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Zwerchhau — To See You Like This
Published: 2012-05-30 02:41:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 148; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description It kills me inside to see you like this,
To remember what I once was,
To know exactly what you feel;

I can't help but care for you.
For you remind me so much of me.
I don't want my mistakes to pull you down like they did me.

Everything inside me tells me to tell you,
Everything I don't want you to know.
My past is dark and full of mystery,
And to think about things like that,
To remember what I was,
I don't like the feeling of knowing that you do that too.

I wish only my words could help you,
You are one of my best friends,
I want to fix you.
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Comments: 9

TheGreatKaoru [2012-06-19 23:29:29 +0000 UTC]

Awww poor friend .o.

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Zwerchhau In reply to TheGreatKaoru [2012-06-20 03:06:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm talking to her now.

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TheGreatKaoru In reply to Zwerchhau [2012-06-20 03:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Hows it going?

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Zwerchhau In reply to TheGreatKaoru [2012-06-24 04:33:36 +0000 UTC]

Shit's going down.

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TheGreatKaoru In reply to Zwerchhau [2012-06-25 18:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy .o.

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GrotesqueDarling13 [2012-05-30 02:44:05 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful piece of writing I have been there with several
people, with different situations. It breaks your heart trying to
"fix" other people. They must fix/help themselves, but you can
help them to get onto that path by sharing your pain with em

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Zwerchhau In reply to GrotesqueDarling13 [2012-05-30 02:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much. I talk to this person a lot. They're just like what I was. Inside I die a little to think that they will fall for the same reasons I did.

The road is not easy but I'm hoping I can help her down that path.

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GrotesqueDarling13 In reply to Zwerchhau [2012-05-30 02:49:48 +0000 UTC]

You're so very, very welcome!!
I believe you will help her with getting
to that road, with such amazing poems like this!

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Zwerchhau In reply to GrotesqueDarling13 [2012-05-30 02:52:08 +0000 UTC]

Yes, very much so.

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