Comments: 22
ealair [2012-12-20 10:29:49 +0000 UTC]
"I'm here on behalf of because your piece was in the group's critique requested folder."
I'm really into black and white graphite portraits, and therefore I was attracted by your work! I really appreciate the fact that you started to try and draw in a realistic way. The only thing I'd suggest you to improve your work, is to 'smooth' your stroke: if you look at a picture, for example, you won't see exact outlines or definite 'edges', for example for what concernes the lips and the nose in your drawing; moreover, I'd suggest not to be 'scared' to draw more evident and dark shadows, to give more sense of depht and three-dimensionality. Try, for example, to darken lips and eyes corners, the hair, and the side not directly hit by the light.
I hope I managed to explain myself properly, since English isn't my mother tongue, and I also hope you will find my critic useful and not offensive! Keep on drawing, you'll definitely improve (:
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Zombiebaile In reply to ealair [2012-12-20 12:37:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique. I have actually done more portraits since this one. Here is one [link] , and the other. [link] . Also I never take offense to constructive criticism. Thank you again. I am glad for your support.
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Origan115 [2012-11-15 21:02:19 +0000 UTC]
one of my favorate characters (under morrigan of course) great job
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smilkey [2012-10-21 01:34:59 +0000 UTC]
This is very nice. I see a bit more shading here, area-wise. The shading encompasses a bigger area now, the problem is it still isn't getting any darker.
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Zombiebaile In reply to smilkey [2012-10-21 01:44:54 +0000 UTC]
I actually have a fear of getting darker... It's not the shading itself. It's the pencils I use. I used F for her face, and HB for her clothing, B for her armor, and I think I used either 2B, or hB for her hair. I've been told that I go to light. My next picture is going to be a little darker. I think HB, and 2B for the face, 6,7B for the hair, and 2,3B for the clothing.
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Zombiebaile In reply to smilkey [2012-10-21 01:56:13 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh. Okay. So there are different pencils for different shades of graphite. H means hard. Usually it's used for sketching, drawing out the base of a picture. It's usually very light on paper. B is for soft. It's for shading filling in areas. There are differing levels of both for instance H would be the softest of the pencils Hardness. 9H is the hardest I believe. Vice versa for soft.
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smilkey In reply to Zombiebaile [2012-10-21 02:07:45 +0000 UTC]
Alright. Me shall awaits yur next art ^_^
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kylemulsow [2012-10-19 04:07:00 +0000 UTC]
Very nice!
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Zombiebaile In reply to kylemulsow [2012-10-19 04:07:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I had a lot of fun drawing it.
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Zombiebaile In reply to SniperNoSniping1 [2012-10-17 03:33:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. I worked waaaaaay hard on this. It's nice to have a good pay off.
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carla1040 [2012-10-16 11:00:53 +0000 UTC]
awesome!!! really really good
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