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Published: 2018-03-11 22:01:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 770; Favourites: 69; Downloads: 0
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Description My character Fiora, from one of my stories. She's a vampire who feeds on those who got lost in life. She seduces her her prey with compassion and promises of affection, then make them offer themselves to her so she can drink their blood. She doesn't leave any survivors. Her favourite place to hunt are big cities as it's easier to find humans who won't be missed if they disappear there...



This is my entry for 's "Good vs Evil Contest". Of course, I'm submitting her as an evil character.
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Comments: 26

infinessence [2018-04-08 04:38:35 +0000 UTC]

Love this city scene! The detail and perspective look like they would have taken a while - it pays off here! I also think the nighttime lighting works really well. You grow by leaps and bounds every time I drop by dA - keep being awesome
-Mae

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Zitruseis In reply to infinessence [2018-04-22 15:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! The perspective and detail were indeed what took the longest, I needed a lot of pacience there. ^^ I haven't been drawing a lot lately, so when I do I feel like I should move out of my comfort zone and try to improve. I'm glad it shows.

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VisusVolo [2018-03-13 02:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Love the cityscape! You really captured the "light radiation" effect, as well as the dimensional depth, quite well! I can almost hear the humming of the neon lights!

Also, love the green-eyed stare and flowing hair, but I have to ask. Isn't she cold? Do vampires get cold?

Great stuff!

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Zitruseis In reply to VisusVolo [2018-03-13 09:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm happy to hear it's so immersive!

Probably depends on your interpretation of vampires. In this case she doesn't feel the cold, at least not in a way that's uncomfortable. She's already undead, so it won't kill her and her body doesn't produce warmth, so she should be used to it anyway.

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VisusVolo In reply to VisusVolo [2018-03-13 02:41:08 +0000 UTC]

I guess acting "cold" could be part of her trap, haha.

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Zitruseis In reply to VisusVolo [2018-03-13 21:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Haha, could be, though it doesn't fit her usual hunting pattern. XD

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VisusVolo In reply to Zitruseis [2018-03-14 01:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Ah... So what would be a good example of her usual hunting pattern, may I ask? 

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Zitruseis In reply to VisusVolo [2018-03-16 09:52:39 +0000 UTC]

Well, she usually seeks out someone who is very lonely and suffering from unhappiness/grief/depression. She offers them compassion, company, a listening ear, a shoulder to cry on and a promise of love. But instead of using these things to help, she feeds into her victim's negative thoughts and weakens their desire to live. Then she slowly reveals her nature and the fact that her love comes at a price, while still maintaining that affection. And finally, she just waits for her victim's desire for her to become greater than their desire to live. She never bites someone who is unwilling. (At least not in the traditonal sense - I suppose you could say that being being manipulated and taken advantage of when you're at your lowest kinda counts as being unwilling.)

I think I was inspired by the siren archtype - someone who is so alluring that you can't resist, even though you know the terrible consequences of giving in.

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VisusVolo In reply to Zitruseis [2018-03-17 21:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Ah... Sort of like the Venus Flytrap approach! Very nice! Lol

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Domisea [2018-03-12 19:56:59 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful colors

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Zitruseis In reply to Domisea [2018-03-12 20:07:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Domisea In reply to Zitruseis [2018-03-12 20:23:52 +0000 UTC]

though, I feel bad for her victims heh

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Zitruseis In reply to Domisea [2018-03-12 20:46:04 +0000 UTC]

Me too. It takes a certain kind of evil to play mindgames with people before eating them...
The sadistic writer in me loves it though.

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atram95 [2018-03-12 11:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Your draw is Magnificent!! Congratulation I love it!!

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Zitruseis In reply to atram95 [2018-03-12 11:16:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Glad to hear it.

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anniecoleptic [2018-03-11 22:26:40 +0000 UTC]

damn that background must have taken FOREVER to draw! love the mood you set too. awesome job!

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Zitruseis In reply to anniecoleptic [2018-03-12 09:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the windows in particular took a long really time. Thank you!

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anniecoleptic In reply to Zitruseis [2018-03-13 03:02:05 +0000 UTC]

i bet! all those lights i'd die!

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Zitruseis In reply to anniecoleptic [2018-03-13 09:33:44 +0000 UTC]

I learned some shortcuts after a while, thankfully.

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Panartias [2018-03-11 22:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Amazing picture - I like the character and especially the city-background! 

The neon lights look so pretty...  

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Zitruseis In reply to Panartias [2018-03-12 09:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm usually not a huge fan of modern settings, but there is something special about cityscapes at night, right?

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Panartias In reply to Zitruseis [2018-03-12 17:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Right!  

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ThaIssing [2018-03-11 22:03:48 +0000 UTC]

this is so beautiful aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

I have been a joy to watch all the progress on this! ;A;
I hope you will do well in the contest!

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Zitruseis In reply to ThaIssing [2018-03-11 22:07:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuu!!! I'm glad you were there - your words are always so motivating! (Even for lazy people like me!)
I hope so too.

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ThaIssing In reply to Zitruseis [2018-03-11 22:22:27 +0000 UTC]

any time!! I always love to see all your art aaaa!! ;A;

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Zitruseis In reply to ThaIssing [2018-03-12 09:35:59 +0000 UTC]

That feeling is mutual.

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