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Powershade117 [2013-02-19 22:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Let's get this started with the character that brought your series to life and kick-started it all; Azure the Dragon. (By the way I'm gonna judge this with the information right in front of me right now, meaning the picture itself and the description given for this picture. Same goes for all the other character pics.)
Vision: "Does the artwork present or reflect a point of view, theme or idea?" In short; yes. Aside from the obvious Sonic theme, the vision I'm seeing here is a character who wants to forge her own identity away from her family. Her high energy pose makes me think of that free spirit who makes her own rules, longing for more than what's been given to her. This is solidified with her outfit. It's nothing proper or high class at all. Long boots, black vest, leg bands, and colorful, Tron-looking wrist gauntlets: Yeah, definitely the family member that people will look at. Does this sound familiar?
Originality: "Is the artwork fresh or new in its style, execution or approach? Is it something you haven't seen before in its particular genre? Does it surprise you?" Again, this is a common style and nothing too new. But it has its own identity that can be recognized as yours. So I'll just touch on the characters themselves and not the style used to represent the species in a Sonic style. Azure's design as a dragon is quite interesting. I know dragon lore and looks vary greatly depending on the culture that they are depicted in, but the traits I think of when I think "dragon" are; scaly skin, wings, elongated snout, tail, and carnivorous teeth. Wings are a check. They're their. Scaly skin...can't tell with the picture, but one can assume she does. She's got the tail of course, and she's even got those dragon back spine things (not sure what to call them) running along her tail. Carnivorous teeth...Well I see canines in her toothy smile, so I'll take that. As for the snout, that's what throws me off a bit when it comes to a dragon appearance. She has a similar facial structure as many of the Sonic caste, such as Sonic, Knuckles, Shadow, Amy, and Rouge. And they are all mammals. So it makes her appear to have some more mammalian features than what is the typical look of many dragons. That bumps up the originality score quite a bit. However, that being said, before I read her name as being "Azure the Dragon", I thought she was a bat of something, and it's all because of the face. Also the hair...I don't think I've ever seen a dragon with long flowing hair before.
Technique: "Was the artwork skillfully created? Does the artist exhibit advanced knowledge of the medium and/or bring special focus to the craft of the medium used?" Honestly, this does have skill to it, but with a few rough edges. Starting with the good: The colors are beautiful. They say that colors can invoke emotions. Well when I look at this, with its calming greens and soothing blues...you get the idea. It's a calming picture in coloration, with a hint of energy from the characters open smile and energetic pose. Proportions are good too, as far as Sonic characters go. Details are abound here. Her boots are with buckles and colorful stripes, adding more to her outfit and design. However, there are things that are a little jarring. Some of the outlines look a little shaky sometimes. For instance, the subtle curves I see on her boots (mainly on the top). Those just give off an impression that some things might have been rushed or glazed over a bit.
Impact: "Does the artwork resonate with you or evoke strong emotions? Does it make you think? Does it blow your mind?" Blow my mind? No. Make me think? Yes! remember what I asked up in the Vision section: "Does this sound familiar?" It should because I just described in a way what many think of when the topic of the typical American teenage girl comes into play. That girl that is coming into her own, wanting more out of life than what's been given to her (especially one who hates her current life), and having the rebellious spark within her, with a pinch of repressed romantic feelings toward someone. So that is what I see in Azure. She is that teenage girl that many other teenage girls could read about and understand what she is going through.
Personal Thoughts: I'd like to bring up the "teenage girl" parallel again for just a bit. I ABSOLUTELY feel for Azure and how she feels about her family. I have a sister who wants nothing more than to get our of the house, explore the world, and forge a name for herself. So with that older brother mentality, I almost can see my sister in Azure. That adds a much deeper personal connection for me with this character. And the picture itself is one that I could almost see being put up as official Sonic art (if of course, Azure was something Sega cooked up). However, I'll have to give those bits of art a few more points over this one. There's just a few spots that I think lacked polish.Don't worry, you don't need to defend your artwork. It's still beautiful to look at and the pros DEFINITELY outweigh the cons. Just maybe there are some things to look out for.
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NovaVoidNecroz [2018-04-02 17:34:56 +0000 UTC]
Considering her chicken of a bro is hunting her, and she has a crush on shadow, of shadow went #chivalry and saw Garrett hunting this fair lady......
Garrettβs gonna be a chaos control victim.
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Jared-The-Rabbit [2016-12-25 03:58:38 +0000 UTC]
Awww, she's pretty cute for 16.
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CaptainDeadpool15 [2015-01-08 06:12:50 +0000 UTC]
Man, she's one looking dragon.
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Axel0x [2014-08-07 17:00:45 +0000 UTC]
He's so cute... Can I ship in with my oc?Β
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Zephyros-Phoenix In reply to Axel0x [2014-08-07 17:57:59 +0000 UTC]
..."He's" a girl. And no, she's got a crush on Shadow.
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Multiverse13 [2013-01-02 07:24:01 +0000 UTC]
How old is she?
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NSYee36 [2012-11-18 10:38:00 +0000 UTC]
Sounds this is a masterpiece of you work, If you using SA style, Maybe is the best thing ever...
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dragonpeach [2012-07-11 23:28:26 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome~!!
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SLYMaster58 [2012-05-29 17:40:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow, so cute!! XD
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Blueheart101 [2012-05-24 19:49:58 +0000 UTC]
That's amazingly epic.
Great job!
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The-Mighty-Rinotera [2012-05-09 21:55:24 +0000 UTC]
.....this maked me TOTALLY reconcidder my main OC cody the dragon. but hes a storm dragon so ill not make it look exactly like this. for one, the ears....2 hes a storm dragon so his horns and tail will be diffent. 3 he is 15 so he will look young and his main color is green and also...hes a guy so....yea. but thank you so much for letting me see this!
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winterdahedgehog [2012-03-18 22:32:35 +0000 UTC]
NICE! 8D I don't see many other dragons in the Sonic Universe (Besides mine XD)
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CTOM [2012-02-16 16:22:53 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I heard there's gonna be Sonic Adventures 3 for Wii and it's already out!!^^ U better buy it before they get sold out!
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Zephyros-Phoenix In reply to CTOM [2012-02-17 01:53:09 +0000 UTC]
There's no game called Sonic Adventure 3...
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CTOM In reply to Zephyros-Phoenix [2012-02-17 13:17:07 +0000 UTC]
But there's Sonic Generations for PS3 and XBOX 360!
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Twilight-Na [2012-02-10 11:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Love the amazing pose and detail.
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jadesdogie [2012-01-28 05:39:38 +0000 UTC]
how did you do the background
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Zephyros-Phoenix In reply to jadesdogie [2012-01-28 05:41:35 +0000 UTC]
I copied the finished picture of the character, resized it on a new layer and set the layer at a lower opacity.
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halloweendiva [2012-01-28 02:38:07 +0000 UTC]
woah i LOVE her color scheme thats really good! is she a dragon? obviously thats really really good ugh i love it
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halloweendiva In reply to Zephyros-Phoenix [2012-01-28 02:58:50 +0000 UTC]
BTW why does everyone keep callin her a he? youcan tell its a she
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halloweendiva [2012-01-28 02:35:58 +0000 UTC]
WOAH i love his color scheme! n is he a dragon? obviously that is great my friend! so gonna fav!
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gabbypie64 [2012-01-23 17:22:58 +0000 UTC]
hes cute
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valerie2002 [2012-01-20 21:21:07 +0000 UTC]
omg she is soooo cute!!!!!!!
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rugdg13 [2012-01-18 18:58:32 +0000 UTC]
Shes NAKED!!!
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Zephyros-Phoenix In reply to rugdg13 [2012-01-20 21:36:10 +0000 UTC]
Not all female Sonic characters are required to wear clothes lol Just look at Sally Acorn.
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valerie2002 In reply to rugdg13 [2012-01-20 21:23:05 +0000 UTC]
lol ur right!!!!
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SeriesArtiststarter [2012-01-17 19:22:59 +0000 UTC]
Woah yeah baby thats lighting power right there with a zing of thunderous emotions right behind it! Now that I look closer at Azure's design here, her gloves and lower down them Ive noticed are a great mix of full on techno but with a sort of old anicent theme to them I sort of feel, but otherwise you really pulled this one up and off into the air with success!
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valerie2002 In reply to SeriesArtiststarter [2012-01-20 21:33:24 +0000 UTC]
really i said all of that and u didnt hear me!!!!!!ha ha thats funny!!!
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