Comments: 17
darksack100 [2019-11-05 01:28:19 +0000 UTC]
She is a friend.
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ProfessorCene [2012-08-10 14:21:09 +0000 UTC]
The Spider's Nest certainly seems to be a nicer place than LOST. I'd guess that Koko'nay is an arachnid as well.
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AkityMH In reply to ProfessorCene [2012-08-10 17:52:22 +0000 UTC]
MAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaybe... but maybe not.
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Ravensaurs-Rex [2012-08-10 03:49:04 +0000 UTC]
I like her, kinda has a motherly feel to the spider.
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Ravensaurs-Rex In reply to AkityMH [2012-08-10 04:10:42 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. Also you do an awesome job explaining their world, I see you really put our talks to good use and you used them to great affect. Though there were a few bits of grammar that seemed a tad off, nothing that damaged the story as a whole but just saying it's something to think about.
Also, I like how you built up this arch's new 'big bad' there at the end.
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AkityMH In reply to Ravensaurs-Rex [2012-08-10 04:13:35 +0000 UTC]
Well the ends not a "big bad" really... its just that humans need to fight it. And we know how well those sort of things go, am I right?
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Ravensaurs-Rex In reply to AkityMH [2012-08-10 04:14:52 +0000 UTC]
Not all that bad considering they weren't completely useless in LOST.
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Ravensaurs-Rex In reply to AkityMH [2012-08-10 04:17:42 +0000 UTC]
Now, I have an idea of what they could do to finish the monster, but I'm not gonna say it just in case I guessed right. Don't want to be a spoiler-bastard.
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HewyToonmore [2012-08-10 00:10:48 +0000 UTC]
Freaky!!
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AkityMH In reply to HewyToonmore [2012-08-10 00:16:29 +0000 UTC]
A little, but thats what spiders do best in lots of cases.
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XEternalBarugon [2012-08-09 23:54:37 +0000 UTC]
i liek dis $hiT aka. ^.^
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