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Reworked one of the paintings of mine. www.deviantart.com/aizelkon/ar…
I liked the first version but it had a few problems:
- not enough attention to the main area of interest
- the girl's face.
- dogs look a bit too out of place happy. Need to add something for storytelling (a stick!)
- background wack
-flowers are a bit meh

Luckily, thanks to the great advice and portfolio feedback I received on Promised Land, this girl gets another chance <3

Description
Reworked one of the paintings of mine. www.deviantart.com/aizelkon/ar…
I liked the first version but it had a few problems:
- not enough attention to the main area of interest
- the girl's face.
- dogs look a bit too out of place happy. Need to add something for storytelling (a stick!)
- background wack
-flowers are a bit meh

Luckily, thanks to the great advice and portfolio feedback I received on Promised Land, this girl gets another chance <3