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charleeshultz [2021-06-10 04:24:05 +0000 UTC]
awesome story
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sallyane [2014-09-09 13:27:24 +0000 UTC]
great thoughts nice captrion welldone
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MariaSki [2014-08-21 13:28:14 +0000 UTC]
A another great story in a caption.
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griever789 [2014-08-19 22:36:03 +0000 UTC]
Hm an interesting caption, kind of like the idea that the mother acted "crazy" before hand to make sure no one would believe the guy. Admittedly I never did understand why mothers in the caption always want their son's girlfriends....
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amandahawkins71 In reply to griever789 [2014-08-20 05:54:56 +0000 UTC]
Me too. Those caps are too clearly written from the point of view of the son.
This cap is a bit different; it isn't a bodyswap and the mother is still in her own body. She ran off with an old boyfriend, leaving her son in a duplicate of her body. No reason is given WHY she did this. A longer version of this story would no doubt explore the mother's motivation, including why she would screw over her own son so badly.
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griever789 In reply to amandahawkins71 [2014-08-21 15:20:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh sorry for misinterpreting you caption...must of been a little tired when I read it and missed a few details.
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amandahawkins71 In reply to griever789 [2014-08-21 23:40:23 +0000 UTC]
No worries. It's a subtle difference; one word among many. It's something that would've been made clear in a longer version.
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