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[2015-07-30 11:34:08 +0000 UTC]
(Serbia)
# Statistics
Favourites: 518; Deviations: 46; Watchers: 15
Watching: 44; Pageviews: 6347; Comments Made: 304; Friends: 44
# About me
Well, I've never been much of a writer, nor do I have significant bio.I am 18 years old dude with ambitions bigger than the universe who hopes to one day achieves his goals in becoming one of the greatest digital artists in the world. I wouldn't bother you more with text so please, get to enjoyig!
# Comments
Comments: 47
Thank you very much!
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Nema na cemu, uvek!
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nema na cemu.nadam se da je bilo odlicno.
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I obozavam vas rad!
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hvala.i meni se mnogo svida tvoja galerija.
pozdrav.
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Bilo je bas dobro.
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Thanks for approaching me about critiques! I read through your comic and it seems like you have a concrete grasp on using panels to push sequential action through. As others have mentioned your drawing could tighten up a little ink-wise, but it is clear you have a gritty angular style (reminds me a little of Hellboy by Mike Mignola, albeit without so many shadows). Your coloring seems to use the same values (if you squint your eyes few appear to give 'lights' or 'darks'. Vary up the values a little bit to push things forward and back in your compositions). I like the dots you use to shade and create texture in the background- I find I do this myself as I have not come to use texture brushes correctly, but it also make coloring less time-consuming for comics. It reminds me of pointillism from old pieces. I hope that in future pages you'll use character dialogue and action to tell the story rather than narrative text 'show, don't tell'. The only correction I might suggest writing-wise is the last phrase. Begun and Began are both past tense, but 'This is how it all begun' should either be 'This is how it all began' or 'This is how it had all begun'. Had tends to be added before past tense words with 'u' in them, like 'I swam in the lake' vs 'I had swum in the lake'. 'I swum in the lake' would sound incorrect. I hope this helps!
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Of course it helps. This is pilot episode, the one that allows me to intrpduce people to my world. That is the excuse for narrative text. Episode I, on which I am working right now, will be filled with dialog. I am using your advices in this one as well. Thank you again.
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Of course it does, thank you a lot. This was pilot epizode and the main excuse why I used just narrative text. Next comic will be filled with dialogs (I'm working on it already). I will practice more and hope to get better as time passes. Thank you for your time. It really meams to me.
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(I answered twice, sorry)
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Okay, I've taken a look and here is my opinion.
You've definitely got creativity and a good sense of composition.
Your handling of sequence is noticeably good as well. The best advice I could give you is advice that we all should follow. Practice, use reference material, and always know you can improve with effort and thought.Β
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Thank you a lot, it really means to me.
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You're welcome ^_^
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So I just checked out your comic pages and honestly you got some real talent here. You have a good diversity of angles and perspective which makes each panel fun and dynamic to read. I was given an instant vibe of the world/ atmosphere of the story as soon as i read it.
Some things that i personally would like to see that you could work on are:
Cleaner outlines would be the first thing to work on. Especially for the characters. The backgrounds can be sketchy, it gives your comic a certain stlye, but i would like it if the characters were nice and cleanly drawn.
Characters are #1, so put a little extra time into them and make em' flawless.
Throw in some more darker shading, and try to emphasize more contrast, just to get things looking more three dimensional. You have such amazing detail, but you want to steer away from your pictures looking too "Flat".
Learning how to do smaller details to improve your texturing. You need those little tones and highlights to make your textures to look like what they are.Β
You want highlights and reflection to make your metal look more metallic. And rough and grainy tones to make the ground look like its made of dirt.
Go on youtube and look up "parts of a shadow" Its a good vid just to see how shading and lighting works.
And maybe just less complicated names, the ones you have are a bit hard to pronounce.
Honestly i hope this comment helps, You are doing a really good job, I'll add you to my watch and i look forward to reading more pages. Keep up the good work!!!
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Thank you very much. I was told that I have that unexisting light that apppears sometimes, creating shadow where it shouldn't be. I will keep my mind on that more now.
About the "Marangwandians": I took tgat word from some West-Indian tongue and it means skeleton. I had to be oroginal im some way, but I think that will be the only hard words in my comics.
Right now I am working on my first episode (this one is pilot) and I wi use all your advices in it.
I will post as soon as it is finished. Thank you for your time, it helps a lot.
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Where are you from?
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Northern Illinois in the United States.
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So, you're not even near my country... Thought you are somewhere close when I saw your post.
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Naw, I just like to greet people with their flag in other countries.
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Ouh, I see. That's nice.
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No problem mate, your art is awesome
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No problem sir, it's worth it
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I like your pencil artwork, you're good at it. Do more of them!
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Thank you, it means to me
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i like your art .some look different from your other styles?
have you been practicing and or improving your skills?
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In the beginning I did all kind of diffrent things, but now I am focused on comics... I will do planty more soon. I ma glad you liked it :3
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Hey! I just wanted to say realy enjoyed your art sytle in the comic about dr. Gut and i think you shoud make more comics (sorry about my english)
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Soon the Star Wars combination with my comic character is coming. In color !
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Thank you very much, I am planning to creat the whole world of similar characters. But thanks again for support, it helps
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Hey, about you saying you love my work. You really don't mean that do you? My art is... awful, cuz i've seen better from others deviants.
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Just cuz someone is better than you doesnt mean that youre awful i personally realy enjoyed cheking your art out
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I have seen better too, but that doesn't mean that you are bad. I really do love what you do
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I'm trying my hardest to improve, but I just can't come up with new creative ideas.
This art block is strong with this one.
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Soon it will come I hope, it must come. Have you ever been thinking of diffrent style ? Or diffrent themes ?
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i had, however there are so many to choose from: digital, watercolor, ink, animation, you name it.
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I am awful with watercoler. Actually, whereever you need brush. But digital, and pencil goes fine for me. Keep up the good work
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