The Dark Guardian is very cool. I didn't like the boss fight in Unleashed against him, but he's fun to draw. Any criticism is appreciated as all I want to do is get better!
TheAtaerraVoltArtist [2016-09-07 04:03:54 +0000 UTC]
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First off, amazing job on the little details! The places you show darkened are accurate to where the light should be hitting. The last panel shows much depth and detail. I will now take this moment to applaud you on how well you did Sonic's hands in the second panel! Also in the second panel, the way his body is angled it shows impact. Some people don't remember that body language helps the reader understand what is going on. Thumbs up on that!Now, in the very first panel, I understand why his eyes are small,but they could use some coordinating. If the eyes aren't coordinated the character looks crazy and/or cross eyed.Second panel, The only problem I see with this one is that Rotor's body isn't finished. He is quite a bit bigger than Sonic, it would stand to reason that readers could see a little more of his body. I understand that some of his body is behind Sonic's head, however it would be good if one of his feet showed so that people don't think you're lazy. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>I hope this helped! Wonderful job, fellow artist!
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angelontirartistic [2020-04-23 20:57:35 +0000 UTC]
Ded not a big soos
Sonic-fan17 [2016-01-15 19:20:59 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
OmegaMorph [2016-01-11 19:28:36 +0000 UTC]
I'll have to see how the boss fight in Unleashed was like again. Did good showing off the Werehog transition.