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ANNERICA138 ā€” Commission - Felutiahime 1 by-nc-nd

Published: 2012-12-26 09:13:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 731; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description from Felutia in wonderland!!(?)
My 1st Commission ;[];/ Thank you so much!!
I love to draw her mascot. I like all of her costume! >_<
I tried to create background. But I'll do some perspective in next picture.TwT


I'm opening Paypal Commission.


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Comments: 4

MissChibiChild [2012-12-26 20:47:42 +0000 UTC]

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Let's see. . . First off, this is a very well illustrated piece. My critique on shading would me that in some places the blending could be a bit smoother. There is some streaking here and there that look a bit messy. My other critique would be that maybe the background contrasts the girl a little too much. The girls overall color palette is neutral and dark. Then you have this extremely bright background. So I'm not entirely sure what the mood of the piece is. She has a small smile, and is sort of huddled in on herself, like she's thinking, shy, or cold. Then you have a bright, warm background.
What I would suggest is to think about the mood you want to convey in a piece because that affects your color palette. Overall, this is a very well done piece with only a few things to work on. The commissioner is very lucky! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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ANNERICA138 In reply to MissChibiChild [2012-12-28 18:15:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'll keep it for next work!

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nuuira [2013-04-14 09:45:43 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!! Well... all your work is haha (: Could you tell me what kind of utensils do you use for painting?? You'll help me a lot!! Thanks

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ANNERICA138 In reply to nuuira [2013-04-19 09:54:20 +0000 UTC]

I use Wairo paper with Cotman watercolor. For brush I use SEIKAI. XD

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