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Elly3981 [2015-07-02 07:03:38 +0000 UTC]
Is Eliot an OC for one of your fics?
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Anacybele In reply to Elly3981 [2015-07-02 17:04:44 +0000 UTC]
Yep, FE: Dawn of Darkness.
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Falchion1984 [2015-02-16 05:11:04 +0000 UTC]
Sorry I took so long to review this. Things have been busy on my end. Anyhow, this looks pretty good. I really like how you drew Eliot's expression, his brush, and his use of the artist's thumb. I swear, I was half expecting the name of that technique to be more elaborate. The armor looks great, as always. I am wondering, however, are those tails as prominent as you drew them? I'm guessing they're from Radiant Dawn, and possibly Path of Radiance as well, but I don't recall seeing them very clearly. The pose is pretty good also, but I am wondering if it could be improved. Having an easel in the shot might be a bit much, but what about some canvas for him to paint on? Possibly, he could be holding the canvas in his left hand and have the brush between his teeth, but ready to change up the arrangement once he's got a clear picture (pardon the pun) of how the subject ought to be painted. Well, just a though, it looks quite good as-is. Anyhow, I just sent a note with some cosmetic suggestions for the description, which is pretty good for the most part. I hope my suggestions help you, and I'm eager to see what happens next in the DoD-verse.
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Falchion1984 In reply to Anacybele [2015-02-16 07:07:38 +0000 UTC]
So, were those tunics RD only? I suspect I either overlooked them or the default camera angle during battle didn't let me see them. Of course, my eyesight has never been stellar. And, yeah, that new pose would take a lot of alteration. But, if you do another pic with Eliot, maybe that pose I suggested could be put to use? Creative recycling. Anyhow, I look forward to seeing your new chapter, and catch you later.
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RubyDragonCat [2015-02-08 23:53:42 +0000 UTC]
And you colored him and he looks just as awesome.
One thing though: What are those cloth looking thingys hanging off his leg armor? I don't think I've seen those before.
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Anacybele In reply to RubyDragonCat [2015-02-09 00:47:40 +0000 UTC]
Yay. ^^
And those are just part of his tunic. Many knights in Tellius have tunics like that, especially in RD. Kieran, Titania, Geoffrey, Astrid, and even Makalov all have them there. Titania also has a long tunic like this in PoR, as does Geoffrey.
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RubyDragonCat In reply to Anacybele [2015-02-09 00:52:53 +0000 UTC]
I didn't notice any of them having that. Huh...
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