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AmaranthBlacktree — APH: Liet: Toris
Published: 2010-02-23 16:05:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1165; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 29
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Debating whether or not I want to color it....lolIt's my Liet!
The Colored Version: [link]
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Hi! I haven't wrote many critiques before so I hope this is okay.
Firstly I would like to say excellent profile; it is nice to see someone take such care over the nose shape and mouth. The only critism I can make of the face is that perhaps the eye is a little too wide? From this angle the width of the eye is shortened a little bit.
I like how you have drawn Liet's hair, tie and jacket flowing consistantly with the wind and all in the same direction. Again, there is only critism of the anatomy; I feel his shoulder may a little too forward; it needs to be moved back slightly so the central/highest point on his shoulder is behind his ear.
In all though, I like the way you've drawn this with a variety of thick lining and thinner- I particularily love how the lines of his tie are not as dark; it seems right to me as it would be constantly moving in the wind. I also really like how your shading on his back corresponds to the direction of light.
Before writing this I quickly looked through your gallery, and I can tell you are improving all the time! Keep it up! Great art! ^^
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Omg thanks for the review!
Lol now that I know what I'm looking for I understand what you were saying about his shoulder...lol I was going for a slightly turned posture...Thank you for the time and effort you put into writing this! It means alot to me!
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^_^ I glad it was okay; I get a little worried when writing them encase I upset someone 
Oh, do you mean so his back is slightly turned towards us? Hmm, *thinks* maybe if the clothing seam along his shoulder was on more of a diagonal rather than a vertical? (I don't know if that made much sense
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ohhh you're right....:headdesk: I understand what you're saying.... I fail...lol Don't worry about offending or upseting me, lol I asked for a critique!
Thanks!
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jeez, this made like front page in the search for APH, well under 24 hours anyway. Congrats!
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lol I didn't see it up there....this is insane...lol thanks! Ohhhhhh I colored it! @W@
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lol cool post it soon kay
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lol it's up!!! YUUUUUSSS! Father and your present is next!
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Awesoem! 
I wanna see, I wanna seeeeeee~!
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lol Thanks, I'm getting better!!
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I hope that you will get to perfection~
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I love showing love ! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
nope that's perfect! lol I love showing love tooooo!
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I hope that this 'perfect' will be continue... But the life is malicious.
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