Comments: 21
Starman1999 [2018-09-24 19:31:20 +0000 UTC]
Wow. I love Tea's skirt. Very cute
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zealousshadow [2015-08-17 17:12:54 +0000 UTC]
It's nice to see Tea's friends at her dance studio. It's refreshing to see another side of Tea, as dance is very important to her character, and to see the people who influence her life. Amber seems like a very fun and supportive friend. The first and second panel is an interesting take dimension wise. I like that the two panels merge over the lockers, but due to the angle differences, it kind of throws me off a bit.
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SkyexJill [2015-08-04 05:54:07 +0000 UTC]
I think this page is much better if you draw the place and time first so the reader not confusing where and what time this scene is. Because from Kaiba scene to Tea in this page is too sudden.
Something like this:
First, draw the building with the weather(use sun, cloud, black color(if night) and something like that)
second, you draw the girl fist with dialogue and place.
and then, Tea and the girl with dialogue and place like this page.
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Alexstraza34 In reply to SkyexJill [2015-08-04 11:20:30 +0000 UTC]
Yeah it would have been better like that I guess. I'll think about it for the next pages.
Thanks for your advice.
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SkyexJill In reply to Alexstraza34 [2015-08-04 14:03:03 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome ;D glad can help you.
I love this manga so please continue. i really enjoy the story.
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Startistica [2015-06-04 20:19:59 +0000 UTC]
Awww, poor Anzu. I feel bad for her!
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