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fogllama [2010-11-09 13:20:15 +0000 UTC]
I am a sucker for this kind of story. I still have the cheap, broken watch the last one sold me. Just a weakness of mine, I guess.
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Ziblink In reply to fogllama [2010-11-10 03:41:39 +0000 UTC]
Aaah, but it was good while it lasted was it not? Till you got apostrophes anyway.
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NycterisA [2010-11-08 19:00:45 +0000 UTC]
I very much liked it; it was desolate and full of foreboding, and had a bird in it, what's not to like!
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Ziblink In reply to NycterisA [2010-11-09 00:20:57 +0000 UTC]
You're right, it needs more cotton candy.
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Denryuu [2010-11-08 15:44:30 +0000 UTC]
Probably not an atomic bomb, seeing how there are dessicated corpses around. A nerve gas attack, perhaps. I kinda expected Mr. Meyers to be just a shadow on the steps of the bank, though, for reference's sake.
A delightful piece very in keeping with your style.
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Ziblink In reply to Denryuu [2010-11-09 00:25:49 +0000 UTC]
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AWWW DAMMIT!
Ray Bradbury's done it before has he? Is it related to There will come soft rains? I was inspired by the movie of the story to pen this, don't tell me he's done something the same? I don't remember reading anything like it in his books.
Oh, and the movie had people turned to ashes of some sort, but before they crumbled they looked like dessicated corpses.
I'm wondering if a neutron bomb would have done that, fallout too could have been quite lethal. But a nuke would crack even the most obstinate human mind methinks.
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Denryuu In reply to Ziblink [2010-11-09 01:31:00 +0000 UTC]
I also thought of a neutron bomb, but to use that against civilian targets would be overkill. It does add an extra layer of darker and edgier to the story, though, by implying that the protagonist is slowly dying of radiation poisoning instead of being killed off by the blast.
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Ziblink In reply to Denryuu [2010-11-09 04:15:53 +0000 UTC]
Overkill? Did I mention this occurred in a country that wasn't allied with America?
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Denryuu In reply to Ziblink [2010-11-09 04:24:49 +0000 UTC]
I got the distinct impression that you were hinting at the setting being a country with slavic influence.
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Ziblink In reply to Denryuu [2010-11-09 07:26:04 +0000 UTC]
Yes, they're very slavish.
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