be ruining the investigation, Elecman thinks that Top is also forced into the plot. But it turns out he's innocent.

And yeah, Crash has oil on his face. XD When he opened the door while Elecman was playing guitar, Oilman fire an oil shot at his face. While he and Elec were fighting, Crash tried to get to the crane to wash it off. The whole house was a mess and they suspected Oilman was a part of the plot and wanted to kill them before they found out. But it turns out that Oilman has been hunted for a long time. Breaking into rich people's houses and forcing them to surrender their oil intestries.

After Elecman's camera got killed, Chillman who has recently been making photograpsh of animals since he left the detective agenty, decides to give him his newest camera. And that's where I'll stop telling about this camera since it has to do something with the storyboard. c:

Only Geminiman gave away something about the mistery.

Also, the sketch with Elecman holding Alisa's hand happened after the fight with Oilman. Both og them needed to be repaired. Or cleaned for the most part. Alisa is also a repair robot, but she isn't the best expert. While the two decide to stay online since only a few small circuits are loose and covered with oil, Quickman storms in, sais he found a good suspect and takes Crash with him since Elecman wasn't ready yet. He gets a little mad, creating tension in his back ( since the generator is in his back ) and Alisa gets a small shock. Nothing major, but it still hurts. Elec feels sorry and looks at her hand incase he burned her a little. But she sais it's ok since she had a lot of electric shocks from other robots who didn't turn off their generators.

LOVE MOMENT. ;A;


Speaking of, we almost got a kiss. : D

And I got the whole scene in mind. c: You also have to count those sad Elecman sketches with the table and the photos. HERE IT GOES:

* Door rings *
Crashman: I got it! i got it- aaaah! * falls off the stairs because the sticky ropes are tangled between his legs * Oww...I'm coming! ....Who's there!?

Alisa: It's Alisa.

Crashman: How do I know it's you?

Alisa: Buttplug.

Crashman: * gigles a bit * Ok. And the secret knock?

Elecman: Just open the door Crash.

Crashman: Ssshhht! * listens to the knock, then opens all the locks; slightly opens the door while holding his non-hand infront of him * Oh it's you.

Alisa: Is Elecman home?

Crashman: He is. But don't tell anybody. * looks around * Now get in! get in before this gets notable! * closes the door * Elec is in the living room. I'll be upstairs if you need me.

Alisa: Ok.

* Crash goes upstairs while Alisa quietly enters the room *

Alisa: Hey.

Elecman: Hey...

Alisa: * walks towards him, looking at all the photos * I've heard the news when I went to work. So...what did you do? * sits down *

Elecman: After I gave Quickman a piece of my mind....I went to the warehouse to find that photo I lost. I've searched in every box. ...all 30 of them.

Alisa: And?

Elecman: ...The only thing I found out...is that they took my only solid evidance. I've waster 5 hours of my life. And only got one more day until I get fired...unless I can find something.

Alisa: No. You will not get fired and you will find an anwser.

Elecman: * looks surprised *

Alisa: Elec....I know you too well. And I know that you can finish any investigation. Quickman only wants your place because he believes in fame before experience. But you don't. You're the one who keeps going even if there's a dead end. Your feeling of responsibility gives you the power to never give up on those you love. You will not fail.

Elecman: * looks sad *

Alisa: ...But even if you get fired...* puts a back of money on the table from her purse * I hope this will cheer you up. * then gives him extra * And a little extra incase you want a new guitar.

Elecman: ...Wher'd you get this?

Alisa: My master is the boss of the TV construction company, remember? He earned a lot this month so...I decided to give half of to you in order to pay for the housing allowance.

Elecman: ...Do colleagues always cheer each other up like this?

Alisa: Not if that someone is very special...

Elecman: So...you're saying I'm special?

Alisa: ...To me you are.

* he gently grabs her chin, close their eyes and lean forward....BUT THEN GET INTERUPTED BY CRASH FALLING DOWN THE STAIRS AGAIN HARR HARRRRR *


c:

I was listening to this track while drawing that sketch>  www.youtube.com/watch?v=jNxlwT…



So there. Enjoy!
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Comments: 34

DatTemplar [2017-03-17 21:35:56 +0000 UTC]

ummm, the track you were listening to isn't available anymore

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Zavraan In reply to DatTemplar [2017-03-17 21:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Strange.

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INeedMyDownTime [2014-12-12 23:14:25 +0000 UTC]

Crashman: Just don't die okay? Me: Crashman, seriously? 

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Zavraan In reply to INeedMyDownTime [2014-12-12 23:21:25 +0000 UTC]

C:

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Elecmanlover1 [2014-08-23 22:16:42 +0000 UTC]

CRASH MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Next time this happens,I'll pin you down to the ground to let elec and Alisa to have their moment

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Zavraan In reply to Elecmanlover1 [2014-08-23 22:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Or you can make it happen. c:

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Elecmanlover1 In reply to Zavraan [2014-08-23 22:27:58 +0000 UTC]

What?   How do I do it? It has to happen right now!
do I:
shove elec into Alisa
put elec in a situation where he would die- oh wait....*cough*mission failed*cough* crud I'm losing ideas... Erm.......
elec saves Alisa from a shot that could of(seriously, at the rate I'm going, at least one is gonna be injured in one way or another XD)

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Zavraan In reply to Elecmanlover1 [2014-08-23 22:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Shooooooove. c:

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Elecmanlover1 In reply to Zavraan [2014-08-23 22:39:12 +0000 UTC]

LOL  wait, was that shove too much?

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Zavraan In reply to Elecmanlover1 [2014-08-24 10:27:29 +0000 UTC]

no. XD

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Elecmanlover1 In reply to Zavraan [2014-08-24 20:09:45 +0000 UTC]

It wasn't good enough? How do I shove harder than that? :3

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Zavraan In reply to Elecmanlover1 [2014-08-24 20:15:18 +0000 UTC]

No, just do it. c:

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Elecmanlover1 In reply to Zavraan [2014-08-24 20:35:50 +0000 UTC]

Shove! And then elec turns around and electricutes me. Or I get arrested. Or both c:

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Zavraan In reply to Elecmanlover1 [2014-08-24 20:39:26 +0000 UTC]

XDDDD

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Elecmanlover1 In reply to Zavraan [2014-08-24 20:51:23 +0000 UTC]

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dragonwings90 [2014-08-22 21:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Wait, THE LAST OF ELECTRIVE DETECTIVE?!
NONONONONONONONONONONONONO I GOT ATTACHED TO THESE CHARACTERS!!!
...
*sigh*
Can you at least end it with a storyboard or long comic? ;~;

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Zavraan In reply to dragonwings90 [2014-08-22 21:53:18 +0000 UTC]

The last storyboard is already up.

But I am going to continue making sketches about it.

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dragonwings90 In reply to Zavraan [2014-08-23 01:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Yey!  

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Rovelae [2014-08-05 03:20:24 +0000 UTC]

Hoo, DANGIT CRASH! Could there be any worse timing? XD

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LunarEcliptix [2014-07-20 14:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh dis is so intense c:

crash you just ruined everything for alisa and elec. BARSGGVHGKHSRD

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Zavraan In reply to LunarEcliptix [2014-07-20 14:25:06 +0000 UTC]

XDDDD

They were just about to do something that would make us spazz so hard. ;W;

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LunarEcliptix In reply to Zavraan [2014-07-20 17:15:55 +0000 UTC]

And crash messed it up.   
CRASH, WHY?? WHY YOU FALL ON STAIRS?!  

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Zavraan In reply to LunarEcliptix [2014-07-20 17:29:50 +0000 UTC]

Because he is adorible. XD

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LunarEcliptix In reply to Zavraan [2014-07-20 18:42:55 +0000 UTC]

XD well, that's a point. 

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phoenixphire12 [2014-07-18 21:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Watch out Elec, Snake's gunna get 'cha!!! 
And damn, look at cute little Gemi. Getting all beat to hell.

But damn, Crash and Elec covered in oil. That made me laugh XD
ISITSTRANGETHATIWASKINDATURNEDONBYTHAT?!?!! :/

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Zavraan In reply to phoenixphire12 [2014-07-18 22:34:58 +0000 UTC]

He's the ssssssssssssssssssssnek~

Me too. XD

ANDWHATDOYOUMEANBYTHAT? ;o;

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phoenixphire12 In reply to Zavraan [2014-07-18 23:27:53 +0000 UTC]

IMEAN,JUSTLOOKATTHEMALLSEXYLIKE 
XD
my mind is just like, *damn sexy robots*

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Zavraan In reply to phoenixphire12 [2014-07-19 08:20:31 +0000 UTC]

You are not alone. c:

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phoenixphire12 In reply to Zavraan [2014-07-20 15:14:18 +0000 UTC]

 

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LunarEcliptix In reply to Zavraan [2014-07-20 14:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Not alone at aaaall

not even close. C:

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Zavraan In reply to LunarEcliptix [2014-07-20 14:20:14 +0000 UTC]

: D

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SharkEyedShinobi [2014-07-18 21:23:03 +0000 UTC]

I. LOVE IT! XD Yay, more ElecXAlisa. X3 And Crashman, Lol, gotta love him. XD

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Zavraan In reply to SharkEyedShinobi [2014-07-18 21:27:17 +0000 UTC]

yay~ c:

Thank you!

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SharkEyedShinobi In reply to Zavraan [2014-07-18 21:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. X)

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