Comments: 16
HidePerso [2017-02-10 10:08:59 +0000 UTC]
Left side too light and disbalanced with right.
Central thing have BIG white blank hole which catch and bring nothing.
Different fonts + many text in random places (bad thing for billboard).
"Story" looks more balanced
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AOGRAI In reply to HidePerso [2017-02-10 12:04:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the feedback. Appreciate it.
I redid it. Yes I know about the lighting... I wanted the idea of the 2 coming out from the dark shadow of the Robot from the right and wanted it dark on one side... then lit area only on the left... with a bit of haze revealing building of the city behind. O well that was the idea.
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AOGRAI In reply to HidePerso [2017-02-10 14:40:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you and appreciate your candid thoughts on how I can improve it. Thank you.
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shibashake [2017-02-03 00:32:03 +0000 UTC]
Excellent composition!
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AOGRAI In reply to shibashake [2017-02-03 02:41:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you... a cut out from the Book1 - Cover
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AOGRAI In reply to Ikke46 [2017-02-02 18:55:54 +0000 UTC]
Yeah thanks... those two you will see in chap 3 I think.
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REDANTArts [2017-02-02 13:28:48 +0000 UTC]
AHHH I LOVE THIS!!!!
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psiandco [2017-02-02 08:04:56 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy this kind of sci-fi artwork.
cool.
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AOGRAI In reply to psiandco [2017-02-02 10:53:47 +0000 UTC]
Hope you like the story too.. I've put up the synopsis. Pls let me know what u think. Thank you
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Chemicq [2017-02-02 06:30:48 +0000 UTC]
The girl's expression is priceless!
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JoePingleton [2017-02-02 02:03:02 +0000 UTC]
Awesome design
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AOGRAI In reply to JoePingleton [2017-02-02 02:32:01 +0000 UTC]
Characters in the cover are Detective Nolan and Partner Detective Lazio. Main protagonists.
Thank you my friend.
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