camac [2008-08-29 23:50:39 +0000 UTC]

I always thought your icon was one of the more memorable ones on DA. Happy Aug 29 2008

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PrinceOfFire [2007-08-24 01:21:53 +0000 UTC]

you haven't gotten any comments in two years?

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Orunitia [2005-07-24 05:19:56 +0000 UTC]

you need trample and first strike! i just applied for Arizona club thingy and saw your wicked cool avatar and was like "hey that looks cool!"

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thewhopunk [2005-07-06 22:23:53 +0000 UTC]

lol check this shit out [link]

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thewhopunk [2005-07-06 22:23:23 +0000 UTC]

lol check this shit out [link]

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Mika-kun [2005-06-29 13:54:46 +0000 UTC]

How odd. I found you here on DA after like... two years of talking to you way back when we were both in Quest of Virtue... >_>; It's Kakoroto...Michael. Odd...

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DPSmistress [2005-06-22 20:51:37 +0000 UTC]

holy canoli that is scary.

who's we?

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DPSmistress [2005-05-17 21:00:14 +0000 UTC]

I’ve been virtually dead quite awhile and just wanted to let everyone know I’m back and being alive again, please let me know how you’re doing and if you need any help with anything, especially writing.

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Snake0457 [2005-05-14 00:31:01 +0000 UTC]

I still hate you...

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indiochink [2005-04-01 06:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Are you still around?

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jesusbite [2005-01-23 21:26:02 +0000 UTC]

Due to me getting involved in a bunch of shit, and being a lazy twat, there is no more "nightly" thing going for the LotN. I should call it "Link of the WheneverJesusbiteGetsOffHisAss" as it would be more truthful.

I've been delving into prose as of lately, as I'm getting back into the habit of reading and writing. These two caught my eye and I need to pimp them.

Vodkagina - [link] - by
"Once..." - [link] - by

And, of course, send feedback to because he likes it when people do that. And he's horny, too.


(PS: I plan on trying to get back on the ball with this, at least as a bi-weekly habit from now own, if not weekly. If you're not on the list (read: didn't get this message) and want to, please note me and request to be put on the list. I'll get right on it.)

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exdevlin [2004-12-24 20:09:50 +0000 UTC]

*poketh* Have a very merry Christmas!

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Pink-poppy [2004-12-22 20:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Have A wonderful christmas

Just spreading the holiday cheer

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asi2004 [2004-12-02 13:01:00 +0000 UTC]

^ ^hehee
@@
I like ur character's eyes

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Se7enNationArmy [2004-11-08 21:24:44 +0000 UTC]

We're watching you. All of us.

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Raykosen [2004-10-16 05:38:42 +0000 UTC]

hello, you have a great gallery . keep it up

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indiochink [2004-10-15 18:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Just stopping by

Have some ^_^

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neosynthetic [2004-10-08 06:08:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks for stoppin by

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Se7enNationArmy [2004-10-06 07:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, yeah, you already know you're good! Why need me to help boost that growing ego? No, no no...don't protest, you know I'm right! -bites-

Hehehe, was that pointless or what? But I know how much you love seeing me just type things out! Far be it for me to disappoint!

(You) ---> <---- (Umm...someone else? xD)

-cough- I can balance... -cough-

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onewordatatime [2004-10-04 23:36:36 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I have looked over "Savior of the Damned," "Imagery of the Universe," and "Rated R" as part of this gallery visit. Since I have left more specific comments on the first, I'll focus on the other two poems.

The language in your poems is nicely inventive. You are clever with metaphors, use lots of lively adjectives and verbs, and use concrete imagery.

I would say at times you may be a bit to wordy, which tends to make the images almost too abstract, rather than concrete. Abstraction is fine, but it tends to work better coupled with something tangible and concrete.
You had fewer spelling and word usage problems in the poem than in the prose piece, but there was still some questionable grammar and punctuation. Just read through and make sure everything reads as it should.

I hope that helps!

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psychodrive [2004-09-27 07:17:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm feeling in a bit of a serious mood right now so you're getting an extremely rare non-silly thank you. Thanks for the watch and the fave on "Sunflower Flux".

Also, you said you hoped that one day you could write as exquisitely as me (or some such thing). I just wanted to note that you can be as good as you want to be and I'm sure you'll do just fine. If you want some help improving or just some honest feedback, you can try a few groups. Those that come to mind are: *onewordatatime and `poeticks . Also, many of the writers already on dA (check out the forums [link] ) are often willing to help out, but don't spam them, just join in on the conversation and eventually you'll get some people around. Also, ^Astrophel is one of the gallery directors. He's a delight and will no doubt give you some more links, pointers and such if you ask nicely (though he's more into prose than poetry)

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DPSmistress [2004-09-26 15:59:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the lovely comments and watch. I hope you enjoy your mailbox.

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DPSmistress [2004-09-24 11:42:48 +0000 UTC]

Hello there, stopper-by.

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FatalitysB1ade [2004-09-21 18:34:11 +0000 UTC]

Woowaa! xP ... yeah.... I is weird... eeehehehe

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iAmNerdgod [2004-09-07 02:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for all the comments.....and they were REAL comments.



SOMEONE's trying to get bonus points.

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iAmNerdgod [2004-08-30 01:44:52 +0000 UTC]

Howdy

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indiochink [2004-07-20 04:32:50 +0000 UTC]

umm... so sorry I have to leave this at your doorstep...

YOU'VE BEEN HIT IN THE FACE WITH A GUMMY BEAR!!!
And you have been given a bag of gummy bears to throw back!
So throw them at the next innocent person that standing near you!
RULES!!!
1-You must throw gummy bears at at least '6' people!
Your ammunition!
2-You can't throw a gummy bear at the person who threw one at you.
3-Unfortunately, you can't eat them.
4-Start spreading the gummy bear throwing love around DA!
Let the chucking commence!

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