Comments: 10
CassiaP [2012-10-02 01:14:29 +0000 UTC]
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It's not bad, but it could be better.
For starters, I think you should've shaded some of the areas better. They just look like random pencil marks mushed together.
Second, the chin on the girl is a bit pointy. It's not TERRIBLE, you just might want to change that the tiniest bit.
Third, it really would be better with color.
OK, on to the good and great parts:
First, the mask, like you said, looks pretty hard to draw, but I think you did a pretty well job on it.
Second, I just love the intense eyes! They are so, well, INTENSE.
Lastly, her hair is very messy, but in a good way. Very detailed hair.
Thanks for letting me critic your pic!
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mastergray [2012-10-02 05:33:55 +0000 UTC]
neeeeel chwan!!! <3
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Whetsit-Tuya [2012-09-16 06:58:51 +0000 UTC]
Good work, needs color.
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Whetsit-Tuya In reply to Zombiebaile [2012-09-16 07:03:23 +0000 UTC]
Your traditional art is significantly better than mine, but color makes a substantial difference, I make sure all of my art has color it makes it fun to look at. 99% of the monochrome pictures I see I don't ever view them I just go to the next thing.
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Zombiebaile In reply to Whetsit-Tuya [2012-09-16 07:16:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the suggestion. I wonder are there any drawing colored pencils? I'm not the best painter.
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