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FINAL
"I'll come back for you, I promise."
I meant those words I spoke in a hushed whisper, a tone I knew I would never speak with anyone else. (Name) relaxed in my arms, tears rising to her luminous eyes and spilling down her reddened cheeks. As much as it pained me to see her with such sadness in her soul, I knew it was something that must be done. I could not allow her to be trapped again. I wanted freedom as much as she, but I knew I had t sacrifice some of it in order for her to be free.
Here sat a person who I never imagined in my life, and now I couldn't imagine my life without her. The way she laughed, the way she held her head, the tears that escaped her eyes and the way she whispered my name were all things I would never forget as long as I lived.
I hugged her tighter to my body as I felt the moment of our separation draw near. I knew I would never see her again, as long as I lived, so I wanted these final moments to forever be in my memory. The way she felt in my arms, the way she pressed against me, the heat from her body and her scent; they were all things I never wanted to forget.
I could have turned her in, I could have ridded myself of her and her charms, but then I would never forgive myself. I could have had all the gold she was worth, but it would not ease the emptiness in my soul.
"Rivaille" her voice whispered to me, that voice that had haunted my dreams and plagued my thoughts. It cracked under the strain of the emotion behind it, sadness and despair at having to let go of me for the final time.
I wanted this moment to last forever, to never let go of her figure. I wanted nothing more than to hold her in my arms until the end of time. but the time was drawing close, the seconds ticking by faster than i wanted.
Then suddenly, it was time.
With a heavy sigh, I gingerly placed my lips on the side of her neck, whispering three words in her ear as I detached myself from her and slipped out of the carriage.
It took a moment for the carriage to start. It gave (Name) enough time to spring to the window and look after me.
How much I wanted to go back, to feel her in my grip one last time. But I knew that time had come and gone.
A heavy hand rested on my shoulder, captain Erwin whispered words I did not hear.
I only saw (Name), riding away for the last time, the evening light painting shadows on her face.
I saw her lips whisper my name
I saw her hands press to the glass, as if reaching for me.
I could see her blink the tears away
and she smiled.
"Rivaille, its time."
I didn't care.
For in that moment...
Her eyes glittered like gold.
Comments: 120
Elvishdancer [2016-07-28 03:24:23 +0000 UTC]
This was very beautifully written with an amazing storyline. Now I have to go find some funny oneshot to cheer myself up. This was amazing!!!
Ps.
If you ever did a sequel, you could start it at the fall of wall Maria and he saves her from a Titan or something like that. I know you probably won't do a sequel, and I respect that, but that would be awesome.
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Kukki-no-Neko [2015-04-04 17:42:10 +0000 UTC]
Omg, that was so good!~ ;つД`)
I really enjoyed the series while it lasted. (●´ω`●)
Keep up the good work~
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AssassinsCreditCard [2015-03-18 23:56:00 +0000 UTC]
must haz sequel!!! idk make a fanfiction where reader meets levi again?! i just hate to see a series this good come to a close ;-;
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JessicaC924 [2014-08-29 01:01:37 +0000 UTC]
This whole series was amazing, I cannot even begin to put into words just how amazing it is. Though the ending was bittersweet(though more bitter than sweet) I especially loved how you added the title into the story as the last line of the entire series. Though I find it slightly disheartening that after everything they've been through, after everything they have sacrificed together, in the end they could not be up together. Besides that, amazing series and a perfect and beautiful ending.
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giggle222 [2014-06-18 23:53:23 +0000 UTC]
I have taken a lot of my time to read this whole series, it has been wonderful. Since you ended it like this though, I am going to have to kill you.
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sprat-thegoth32 In reply to allukazoldyk [2015-05-16 04:53:28 +0000 UTC]
That came out of the blue considering I posted that almost a year ago... But thank you, I do try. XD
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Keira-Giordano [2014-05-29 01:35:58 +0000 UTC]
Goddamnit fuck.... That was unexpected... I feel empty... Y u do dis?!?!?!!
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crazycats161616 [2014-05-04 05:00:26 +0000 UTC]
WHAT NO YOU'RE NOT ALLOWED TO DO THAT
This was beautiful but it's making meh upset I don't know how to feeeeeeeeeeeeeeel
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NarutoGirlRocks [2014-04-23 16:34:58 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS AMAZING! I LOVE IT SO SO MUCH. Sequel plz? YOU'RE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER.
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ZireaelProductions [2014-04-21 23:50:04 +0000 UTC]
I only got a chance to read it now and OMG I'M CRYING WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY HEART YOU RIPPED IT OUT CHEWED ON IT TOYED WITH IT AND THREW IT AWAY holy shit it was amazing I love you.
Okay all my emotions are out.
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Interrogate-The-Cat [2014-04-18 04:44:45 +0000 UTC]
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That was amazing.
I can't even
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Zephyros22 In reply to Tsukiko722 [2014-04-17 11:40:41 +0000 UTC]
Hopefully I will be writing a similar story sometime soon!
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spyagent001 [2014-04-15 23:45:54 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAAHHHH *TEARS*
That was great. That was so great. I feel like crying for Levi though aaaaaahhhhhh.
Great story. Please write another if you ever feel like it!
L
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Kitkatoleary [2014-04-03 00:56:18 +0000 UTC]
Rivaille, I will hunt you down if it's the last thing I do. Eff your sense of justice, I'm not letting you do that for me and then escape.
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xenasucrette [2014-03-30 00:26:02 +0000 UTC]
BEAUTIFUL!!!!
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CandideDelights [2014-03-20 02:22:02 +0000 UTC]
This was so beautiful, you don't even understand how much I loved this story!
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sarpndo [2014-03-11 00:04:05 +0000 UTC]
waaaaaaaaaah!!!!!
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mysoulreaps [2014-03-04 01:38:00 +0000 UTC]
Whyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!! Such an amazing and sad piece!!!!!!! You are such a talented author!!! If my art was as good as your pieces I would be soooooooooooo happy!!!! Never stop writing, cause you are da' bomb!!!!!!!
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primebeanboot [2014-03-01 00:37:05 +0000 UTC]
I feel this emptyness now that it's over.
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ArizonaTea207 [2014-02-22 14:00:41 +0000 UTC]
I'm crying right now why would you do this
awesome ending though and amazing story just make my tears stop ;A;
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Alexandra123098 [2014-02-17 23:48:50 +0000 UTC]
I CANT STOP CRYING! HELP ME PLEASE!
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alexchan96 [2014-02-15 09:44:20 +0000 UTC]
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lancecorporalbadass [2014-02-10 19:57:33 +0000 UTC]
*screams in frustration* NO WHAT HAPPENS. YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME. NO I NEED TO KNOW.
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Greekgeek2000 [2014-02-10 08:23:10 +0000 UTC]
.... No!! What happeneds!!
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RoupemVairem [2014-02-08 14:44:30 +0000 UTC]
fRICK FRACK
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FliqpyxFlaky [2014-02-06 00:29:17 +0000 UTC]
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I'm crying (shocker). I used to never cry until I got into this fandom and was introduced to fanfiction. I remember when the first few parts of this story were coming out and I snuck it my phone with me everywhere just to read this. I grew soooooo attached to this story. I wanted a happy ending so badly, but this was BEAUTIFUL! Thank you for your pure talent and please update often <3
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misterybaka456 [2014-02-02 02:03:55 +0000 UTC]
that, my friend, was beautiful
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myheartwillbreak [2014-02-01 17:16:14 +0000 UTC]
ZEPH OH MY GOSH WHY
you just ripped out my heart in a zillion different ways
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S0ulH4cker [2014-02-01 06:39:10 +0000 UTC]
Q_Q I'm gonna go cry now, bai... SJGBVLERIBGEILGBES #THISWASSOFUCKINGAMAZINGILUVYOUSOMUCHTHANKYOU *deep inhale*
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Fullmetalfreak115 [2014-02-01 00:22:13 +0000 UTC]
Waaaaah! I really hope Levi and Reader-chan meet again! Great job! I reeeally loved this series. X3
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MsErieChan [2014-01-31 02:11:04 +0000 UTC]
BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRR T.T IM SO SAD WHY AUTHOR CHAN?!!!! (i loved it dough
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Lissa-Chan820 [2014-01-30 21:29:41 +0000 UTC]
*sobs violently*
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Sparkling-Cupcake [2014-01-30 19:17:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow! The ending is much better than I imagined. I apologize for having not been very much help close to the end, Zeph-san, but it came out beautifully without having to kill anyone, or cause too much emotional trauma to Reader-chan. Thank you very much for allowing me to be a part of this amazing project. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.
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lunarecitta [2014-01-30 04:16:50 +0000 UTC]
wHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME THERE BETTER BE A SEQUEL OR I'M GONNA DIE IS2G I'M CRYING RIGHT NOW
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Zephyros22 In reply to lunarecitta [2014-01-30 23:32:17 +0000 UTC]
No sequel, I apologize. v.v
But maybe, just maybe a follow up story
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lunarecitta In reply to Zephyros22 [2014-01-31 05:06:12 +0000 UTC]
YAYY
please please omg this story is amazing
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DragonGames [2014-01-30 03:48:17 +0000 UTC]
This was literally the best story I have ever read. I'm crying iloveyousomuch
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Zephyros22 In reply to DragonGames [2014-01-30 23:32:39 +0000 UTC]
It makes me so happy to hear you say that! Thanks so much and I'm glad you enjoyed!
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RKGarl740 [2014-01-30 03:41:35 +0000 UTC]
I had so much fun following this series, and I really look forward to your future ones!
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XxIxbitexX [2014-01-30 01:32:06 +0000 UTC]
im sobbing oh my gosh youre brilliant
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superfungirl [2014-01-30 01:15:30 +0000 UTC]
*crying* NOOOOOO!
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AngelofDarkness626 [2014-01-30 00:56:39 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'm going to cry in the corner for an hour. Thank you so much for the wonderful series, I had a great time reading it. I look forward to your future works.
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