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alexcross — the poem comes
Published: 2004-01-26 19:56:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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the poem comesand then the good title comes (and goes)
and then the blank comes
and then
and then
and then
the repetition comes
and then the repetition comes
and then the girlfriend comes
saying "You repeat yourself too much."
and then you come
to realize
whatever it is you're realizing
this week
and then the anger comes
and then the compromise comes
and then
the poem comes
and then the repetition comes
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Redundancy, I think, is the key word here. Had it not been an integral part of your poem, I wouldn't have resisted the urge to rip my eyes out. But I read it to the end, and I must say its an intriguing piece. Written in a style I don't usually use or see myself, but nonetheless, I like.
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yea, not my usualy style either. but i was feeling cynical and cyclical.
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