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Published: 2014-08-19 21:57:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 13016; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 157
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Description Another Medallion of Zulo situation, this time casting the son as hapless victim (as opposed to conniving thief). And like my previous caption, it’s another tale of a son taking his mother’s place (in the arms of a man who is NOT his biological father).

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Comments: 15

charleeshultz [2021-06-10 04:24:05 +0000 UTC]

awesome story

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Totallguy1953 [2014-10-11 19:35:45 +0000 UTC]

Was surfing through and came back to this one. Have you thought of the extent of this could lead? You scare me at times. You ant that "King" writer. Would hate to get you mad at me!... Thank you for the enjoyment.

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amandahawkins71 In reply to Totallguy1953 [2014-10-12 07:50:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's a bit twisted. I can't imagine a real mother treating her son that way, yet TG fiction is full of this sort of thing. We just have to keep in mind that these aren't real people and enjoy the fantasy for what it is. (By the way, as I pointed out in the comments, the father-figure implied in the caption is not the hero's real biological father. I usually make that clear in the caption/story itself, but in this case there wasn't room and I had to make do with the added comment.)

I'm not sure why I scare you. Is it my brilliance or my soaring creativity that is frightening, perhaps because it implies a level of achievement that others can only dream of reaching? Heck, that's all I can think of... 

Lastly, I'm not mad at you. It takes more than effusive over-praise to put my nose out of joint.
Amanda

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Totallguy1953 In reply to amandahawkins71 [2014-10-12 13:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Okay. Backing off. Will be watching for the next one.

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sallyane [2014-09-09 13:27:24 +0000 UTC]

great thoughts nice captrion welldone

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MellissaLynn [2014-08-22 02:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, Amanda!    I wish I could give you a donation; I've certainly enjoyed your work enough.  Alas, I'm so poor right now that I can barely pay attention...  

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amandahawkins71 In reply to MellissaLynn [2014-08-22 07:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Mellissa. No worries. I certainly wouldn't want to deprive you of any attention. 

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MariaSki [2014-08-21 13:28:14 +0000 UTC]

A another great story in a caption.

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amandahawkins71 In reply to MariaSki [2014-08-21 23:41:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I appreciate hearing that.

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MegamanMaster64 [2014-08-21 06:28:53 +0000 UTC]

Great cap

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amandahawkins71 In reply to MegamanMaster64 [2014-08-21 09:02:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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griever789 [2014-08-19 22:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Hm an interesting caption, kind of like the idea that the mother acted "crazy" before hand to make sure no one would believe the guy. Admittedly I never did understand why mothers in the caption always want their son's girlfriends....

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amandahawkins71 In reply to griever789 [2014-08-20 05:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Me too. Those caps are too clearly written from the point of view of the son.

This cap is a bit different; it isn't a bodyswap and the mother is still in her own body. She ran off with an old boyfriend, leaving her son in a duplicate of her body. No reason is given WHY she did this. A longer version of this story would no doubt explore the mother's motivation, including why she would screw over her own son so badly.

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griever789 In reply to amandahawkins71 [2014-08-21 15:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh sorry for misinterpreting you caption...must of been a little tired when I read it and missed a few details.

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amandahawkins71 In reply to griever789 [2014-08-21 23:40:23 +0000 UTC]

No worries. It's a subtle difference; one word among many. It's something that would've been made clear in a longer version.

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