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Published: 2012-11-27 19:01:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1508; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 38
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Here's the first shot of my scene. I will upload different angles once the rest of the scene assets are complete.Rendered in Blender, Cycles.
Render Time: ~35 minutes.
Samples: 1500
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Comments: 19
Looks great! But one thing is the pillows. I think you have sculpted them? they look a little odd to me. maybe try to make them smoother. and look at some pictures of pillows to see how the folds are and stuff.
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Oh yeah, they were sculpted indeed. It was my first trial in making pillows, didn't turn out as I hoped for. Thanks for your feedback
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For your first try they are great!
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I hope you don't mind some crit?
The floor texture is too rough, floorboards wouldn't have such a displacement or regular patern unless it was lino. The settee is rather deep but the texturing on that is beautiful! The lamp has something wrong too, I think it's too bright compared to the ambient light. Even when it's overcast there is a very high light intensity so the lamp needs to be a touch dimmer to better integrate it into the scene. The door down the corridor looks too squad I think, it only looks about 5 feet tall at most. I think dimming the lamp will improve the lighting on the shelves and plant too.
Obviously you don't need to listen to any of this, and definitely don't take offence. I think it's an amazing render and the plant and cushions especially are really wonderful!
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Not at all. I welcome such critique since it will improve my future renders
For this image though I used very low camera focal length (~22) which makes the door look small (which is actually about 2 meters high and 1.2 meters wide) and also makes the sofa look too deep.
As for the the other points you mentioned, you're 100% right. I kinda liked how they look without actually thinking how they should look in real life
No offence is taken, on the contrary, I'm glad you told me things that I wouldn't have noticed otherwise
Thanks so much for your feedback!
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I'm glad you didn't take it the wrong way n_n Good luck! Can't wait to see more of your work
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hehe, great job out there.
it really looks awesome.
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