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Published: 2006-07-08 17:18:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 649; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 23
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Description Crowned, a new character that is part of a story that I'll never finish.



It takes place in the future, on an Earth that humans ruined and later escaped, due to it having basically no other life to sustain them. All that was left in their wake was their dear old robots, left to sit around in the demolished cities to try to lead the dead planet. Crowned here is the bad guy, trying to figure out where the humans went so he could find them and kick their sad little organic butts. They deserve it, but he's evil and he promotes suffering and destruction, and (naturally) gets in the way of the good guy.



Vertigo (whose character design is still in the works) is the good guy...it's also trying to find the humans, but so he can use their Noah's Ark (genetic stuff/preserved animals they have to try to make an Earth elsewhere), so it can rebuild the planet.



Crowned isn't a robot himself, but he seems incapable of emotions other than anger, frustration, etc. Ironically, Vertigo is a robot but able to feel happiness and other emotions Crowned doesn't feel. Vertigo wants Crowned to help it with it's project, seeing as he's probably the last organic thing on Earth, but he couldn't care less. Soon after the start of the story, they become enemies, because Crowned wants to further destroy the planet...

Vertigo has an ally, Deepblack, modeled after a snow leopard. Except it's a panther-snow-leopard. It's trying to find the humans for the same reasons as Vertigo.



And Vertigo is green...like a plant...I'll put a picture of it up soon.



So yeah, that's the story for now. It's not completely original, but I'm working on it.
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Comments: 15

wolf-boy1994 [2010-09-05 22:20:14 +0000 UTC]

thats a beautiful cat of the future.

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NazRigar [2007-12-08 11:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Is he some sort of the only surviving evolved Cheetah?

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Alex-Duma In reply to NazRigar [2007-12-20 19:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Something like that. He's not a regular cheetah (of course), he has a bunch of funny nonsense markings and is also much, much bigger than a current cheetah. I don't really have a backstory for that yet. Thanks for looking.

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FelineFire [2006-07-11 20:32:09 +0000 UTC]

You already know that I love the pic !!

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Alex-Duma In reply to FelineFire [2006-07-11 21:10:13 +0000 UTC]

*gasp*
*Gasp!*
*GASP!!*

You're here on deviantArt?? Since May? I had no idea!

Excellence dude.

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StevenRoy [2006-07-10 08:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Love those markings. I'll agree, though, that he doesn't look very robot-like... aside from those eyes. Those eyes make him look a little creepy. "Terminator 1" creepy.

As for the overall story... well... as long as it doesn't end up like a "Mega Man X" fanfiction, you should do okay, originality-wise.

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Alex-Duma In reply to StevenRoy [2006-07-10 19:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Under the fur he's all machine. And the eyes...I might have seen those eyes somewhere...but yes, they ARE creepy.
I'll try to keep as much originality to the story as I can, meaning there won't be too much "OMG vertigo, you can feel lots of happy, i hate you! the entire story will be about robots feeling emo!"

Thanks for the comment. It's more than plain compliments.

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Ripper-claw [2006-07-08 18:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Whoa thats amazing!

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Alex-Duma In reply to Ripper-claw [2006-07-08 18:28:13 +0000 UTC]

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ShadeHuntress [2006-07-08 17:39:09 +0000 UTC]

wow... very nice :]
good job

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Alex-Duma In reply to ShadeHuntress [2006-07-08 18:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Mabelisk [2006-07-08 17:19:54 +0000 UTC]

This drawing is stunning. What a beautiful robotic creature Your story sounds interesting.

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Alex-Duma In reply to Mabelisk [2006-07-08 18:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Haha...he doesn't look very robotic...
Thanks a lot, I'm glad you think my story's interesting!

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geovoidl-paradigm [2006-07-08 17:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Pretty.

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Alex-Duma In reply to geovoidl-paradigm [2006-07-08 17:37:12 +0000 UTC]


Thanks!

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