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Published: 2012-06-21 21:49:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 16219; Favourites: 169; Downloads: 205
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Description After what seemed like an eternity, the thick black sludge that had engulfed her vanished. That should have been a good thing, but Usagi still felt confined. Her skin was numb, and she felt something pressing against her head from all sides. Strangely, though it felt like something was holding her eyes shut, she could still see.

Looking down at herself, she could see that she was still dressed as Sailor Moon, though where she should have seen exposed skin she saw shiny black latex instead. The sledge had apparently covered her skin in latex even through her costume.
Realising that her head felt lighter, Usagi reached up to touch her face, only to find her gloved fingers pressing on something hard and unyielding... a mask or helmet of some kind. Franticly she felt for any kind of seam or opening but found none.
It was at that time that she noticed that Ami was beside her, and in the same condition - head encased in a featureless helmet and skin beneath her Sailor Senshi costume covered in a form-fitting layer of shiny black latex.

"Ami-chan!" Usagi cried, though her voice was muffled to the point of being only a whisper to herself, "Are you alright? Can you hear me?"

If Ami was able to answer, Usagi did not hear her.
At that moment an emotionless female voice spoke inside Usagi's head.
"Initiating full Banishment protocols" the voice said, "Contact Violation - May not wear clothing"

Without warning, Usagi was struck with incredible pain, as though every nerve in her body had caught fire at once. She screamed and started another desperate search for a way out of her skin-tight prison. Worse, she saw that Ami was in just as much agony, but there was nothing either of them could do about it.

Moments later, a fresh punishment was applied in the form of a terrible droning noise that felt like it was going to shake her skull apart. Apparently Ami heard it too. They both clapped their hands over their ears, more by instinct than anything else. The noise was coming from inside their heads, so was unaffected. Both girls dropped to their knees.

"Oh, Sailor Senshi, you're just so hilarious right now" a mocking voice called from about fifty feet away.
Even through the pain, Usagi knew who it was. She looked up and, sure enough, saw Kaorinite grinning wickedly and holding a hose... a hose that was dripping black sludge.

"The pain you're feeling will never go away unless you undo your Senshi tranformations and then stay at least thirty feet away from each other" Kaorinite declared triumphantly.
"With you sealed inside those Banesuits forever, nothing will keep the Death Busters from obtained the Talismans and the Holy Grail"

"Don't... count... me... out... yet" Usagi said through her teeth. The constant punishment made it an effort just to speak, but she would never give up. Ami was counting on her. The world was counting on her.
With a titanic effort of will, she rose shakily to her feet.
"Please, Silver Crystal" she murmured.

Her locket began to glow, and then vanished with a burst of white light, replaced by the shining orb of the Imperium Silver Crystal. Her Sailor fuku vanished too, and instead she now stood tall, wearing the pure white dress of the Moon Princess.
A golden crescent moon appeared on her Bane helmet, as if burned through from beneath, and shone almost as brightly as the Silver Crystal.

'I won't let you get away with this' Usagi thought, knowing that it was pointless to speak aloud right now. With another thought, she made her sceptre appear in her right hand and pointed it towards Kaorinite.
New agony struck her, greater than before.
"May not use devices" the emotionless voice droned, "May not threaten authority figures"

Undeterred, Princess Serenity staggered forward. She would succeed. She had no choice...



Ok then. This is a little something based on Evil Dolly's Eudeamon story, but with a Sailor Moon twist.
I had also planned to have Uranus beside them in mid conversion, but she kept coming out wrong.
Oh, and I know that Sailor Moon's sceptre isn't any of her canon ones... it's kind of an amalgamation of some of them.

Yeah, not sure what else to say.
Enjoy, please comment, and enjoy


Sailor Moon belongs to Naoko Takeuchi
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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to ??? [2016-08-25 10:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Nope, Mercury is on her knees.

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WhiteSnowQueen In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2016-08-25 10:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh, forgive my dumbness ^-^

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to WhiteSnowQueen [2016-08-25 15:37:48 +0000 UTC]

You are not dumb, but I forgive you anyway

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WhiteSnowQueen In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2016-08-25 15:38:31 +0000 UTC]

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Orsini1983 [2016-06-12 11:17:32 +0000 UTC]

[continuation (script form)]

Voice: Strengthening Banishment protocol; ERROR: impossible to proceed with protocol, Banishment protocol weakening. 50%. 25%. 12.5%. 6.25%. 3.125%. 1%. 0%. Banishment protocol terminated.

Serenity: Good-bye!

(Death Busters get covered in black sludge)

Mercury: Now to finish them off. (Mercury types in a set of commands) DONE!!! Now let's see how you like it when the Banishment protocol is on you at 10,000%.

(5 hours later)

Mimette: We're all done for.

Voice: May not be allowed to communicate with others.

(Mimette tries to get up but is forced back down to the floor)

Voice: May not be allowed to move.

(Latex grips Death Busters extremely tightly around their bodies)

Mimette: {Goodbye, cruel world}

(Death Busters are crushed and killed by the black latex)

Voice: Banishment protocol complete.

[THE END]

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to Orsini1983 [2016-06-12 12:54:21 +0000 UTC]

That's... meaner than I would expect from Ami-chan

Thanks for faving

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Orsini1983 In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2016-07-28 08:55:01 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger.  BTW, here in North America (especially in my hometown of Columbus, Ohio), Ami Mizuno is known as Amy Anderson (at least in the first 82 episodes, including the 17 that never aired back in 1995).

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to Orsini1983 [2016-07-28 13:30:52 +0000 UTC]

I was aware of that

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Thunderstudent [2015-01-16 19:17:56 +0000 UTC]

It's too bad they won't be in the suits long enough to develop Eudeamons.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to Thunderstudent [2015-01-16 19:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Yes... that's assuming that Custodians programmed by the Death Busters would ever actually become Eudeamons

Thanks for faving this too

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Thunderstudent In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2015-01-16 19:24:28 +0000 UTC]

True, very true. I always enjoy your work Zoe 

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to Thunderstudent [2015-01-16 20:11:08 +0000 UTC]


Sailor Moon saves the day

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ChiefJudge [2013-04-19 18:50:58 +0000 UTC]

That's a pretty nice short story. I like your writing style, it really helps to visualize the whole setup. I also like how you described their struggle attempts and suffering. Very good illustration too.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to ChiefJudge [2013-04-27 21:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
This is one of those times where the picture alone is not enough. It needed the accompanying short story to really make my audience feel it.
I'm glad you like it, and thanks for faving

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ChiefJudge In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2013-04-27 23:28:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. I like picture+story combinations too and one day hope to be able to write some stuck stories myself.

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adat [2013-04-16 17:56:16 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to adat [2013-04-17 15:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, and thanks for faving

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CrashGordon94 [2013-04-16 11:02:25 +0000 UTC]

That was quite interesting, all I would say is that it seems the story seemed to be a little cut off at the end there.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to CrashGordon94 [2013-04-17 15:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
It's supposed to be a cliffhanger.

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CrashGordon94 In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2013-04-17 21:18:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
I see... Is it continued anywhere? It would be a shame just to leave it hanging...

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to CrashGordon94 [2013-04-18 14:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Nope. I was pretty happy with leaving it as it is and letting the viewers decide whether they like the idea of her succeeding or failing better.

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CrashGordon94 In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2013-04-18 17:09:17 +0000 UTC]

Right, I see...

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raythehedgehog12 [2012-10-29 11:53:08 +0000 UTC]

almost look like slunderman but.. sailor senshi slunderman like..... :/

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makarosc In reply to raythehedgehog12 [2018-05-10 02:11:16 +0000 UTC]

You mean Slender man?

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to raythehedgehog12 [2012-10-31 11:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Like what?

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raythehedgehog12 In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-10-31 12:06:05 +0000 UTC]

slunder-sensh.... :3

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to raythehedgehog12 [2012-10-31 14:55:48 +0000 UTC]

yes, but what the frell is slunderman?

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raythehedgehog12 In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-11-01 12:06:37 +0000 UTC]

-w- look it up...

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SnapeLover415 [2012-06-23 04:50:21 +0000 UTC]

This is great

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to SnapeLover415 [2012-06-23 06:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Not for Ami and Usagi

Thanks, and thanks for faving

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SnapeLover415 In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-06-23 19:06:41 +0000 UTC]

Lol definately not And you're welcome

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to SnapeLover415 [2012-06-24 00:22:36 +0000 UTC]

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PlayfulElegy [2012-06-22 08:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Well I feel bad for the senshi this time around. I know those banesuits are truly unpleasant. It is a good change of pace over the ones where they are assimilated (though I will say I prefer those).

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to PlayfulElegy [2012-06-22 23:08:34 +0000 UTC]

The suits themselves aren't as bad as the rules that go with being in one... ok, so the actual Banishment process in the original story is horrible, but if you stay more or less sane in a Banesuit long enough for your Custodian to become an Eudeamon, all the bad that came before that no longer matters
Though the Sailor Senshi are in Banesuits programmed by the Death Busters so that does make things worse

What do you mean by assimilated? I've never drawn them as Borg... oh right, in Jellax form or as other monsters.
Thanks for faving

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PlayfulElegy In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-06-23 02:34:57 +0000 UTC]

no problem, but yeah, assimilation is a generic term to mean brought into the group, and yeah, banesuits are pretty bad to start out in. at least the assimilation brainwashes you.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to PlayfulElegy [2012-06-23 06:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Well... there is that

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PlayfulElegy In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-06-23 06:54:02 +0000 UTC]

But I will say that I need no brainwashing to agree to become a yohma or lemure. Especially if it's certain ones...

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to PlayfulElegy [2012-06-23 06:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Such as...?

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PlayfulElegy In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-06-23 07:06:51 +0000 UTC]

Shakoukai, Jamanen, Majipan, and Atsugessho are the ones I think of most.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to PlayfulElegy [2012-06-23 07:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... is that last one the make-up droid?

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PlayfulElegy In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-06-23 07:13:44 +0000 UTC]

Yep, that's the one.

I like Shakoukai and Majipan for their ability to turn others into things (I'd like becoming one of their victims as well), jamanen for the deviantart given assimilation ability, and Atsugessho for her design.

I know 's art got me into it.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to PlayfulElegy [2012-06-23 14:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Emanon is such an inspiration when it comes to doing naughty things to the Sailor Senshi

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PlayfulElegy In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-06-23 16:49:38 +0000 UTC]

I can agree with that. Especially since it can inspire said situations for out OCs.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to PlayfulElegy [2012-06-24 00:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeppers

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PlayfulElegy In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-06-24 00:33:40 +0000 UTC]

one I thought of was an OC either finding or gaining one of the scout transformation devices, only to trade it off to the appropriate villain in exchange for becoming a monster and having a place in her rule.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to PlayfulElegy [2012-06-24 20:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Interesting

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PlayfulElegy In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-06-24 21:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, in fact it could easily be something like her converting it from a scout transformation device to a monster transformation device. The monster's power? Converting things into monsters, and corrupting other transformation devices.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to PlayfulElegy [2012-06-24 21:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, nasty... but potentially fun

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PlayfulElegy In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2012-06-24 21:34:15 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. Fighting the senshi one by one until all of them are monsters like you, then converting the world into victims or more monsters.

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to PlayfulElegy [2012-06-24 21:40:07 +0000 UTC]

I am not a monster

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