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professorwagstaff [2016-03-30 16:14:36 +0000 UTC]
Hello, I am commenting on behalf of 's tag game and my word is "connection". I chose this particular drawing because of the obvious connection between the two characters pictured.
I would like to start out with the aspects of your drawing that I like the most. That would be the characters themselves. The way you have drawn them clearly shows their love for each other. You have done a terrific job of showing the intimacy they share for each other. The way Vlad is looking at Persephone says it all. Great job.
As far as the technical aspects of the drawing you did a great job with the composition of the drawing, keeping the two lovers dead center, and not distracting the viewer with much else. The background is simple but gives us some indication that they are somewhere, most likely a bedroom. The shading is good and the hair is magnificent.
There really isn't much that I could suggest that would improve upon the drawing. I did notice in viewing some of your other work that you tend to draw the collarbone in fully. I'm guessing that that is a style choice. Just so you are aware from the viewers point of view it gives the appearance of another layer of clothing. Maybe you would consider foreshortening your line work coming off the shoulders in towards the chest. This would give the impression of a collarbone and I think aesthetically be more appealing.
Overall though you draw very emotional pieces and I very impressed with your story telling abilities. Keep up the wonderful work.
Tag you are it!!! You will be tagging , and your word is "hat".
Have a wonderful day.
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Fenur [2016-02-23 14:34:48 +0000 UTC]
So nice! c.
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heartswave [2016-01-15 02:15:13 +0000 UTC]
very nice pic i like the info that you gave them
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asari13 [2016-01-14 16:09:25 +0000 UTC]
nice
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