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Achiru-et-al — RAVEN II. III. 53-54
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the scenery and backgrounds really leave me starstuck... ur. so. good.
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I think it should be noted that I've been completely lost since the blue-haired kid fell off the cliff. And I say the blue-haired kid because that's the only definite way I can think to Identify him or her, since I haven't been able to really figure out which name belongs to which person. I seriously think the only comic that's ever confused me more than this one was the FLCL manga.
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Is it odd that I feel an overwhelming urge to hug him in that last panel? Or did you mean for that feeling to spring up?
So beautiful, I want to live in that forest
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That forest also has creepy crawly insects and critters. 
-achiru-
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His pose in that last pannal is so perfect and speaks so many volumes! Awwww
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The thing that caught my eye was the fact that he's wearing a robe-like thing in the first panel and in the second panel he's wearing pants... I assume that he wears pants under the robe, but where did the rest of the robe go? (I kinda expect it to be pushed under him so he can sit, but I don't see it anywhere).
Of course, I'm just seeking out things to complain about. There's not much. :]
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I finally got around to correcting that. (Ha ha, it took five months.) Thanks!
-achiru-
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Haha, wow. I would feel bad if my comment has been bugging you all this time, but part of me is glad that you took my suggestion.
I can't even remember what it looked like before, though. Still looks good to me!
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Thanks!
Well I do want to do my best job to keep things accurate, so pointing stuff out is good! (I just have to wait for time to free itself up sometimes.)
-achiru-
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Yes, there are pants under the robe, they are cut at the sides so that when sitting the front part of the robe kind of falls between the legs.
Except I forgot how long they were, so technically you are correct in that it should show over the log he's sitting on. I may correct that should I ever get around to it.
Thanks for pointing that out.
-achiru-
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Really love the scenery and lighting in this page. =]
I love this so far (I read all of Raven today.) yet I still am confused. *is slow* Hopefully I'll start to put two and two together later on.
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You're not the only one confused, so hang in there. I'm sorting it out myself. XD;;; Thanks for reading!
-achiru-
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Wow... the colours really bring out his emotions and the way his head is turned...
But dudeeee! Stop having soooo many freaking names for all your characters!!! @.@
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Aww grats on the last panel, really! it makes me want to hug him so bad! Even more than normal!
I'm going to be craving Sundays now y'know
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Xei's pose in last panel= 
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It took me SO long to get that pose to look natural.
-achiru-
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then congrats! xD It was the first thing I noticed before I hit "Fullview".
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*confused* I seem to have a hard time connecting the last page to this one.
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Vera decided to switch topics and take a different path to GET TO THE ANSWER. I was running out of pages at this point, and had to cut the bush beating short.
-achiru-
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Body language is amazing here.
You know what's my favorite part? I dunno why, but Xei's left foot is
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Xie spills it all. Poor thing. *pats him on head*
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Poor him...
I just love the lighting and poses. Amazing work. ^_^
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