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Published: 2015-07-02 04:41:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 6692; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 122
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Description In days of old, it was commonplace for a brave knight to sally forth at the behest of his king, to seek out and vanquish some or other dark wizard who happened to be meddling in the affairs of decent townsfolk in some distant corner of the realm. The tale oft told is of a wizard vanquished and a knight returning in triumph to the court of the king. What you don’t hear about is those cases where the vanquishing doesn’t go as planned and the knight that returns to the court has been taken down a peg or three, to put it mildly.

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(Spelling mistake fixed, July 2nd)
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charleeshultz [2021-05-23 04:23:20 +0000 UTC]

I would love to be turned into a girl

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p-l-richards [2015-09-19 16:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I love this concept - well carried out as always - and I too love the willing volunteers at the end  (But pedant's corner coming up: It should be ...gift thee... not ...thou... Dative case not nominative in this instance. I personally wouldn't have had the switches between 'thou/thee' and 'you' - though it is possible. And finally 'Come ye hence..' means 'Come from here'. If you meant 'Come (to) here' i.e. Come to me, then it should be 'Come ye hither...' Sorry! Just trying to tighten up an already excellent caption) 

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amandahawkins71 In reply to p-l-richards [2015-09-19 19:48:41 +0000 UTC]

No need to apologize. I'm sure you're right. I claim no learned knowledge of Ye Olde English, it was just instinct from what I've heard on TV. I'll try to remember to check that next time a similar idea occurs.

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p-l-richards In reply to amandahawkins71 [2015-09-20 13:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Always glad to help!

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sallyane [2015-07-03 13:35:04 +0000 UTC]

brilliant great concept and a heck of a twist in the tail wow

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SfcSam1 [2015-07-02 17:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Love the twist in the tale.

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Totallguy1953 [2015-07-02 12:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh... Nice job done.

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zoliborz [2015-07-02 11:55:11 +0000 UTC]

haha I love the willing volunteers at the end so much

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amandahawkins71 In reply to zoliborz [2015-07-02 19:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Me too. That's the zinger!

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MellissaLynn [2015-07-02 10:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow.  A great one, Amanda!  But I want to  point something out to you, because you so rarely do this.  You've misspelled comrades...  

So how will Arthur's court treat her, I wonder?  Shades of DC Comics' story Camelot 3000...except there it was Tristan who was reincarnated as a beautiful woman.

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amandahawkins71 In reply to MellissaLynn [2015-07-02 19:38:08 +0000 UTC]

Yikes! That one slipped right by me! MY bad; I didn't check that word, like I usually do. Darn the fact that the SnagIt Editor doesn't have spell-check! This wouldn't have happened in a text editor like Word or FrameMaker. I'll fix that later. Thanks, Mellissa.

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MellissaLynn In reply to amandahawkins71 [2015-07-03 13:59:02 +0000 UTC]

Glad to help!  

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amandahawkins71 In reply to amandahawkins71 [2015-07-03 07:02:01 +0000 UTC]

DONE!

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MariaSki [2015-07-02 08:38:28 +0000 UTC]

Great Work as always Amanda.

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MegamanMaster64 [2015-07-02 07:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Nice job

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Makolic [2015-07-02 05:40:16 +0000 UTC]

...Other than defeating the knight. You went from evil lord, to sex change doctor... Pfft, I don't know which side to feel sorry for.

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amandahawkins71 In reply to Makolic [2015-07-02 05:46:24 +0000 UTC]

I hear ya, but I think the modern dark wizard is fully able to do both jobs.

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Makolic In reply to amandahawkins71 [2015-07-02 06:08:44 +0000 UTC]

Surprise someone won't be an apprentice not to become evil. But just for the extra piece. XD Dark doesn't always mean evil though.

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amandahawkins71 In reply to Makolic [2015-07-02 09:11:28 +0000 UTC]

You're right. Personally, I'm a big fan of the dark. I'm usually awake through most of it. Best time to write!

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ShinPersonaMaster [2015-07-02 05:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Nice story.

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amandahawkins71 In reply to ShinPersonaMaster [2015-07-02 05:43:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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ShinPersonaMaster In reply to amandahawkins71 [2015-07-02 06:00:43 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome.

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