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ZettoSan — MLP:FiM DnD Comic 1.2

Published: 2011-04-20 21:20:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 16824; Favourites: 128; Downloads: 797
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Description I feel MUCH MUCH better about this one. However, critique is needed. But I feel like this is a step up from the first version.

This is a comic that took me about 2 days to work. I did it as a test of my own skill for making picture comics, like DM of the Rings or Darths and Droids.

The upper left and upper right panels are actually a few screenshots put together, and made to look like one. Since MLP is done in flash, it's pretty easy to line up the original images, so I can have all the ponies have their eyes open at once, or have all the ponies in a single frame.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE criticize it. I wanna make this a bit of a project but I need help. Tell me where you see flaws, where I need improvement, etc. This is all a work in progress so any feedback will be helpful.

For my Bronies.
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Comments: 57

BananaCrocodile In reply to ??? [2015-08-08 01:38:39 +0000 UTC]

Dungeons and Dragons is a tabletop RPG game. It's also played in BronyCon under the name of "Legacy of Harmony" (I think.)

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Flying-Spirit-Shadow [2013-09-18 02:04:58 +0000 UTC]

yay I love DnD! lol I've never seen it combined with MLP, thats clever ^^

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Nexsusthenewb [2013-06-14 04:18:09 +0000 UTC]

hilarious, I demand more.

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ziggrrauglurr [2013-04-15 00:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Being that I'm starting a campaign of "Pony Tales" this way too good...

You should definitely make more of these.

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nioniosbbbb [2013-04-03 13:44:03 +0000 UTC]

[link] Ponies and DnD I SO want to play a changeling spirit of Deception right now... Btw its not finished yet i think.

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ZettoSan [2013-03-09 08:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Good lord people are still adding this to their favorites.

Should I make more?

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nioniosbbbb In reply to ZettoSan [2013-03-28 00:54:12 +0000 UTC]

You are still waiting for us to say yes? GET TO WORK SLAVE I dream about something concerning Queen Chrysalis perhaps hmmm? Meh oh also link it in the description here if you want to people can see it.

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Talisign [2013-01-22 23:29:29 +0000 UTC]

Those checks are always scary.

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ZettoSan In reply to Talisign [2013-03-09 08:03:00 +0000 UTC]

Fun fact: Horror DMs can always bring up the tension in a game by randomly rolling dice or having players make checks.

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ziggrrauglurr In reply to ZettoSan [2013-04-15 00:56:46 +0000 UTC]

That we do

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Tatsurou-san [2012-10-21 02:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Just out of curiousity...
Have you seen this?
[link]

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ZettoSan In reply to Tatsurou-san [2012-10-25 01:06:55 +0000 UTC]

Nope, but it looks kinda neato. Thanks for linking it to me.

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Tatsurou-san In reply to ZettoSan [2012-10-25 01:11:29 +0000 UTC]

Well, your comic put me in mind of it is all.
You're welcome.

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FlyingHobos--0 [2012-04-08 20:26:17 +0000 UTC]

we win!
* dances *
oh no! i rolled a 3!
.........
hello? i won to!
!!!!!!!

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MajorVoltage [2011-11-17 23:54:35 +0000 UTC]

I got a feeling she is going to take some damage.

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ArtieStroke [2011-11-03 21:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Heheh, that certainly makes me chuckle.

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ODSTD56 [2011-10-17 02:38:05 +0000 UTC]

Wait a minute. What about Pinkie Pie?

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ZettoSan In reply to ODSTD56 [2013-03-09 08:03:48 +0000 UTC]

I need to write this out because Pinkie is a total Bard ALSO SHIT THIS COMMENT IS FUCKING LAAATE DUDE

DANG ASS DANG

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Skaleal [2011-08-31 19:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is really cool! I actively play dnd and watch mlp so this is like perfect for me hah.

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kamenriderculamon [2011-08-03 08:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Chuckle-worthy and cute.

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Margritanator [2011-06-02 00:29:34 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, i would love to read a whole comic about this, very employable.

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Margritanator In reply to Margritanator [2011-06-02 00:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Enjoyable

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Kirsten82 [2011-05-23 02:52:46 +0000 UTC]

poor Fluttershy :/ I really love this! I want to play My Little Pony DnD

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mysterious44 [2011-05-16 23:32:09 +0000 UTC]

c'mon fluttershy. nat. 20 and you're clear.

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ZettoSan In reply to mysterious44 [2011-05-17 05:35:42 +0000 UTC]

It's not even that. The DC is ridiculously low.

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mysterious44 In reply to ZettoSan [2011-05-17 05:48:18 +0000 UTC]

well, is it a reflex save? because fluttershy's reflex and fort are low but her will is high. (but yeah, the pit is pretty small so the DC shouldn't be an issue) on a side note. i wanted to do a d&d fanart and i'm pretty sure fluttershy would be a druid.

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ZettoSan In reply to mysterious44 [2011-05-17 10:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Here is how I was thinking it.

Fluttershy - Druid
Rainbow Dash - Ranger
AppleJack - Barbarion
Pinkie Pie - Bard
Twlight - Paliden/Mage
Rarity - Rogue

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mysterious44 In reply to ZettoSan [2011-05-17 13:49:40 +0000 UTC]

really? i was thinking because rarity seems like a buffing character she'd be a beguiler (bard) and rainbow dash would be a rogue due to mentality and speed, (Twilight seems more Mage than paladin, she's definitely first tier) and due to apple jacks apple buck attacks, (and cuz she was legolas in the Lord of the rings trailer ) that she'd be the ranger. but yours actually makes more sense, you wouldn't mind if i used it would you?

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ZettoSan In reply to mysterious44 [2011-05-23 02:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Go for it bro. It's all cool.

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mysterious44 In reply to ZettoSan [2011-05-23 02:10:37 +0000 UTC]

awesome, thanks

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jamie23232 [2011-05-03 16:09:32 +0000 UTC]

BAHAHAHHAA.
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHA.
-continues to roflmao in pain-

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dancinninjac [2011-04-28 07:20:02 +0000 UTC]

I can totally imagine Fluttershy, at a table top game, completely petrified by the make-believe obstacle. I love it.

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ZettoSan In reply to dancinninjac [2011-04-28 11:52:55 +0000 UTC]

She can have a vivid imagination.

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purpletinker [2011-04-28 05:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

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ZettoSan In reply to purpletinker [2011-04-28 11:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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SweetieBelle-FiM [2011-04-28 04:49:24 +0000 UTC]

Would be wonderful if it was a little bigger. Wish I knew the rules of DnD, too

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ZettoSan In reply to SweetieBelle-FiM [2011-04-28 11:51:26 +0000 UTC]

Well, truth be told this was more or less a test run. I will be making a much bigger comic soon, or remaking this one from scratch, now that I know I can pull off ridiculous resolutions in dA.

What would be a good resolution to work off of? 2000 pixels wide?

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SweetieBelle-FiM In reply to ZettoSan [2011-04-28 19:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I meant bigger for the text. It's a little difficult for me to read.

Aside from that, I really like it.

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ZettoSan In reply to SweetieBelle-FiM [2011-04-28 21:33:00 +0000 UTC]

No need to feel sorry. But it's good to know if the text needs to be bigger. I think having in higher res might help. But I think I bigger text might help make the panels more succinct and punctual.

And thank you.

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NovDecJan [2011-04-28 03:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Im always a fighter so str and Dex rolls are no problem....but when we have to think our way out of a bind my party tells me to shut up

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ZettoSan In reply to NovDecJan [2011-04-28 11:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Rainbow Dash is gonna be the party's ranger, so you can totally expect her to act a little like this, preferring to fight over diplomacy.

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NovDecJan In reply to ZettoSan [2011-04-28 12:16:02 +0000 UTC]

Diplomacy is people with out atk bonuses!

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BladeSquall [2011-04-28 00:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Ah, RPGs. Love these. Though I play more Savage Worlds than DnD, it's hilarious to look at this.

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ZettoSan In reply to BladeSquall [2011-04-28 01:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it. More will be on the way.

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Dune-Cat [2011-04-27 23:30:51 +0000 UTC]

I bet FS is scared of rolling 2 XD

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ZettoSan In reply to Dune-Cat [2011-04-27 23:38:09 +0000 UTC]

She's scared because she's taking a massive penalty to her rolls because of the size of the gap and fear of dragons. Hah.

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Dune-Cat In reply to ZettoSan [2011-04-28 00:01:47 +0000 UTC]

Fear does reduce your stats too? D:
I guess she isn't gonna get too far on a game called Dungeons and "Dragons"

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ZettoSan In reply to Dune-Cat [2011-04-28 01:09:12 +0000 UTC]

do ho ho ho

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elric225 [2011-04-27 23:22:00 +0000 UTC]

works very well
don't tie it down to a specific system too hard...gaming has its own lingo that transcends system.

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ZettoSan In reply to elric225 [2011-04-27 23:34:01 +0000 UTC]

I get ya. Like I said, I will be fudging it a little. It's gonna be a character based sorta thing.

For example, the Dragonshy episode will be used for when Fluttershy joins the group. Rainbow Dash is gonna be a little annoyed because she's underleveled and they're doing a whole sidequest for her, just so Fluttershy can level up and learn the game.

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