Comments: 47
TheRealKuriniko [2021-05-02 00:18:16 +0000 UTC]
"They were interrupted by a certain silver hammer crashing into their back, causing them to fall forward, colliding with the ground "
But you just said that it was made entirely of flame and mjolnir had just went through it
Also that toddler probably wasn't me, but an illusion and I am the fire being.
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ADickson10193 [2019-04-19 17:17:31 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait to read more but I can wait stories takes time and patient and I know how that feels to write a story and chapters of the story. But take your time no need to rush the story patient it's the key to every great writer and story. I'm wondering you put in one of the Infinity stone inside the reader's body and how did that work for the reader from growing up to a teenager and back to the toddler that's got to be hard to think of in this story.
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RaeGaming [2018-05-02 01:56:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm loving this story!!! I am I was at the edge of my seat when he said an Infinity stone. I was like: WHAAAAAAAAAAAT?!! But then I'm also sick at the same time sooooooo I was all like: the whole time I appreciate you for writing this story!
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AnubisLovesMe [2018-03-08 00:11:31 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy this and will love seeing more. I'm also patient and will wait to see when you bring more
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LadyCobblepot [2018-01-09 19:49:49 +0000 UTC]
Where is chapter eight? I just finished reading the previous chapters in about 10 minutes and there is no chapter 8. This is a very good story and I want to read more. Please.
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LilaKatze1806 [2017-07-31 18:38:05 +0000 UTC]
Please wirte more it is great
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LadyKiwinisuki [2017-07-28 08:03:04 +0000 UTC]
Plz come back and finish the story PLEASE
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Reading-artist [2017-05-26 02:28:29 +0000 UTC]
PLZZZZZZ more!!!
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ZodiacPI100 [2017-05-08 15:14:59 +0000 UTC]
This is interesting please update soon!!!!
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Sharpie-the-World [2017-02-25 03:23:25 +0000 UTC]
can you tag me when the next chapter is out?
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Potatoe321 [2017-01-22 00:10:59 +0000 UTC]
Omg more pls
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ShadowXLoki [2016-09-18 16:48:40 +0000 UTC]
clint solve this now please
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Hersheypup [2016-08-02 12:33:38 +0000 UTC]
I love this story x3
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mizzmartian [2016-07-22 13:12:10 +0000 UTC]
Please update soon
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Sweetiepie14 [2016-05-12 18:01:19 +0000 UTC]
itsbeensolong, pleaseupdatesoon!
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AlfredWilliams [2016-04-20 00:37:56 +0000 UTC]
been a year bro
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karsi25 [2016-02-17 20:24:24 +0000 UTC]
Will you continue this story??
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TamaRose [2016-01-27 04:39:44 +0000 UTC]
OMG! What is going to happen? I have to know!
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AngelOfTheNight1990 [2016-01-26 22:02:18 +0000 UTC]
More please....
(puppy eyes even loki couldn't risist)
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SneakyXWoman13 [2015-11-17 06:12:22 +0000 UTC]
Lokitty demands it
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Mezzoak1876 [2015-08-23 04:46:07 +0000 UTC]
Nooooooooo! Now I have to wait! It's too good to wait!
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loverbug11234 [2015-07-25 10:44:42 +0000 UTC]
Please update soon!!
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WildWolf13 [2015-07-22 03:26:20 +0000 UTC]
More! ~
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Numbuh5335 [2015-06-14 07:29:32 +0000 UTC]
Me want more !
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DarkAngelLala [2015-05-25 03:27:08 +0000 UTC]
Im looking forward to your next piece. this story is very original, well thought out, and i find it interesting. I can not wait for your future efforts
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Lauradrakkyn [2015-04-25 20:16:56 +0000 UTC]
BUDHAPEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND PIE TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW ARE YOU SO AWESOME!!!!!! Omg BudhapestBudhapestBudhapestBudhapestfavoriteplacentheworldTahitiisamagicalplace*dies from awesomeness overload*
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zhalia103 In reply to Lauradrakkyn [2015-04-25 21:46:04 +0000 UTC]
*pokes you cautiously with a stick* Are you okay?
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Lauradrakkyn In reply to zhalia103 [2015-04-26 20:24:46 +0000 UTC]
Blargh. *grabs stick* My stick now. ~=^=~
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LightElf2001 [2015-04-23 12:56:11 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait for the next!
This is so exciting!
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Kittkatt888 [2015-04-11 22:19:42 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
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PaintTheSky83 [2015-04-05 01:57:32 +0000 UTC]
What the heck did they do to me!!!!
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Leomiragon03 [2015-02-23 09:01:56 +0000 UTC]
This is great! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Mistpaw89 [2015-02-01 20:10:47 +0000 UTC]
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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