b1gfan [2008-07-10 02:43:39 +0000 UTC]

coolness stuff...

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drd69 [2007-10-27 14:14:19 +0000 UTC]

I do that.

I'm quite heavily into the psytrance scene around here, which is one of the biggest places for it in the country. I'm getting a reputation on the scene for going round randomly "Grrrr"ing at people when a bit mashed! Started having people coming up to me and growling back at parties and raves now, its quite amusing.

Thanks for the comments.

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drd69 [2007-10-26 00:15:46 +0000 UTC]

*bounces around a bit on the spot before the energy build up becomes too much....*

Grrrrr....

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drd69 [2007-10-24 13:44:43 +0000 UTC]

Most of the beard is now gone. Can't believe that at the age of 26 I still have a patchy beard... oh well! Just left with longer hair (which I might shave off again soon) and tasch and goaty.
Its good to be back again. Just glad I started writing again last night, cause it was really starting to get to me.
Hows things with you doing?

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101 [2007-10-12 22:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Tuppa? How come you get a more maverick nickname than me?

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angrytoom [2007-09-10 16:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Oi oi. How's tricks?

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dreaming-phoenix [2007-03-16 16:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Ok then, I'll have a look through my pieces and see if I think anything is decent enough lol. Keep your eyes open

xxxxxxx

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dreaming-phoenix [2007-03-12 17:22:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the reply and add!

I guess it is quite a long trip for the guys. But the wait is always worth it. I might put some of my own writing up...I'm not sure though. I've never thought of them as anything special. I migt put a couple of poems up and see what feedback I get (if any lol)

Emz xxxxx

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dreaming-phoenix [2007-03-10 17:50:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment. Mentallica rock! Lol. I've only seen them 3 times in the past year (they don't get to Mr Kyps very often dammit) but they are awesome every time!!
And I see you are a writer - girl after my own heart I write quite a bit, but don't tend to put it on DevArt. I'll have a look through your gallery sometime, if thats ok And thanks for the comment on my Valentines pictures - they mean a lot to me ^.^

Talk soon

Emz (fellow older men rockers fan ^^)

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flaery [2005-05-24 17:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the congrats.

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soykiller [2005-04-04 17:30:41 +0000 UTC]

hey. you commented on a piece - Cocoa Pagoda - of mine.
just wanted to thank you for the support.

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jesusbite [2005-02-14 00:30:43 +0000 UTC]

So, I finally got a list up and running for the Link of the Night. If you're not on it (as in, don't get this message, and you want to), shoot me a note, or leave a message or just somehow let me know. Same goes for the instance that you want off the list - please let me know.

Happiness , by .
The Interview , by .
Rusting Bridges of Suburbia , by .

So, I did some peruzing, and earthed up these three pieces.
Happiness is beautiful in its own simplicity, and has a subtle kick to it that I find lacking in a lot of reading these days.
The Interview is an interesting little for-the-stage piece that I found myself cracking up over, all over the place. There's some great humor and dialogue going on here, as well as some great subtle toss-ins for the actors to experiment with. Something I would love to see performed.
While Rusting Bridges of Suburbia might be a little ho-hum subject-wise, the rhythm and control of meter that ~ honestbrutality has accomplished here is impeccable. It takes a lot of practice and a lot of control of vocabulary to get a good rhythm in a slam piece these days, and it's done beautifully here.



Get writing, fuckos. *jesusbite

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realfunfuneral [2005-01-13 00:21:55 +0000 UTC]

Ahh that sucks, dear.

I've been single for...*counts*...sometime ever now and it ain't helped me.
Mind you, you can write, so that's always a bonus.
Feel free to add me to your MSN if you like, rather than me flooding your page.

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realfunfuneral [2005-01-09 16:49:51 +0000 UTC]

That's what I like to hear.
Doubt I'm back for long, this place grates rather rapidly.
Also, I can't write anymore.
Sucks to be me.
You good dear?

x

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realfunfuneral [2005-01-04 19:14:54 +0000 UTC]

You came back.

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ldemosthenes [2004-11-30 22:30:18 +0000 UTC]

I've been dead, too. But I think I am going to give DA one more try. If you are still around, please send me a line or comment, and we will talk. I always thought of you as one of the better writers here, and I'm sad that you are not writing still.

see you around - D

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jklunde [2004-06-18 03:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for dropping by, raguel. You're one of those rare few that stood out above the crowd for me, so I'm delighted to hear your thoughts on this new piece.

No worries about misinterpretation. I believe that my message that I attempt to instill in a written work is just one possible voice to be heard, no more valuable or worthwhile than any other you might hear if you care to listen. I'm glad that you think about it and listen, so never fear my making a judgement about what you might hear. I'm only inclined to view unfavorably those who don't seem to think or listen and you have already proven many times over to me that you are blessedly free of that condition.

Since you asked a direct question, I'll simply say that my impression is that merit is an objectively measurable phenomenon rather than a purely human construct. The thought that sparked this piece is simply that merit is a much more suitable qualification than nepotism or any other factor that is not determined by an individual's controllable factors. I happen to believe that a civilization succeeds to the extent it is based on the sum of individual resolve, determination, responsibility and control.

Or something like that.

Cheers!
JK

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jklunde [2004-06-06 17:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Not sure whether DA will post this (having a bad day on that score) but just wanted to say I've been spending a little time here in the past week and recently submitted something. Thanks for the interest while I was away, I apologize that my need for time away had to keep me from so many worthy people (I would count yourself among these).

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sumants [2004-04-20 00:09:05 +0000 UTC]

I say write both ways and see what makes you feel better. I'll give you the benefit of my opinion if you'd like...either way...

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drd69 [2004-04-15 21:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Lucky you, I feel like shit tonight... which is probably why I'm paying attention to DA again...

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sumants [2004-04-06 14:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Now that I've waited for the fajita smell to go away, let the monkey lovin' commence!

So what's the status of this novel that you've ostensibly begun?

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101 [2004-03-27 02:35:37 +0000 UTC]

I love you. (Obviously in an "I appresiate this has to be a not-sex-kinda-way" way) You're my special girl. Keep expressing the human condition 'til someone listens. xxx

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sumants [2004-01-08 20:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Hey Luce, good to see you back. I got back from my trip home last weekend, and I'm still beat. But I'll catch up, I promise.

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drd69 [2004-01-02 09:01:43 +0000 UTC]

What job you got?

Hope your celebrations were good and you're suffering like I am!
Happy new year!

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ldemosthenes [2003-12-31 17:15:29 +0000 UTC]

I did have a good christmas. I watched six movies Hope yours was good as well, and a happy new year. Glad you're back with the living

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realfunfuneral [2003-12-30 23:25:14 +0000 UTC]

Partner in Wonderland.
I hope you realise that that is my official title now.
Thank you dear.
I am Honored.

x

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realfunfuneral [2003-12-13 02:23:46 +0000 UTC]

Just a jaunty ramble,
A passing through,
A tip of the hat,
And a rhyme for you.

Here lookin at you kid.

x

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drd69 [2003-11-13 22:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you darling, those comments ment a lot to me.

The nipple is sore after sun and mon nihgts, but ok, getting new piercing soon.

I is in a weird mood (as you'll see in my journal) and not to well, been running myself ragged and turned up to work today and puked. Ain't ill, but been eating things that my body is intolerent to and only eating a meal a day and only getting 4hrs sleep a night if I'm lucky. NOT good. And its caught up with me finally today, got sent home and promptly went to sleep for 5hrs. Just drunk a bottle of red wine after doing myself some Proper food and am feeling better.

Hows thigs with you babe?
Hope you is ok. Speak to you later darling.

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deadlywhispers [2003-11-11 05:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Hey
Just wanted to say I've check out some of your stuff in your gallery. looks great. Now i just -have- to stalk you
Lee

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sumants [2003-11-04 20:34:20 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, you read my like a second-grade textbook. Of course I like to know such things. Reminds me of long overdue monkey lovins.

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ldemosthenes [2003-10-15 03:14:13 +0000 UTC]

glad to see you're back! Haven't been able to check up on this in a while, so I'm a bit late. But I'm glad to see you're around!

unfortunately, my scheme to plagarize your poetry and publish it has now unraveled, so I write this from minimum-security prison. At any rate I hope we can still be friends.

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realfunfuneral [2003-09-25 20:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Mobile libraries were crazy inventions.
Always thought they should've been accompanied by excessive jingly jangly music and dancing elves.
As for mobile comfy chairs i gotta get me one of those.
Didn't some guy nearly get arrested for drivin one down a motorway?
I risk i'd be willing to take i think.
Ooo even better would be my bed on like monster truck wheels cruisin down the street.

x

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realfunfuneral [2003-09-25 03:51:52 +0000 UTC]

Well dear, it just so happens that i rent my room out for just such events as onanism.
Prices are low an if my door is closed no questions are asked.
I'm not resposible if the pictures end up on the internet and i make vast amounts of profit though =]

On a different note, did you find a mobile?
I'll assume it was of the phone variety and not, par exemple, the disco variety.
Although that would also be good.

xxx

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realfunfuneral [2003-09-23 16:54:14 +0000 UTC]

I hope you're aware that your message caused me to spill milk and cereal all over my keyboard [not a euphamism].
Free house and vibrators sounds like marketable fun right there.
You best had return soon though.
We need your flourish and flare desperately.

xxx

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fauxgravity [2003-09-17 19:15:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, as always, for a wonderful comment. i was so pleased to read your reaction on the poem... i wish people would stop trying to dissect it.

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sumants [2003-09-04 01:32:42 +0000 UTC]

ummm...I'm not the greedy kind. I'll start with monkey lovin' and take it from there...

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sumants [2003-08-02 20:32:28 +0000 UTC]

I didn't like the third stanza of Terminus either. It needed to be there, but I wasn't sure what to do with it, and people couldn't give me suggestions, so I left it there. The end was intentionally blunt. It's the usual style of the cynic to complain but not contribute, and finally, he still whines that his escape plan isn't working.

Maybe one more stanza might have helped to set the stage for the exit...

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realfunfuneral [2003-08-01 21:04:23 +0000 UTC]

Wordsmithery should be a word.
I demand it.
Think you best sell your graffited fruit on ebay or something.
Graffiti some exquisite words on there like "wordsmithery" or "triptych" and i'll definately buy them.
Also if you have a spare muse going i could do with one.
Plus some motivation.

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littleredelf [2003-07-31 18:37:45 +0000 UTC]

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littleredelf [2003-07-31 03:02:32 +0000 UTC]

hello
thanks very much for taking the time to read
and to comment on BECOMING OPHELIA
i wanted to differentiate the voices
thus the RED text, but then,
i suppose italics would've sufficed.

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31 [2003-07-25 12:14:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks for commenting on the moaning eyeball - that was a complete blast to write and i was irked that it received no attention - i guess humour surrealism isnt welcomed in these parts....

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sweet-agony [2003-07-09 01:37:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the comment. glad you enjoyed the cookies. haha. hopefully next time i can provide a greasy fat meal or something

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jl [2003-07-06 23:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Cheers for your comment; wonderful to have writers like you up here Please go on with pieces like that!

Regards

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wernstrum [2003-07-06 21:02:02 +0000 UTC]

hey thanx a bunch for ur comment of my piece Family Portrait
it means a lot to have the positive feedback u gave me

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drd69 [2003-07-04 11:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Hi babe!

I got tickets to see deftones at wembley in sept!!! YAAAAY!!!

I do love the feel of your writting, kinda like a romantised William Gibson (check him out if you ain't already, think you might like...).

Gonna be trying to get my own place again over next couple of months... and cable connection too!

Check out my latest (first in a long time.), would like your opinion.

Catch yous later babe.

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entropicsuicide [2003-06-29 18:27:59 +0000 UTC]

HOWQDARE YOU SAY SUCH THISNGS ON MY ART!!!1! MY ARTR IS FOR PERSONALK EXPRESSIONZ ONLY!!!

WHO9 ARE YOTU TO SAY BAD THINGS ABOTU THE ARTS i MAKE?!?!!!!!??!!!111.

Thanks for the comment, best on on that work to date, in my opinion. But, like I've said before, if you read my poetry and only see imagery, you've missed the point

aren't I an unqualified ass?

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sirensin [2003-06-28 01:22:00 +0000 UTC]

oh sorry, i'm so silly--you asked me what slip into 3rd person i was talking about in my comment on some nights in the city--that part in the italics, i thought it was 3rd person when i first read it, but i see it isn't. oh well, sentiment remains the same, great poem!

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ignite [2003-06-27 04:46:42 +0000 UTC]

hi.

i hope you're well.

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sumants [2003-06-26 00:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Good to see you back, doll...

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