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Aria-Melodie — An Angel

Published: 2011-12-18 05:00:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 8822; Favourites: 179; Downloads: 96
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Description Drawn on the back of ma notes.
**EDIT**
Thank you all sooo much!!!! I can't reply to all of your comments but I really want too!!!!
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Aria-Melodie In reply to ??? [2011-12-19 23:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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ReneeKawaii [2011-12-19 20:18:41 +0000 UTC]

looking on deviantart the most populair, always gives me inspiration for new ideas and i can learn new tecniques ^_^
but i dont expect to see something like this. i have seen great artist here. no offence but to be honestly im not really here to see the art work of someone who just started to pic up drawing.

this is work that inspires me:
just by one look you can see that they put hours of work in it.

[link]

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so im sorry to say that im a bit disapointed to see this.

BUTTTT
keep on drawing and practising and u might mangage these skills by time as well and get better
good luck with it in the future!!!!!

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Aria-Melodie In reply to ReneeKawaii [2011-12-19 21:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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grovyle-n-wolfluvr In reply to ReneeKawaii [2011-12-19 20:44:31 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate that you were at least somewhat considerate in expressing your opinions, but don't complain to the artist herself. It's not her fault she's not up to your standards, which are a bit unfair, if you ask me. If you're going to complain about a piece that you are disappointed to see, comment on every piece you see on deviant art that doesn't inspire you or is 'of someone who just started to pick up drawing', instead of on someone who happened to be the victim of a glitch. (In this case, the effects were positive and negative for the artist)

And, no offense, but advertising other works that you think deserve more attention on this deviation is really rude. How do you know that she didn't put a lot of effort into this sketch? I know some of my sketches take a while to look good. And honestly, the more I read your comment, the ruder it looks.

Think about others before you post, and if you have a problem with dA, talk to the moderators.

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ReneeKawaii In reply to grovyle-n-wolfluvr [2011-12-20 10:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry if it came out that rude. i apoligize for that
i was just givnig my opinion thats all.
and the reason why i put those links of other artist is maybe that she might learn something from it ass well.
it wasnt ment negative.
i didnt blame her if thats what u are saying. i think all artist and everyone who loves art is welcome on deviantart.


and by reading my coment you can take it the good way or the wrong way. dont read a coment thats a lil negative as only bad. if i really hated it so much i wouldnt tell her to keep on going with her art. i think she has great potential for drawing so i say keep on going.

its true the modetors of deviant should pay more atention on the site itself.

and i dont really juige people on how much effort they put in it. but i speak from experiance how much time someone can put in his/her work. not precisaly but i can take a good guess. and as for sketches it wouldnt take more than 1/2 hours. depends on how skilled you are. for me it would take 3/5 min.
i know people who spent 40 hour on just one drawing (a complete drawing)

again i apolige for the rude inpresion my comment gave.

and as for Aria-Melodie.
good luck with your drawing now and in the future! . and keep on practicing! it will keep improving your skills.
the links i sent b4 i sent them that you might get some inspiration and maybe can learn something from them. I hope they'll help.

Im curious what you might show us in the future.
goodluck

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oasiaris In reply to grovyle-n-wolfluvr [2011-12-19 21:26:37 +0000 UTC]

Of course this person shouldn't blame the artist for this, but it's true that the current front page looks like your average 'newest' page. And you say it yourself, it's a sketch. I think the fact that it's on lined paper alone testifies that she didn't put as much effort in this as are put in most front page works.

I do agree that this is a moderator problem, clearly DA has been malfunctioning since this piece is too old to be on the 8 hour-front page to begin with.

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grovyle-n-wolfluvr In reply to oasiaris [2011-12-19 21:42:38 +0000 UTC]

I never said I thought that these drawings should be on the front page over others who rightfully should have, had dA been working right. And I've seen plenty of sketches by more famous artists make it on the front page (glitch-free). And who says her choice of paper shows lack of effort? Did you ever consider that could be all she had available at the time, and she just happened to like the way the sketch came out? And personally, I think it's sometimes fun to draw on lined paper. I do every now and then. My point in responding wasn't to say that Renee's irritation had no reason; I was pointing out that she was directing it the wrong way and insulting one of the artists who was affected by the glitch.

I do, too. I thought the glitch would at least refresh to newer artwork every eight hours, but I guess not. We can only hope that the moderators fix the problem soon.

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oasiaris In reply to grovyle-n-wolfluvr [2011-12-19 21:51:49 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, famous artist or not, I don't think sketches should be on the front page. But lately I often don't agree with what's on the front page.
Also, I buy paper especially for drawing. Art sucks up my money, but I think it does show effort to at least trace it on better paper before you post it.
I agree with your main point though, Renee should have directed their comment to someone else.

I hope so too, it's annoying.

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grovyle-n-wolfluvr In reply to oasiaris [2011-12-19 21:56:50 +0000 UTC]

I think it depends on how well-formed the sketch is or if it'd just a few basic lines to start off a drawing.
I don't think good art necessarily depends on the tools; although I agree that it's more professional to use art paper, which I generally use if I'm going to color traditionally. Otherwise I use printing paper for lineart when I'm coloring digitally.

Agreed, because I miss seeing some of my favorite artists on the front page, since I usually don't have time to sift through all the deviations in my inbox and see all of them.

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RazorLuvKuroshitsuji [2011-12-19 19:18:37 +0000 UTC]

AW I USE TO DRAW ANGELS LIKE THAT BEFORE BUT I LIKE YOURS.

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jolie-souris [2011-12-19 18:48:01 +0000 UTC]

this is totally sweet i wish i can draw like u

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jolie-souris [2011-12-19 18:47:35 +0000 UTC]

this is totally sweet i wish i can draw like u

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jolie-souris [2011-12-19 18:47:35 +0000 UTC]

this is totally sweet i wish i can draw like u

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Shainp113 [2011-12-19 18:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Just wanted to say that your user name is aweomse! And to show you this picture that my friend made when my book character Hannah renamed herself Aria. Just thought you would like it. [link]

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pinkplaidrobot [2011-12-19 18:00:33 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done sketch! I like your smooth lines! The face is very pretty too! Your pose is really getting there too!

You may want to consider using an stick figure armature first...before drawing. It'll help you with your forms and will also help you understand how poses work. You have a knack for drawing such pretty faces (based on this and others in your gallery). I think with some more planing before a piece ( eg a stick figure armature) you will improve greatly!

Next time you draw a dress blowing in the breeze, try to think of a direction the breeze is coming in and how the cloth would react in response. I know this was prob done in class or something...but a great real life reference is to look at drapery in your home. Let a fan hit it in a similar direction as your picture...you can really get a good idea of the vertical folds and forms during this.

Most flowy dresses...unless the wind is coming from below...will have vertical folds over horizontal.

Also, wings! I have a REALLY hard time with them aswell. But you seem to have a good grasp on the basic shape of the near one. Another way to help is to start with a oval on it's side attached to the back...then attach a larger circle...then attach smaller longer ovals to that ( those being your longer feathers). That structure should help. Also, keep in mind that bird and angle wings have small tightly knit feathers towards the joints of the wing...


Very nice over all! I look forward to seeing you grow and improve!

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Aria-Melodie In reply to pinkplaidrobot [2011-12-19 18:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for those points and tips! I'm sure they will help me improve greatly!

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pinkplaidrobot In reply to Aria-Melodie [2011-12-19 18:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Keep it up, hun! You are on your way! ^_^

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Aria-Melodie In reply to pinkplaidrobot [2011-12-19 18:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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OlMountainWoman [2011-12-19 17:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Its nice to have us reminded of when we were in school, doodling on our notebooks. Its innocent and free spirited. Keep that quality!

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Orange9714 [2011-12-19 16:20:44 +0000 UTC]

good!!!

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patusprime [2011-12-19 14:43:30 +0000 UTC]

drawing on the sheet of notebook is the best \o/ 3333333

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CeltyShinra [2011-12-19 11:24:19 +0000 UTC]

ooooooh~ nice! haha. I cnt draw angel wings, I envy you! :]

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machmaste [2011-12-19 11:15:19 +0000 UTC]

Very well drawn

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yellowsmoke321 [2011-12-19 10:16:23 +0000 UTC]

I like the way her dress and hair are blowing in the wind
pretty face
nice female physic

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Krissy-Vee [2011-12-19 09:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Man some people need to back off. I think the artist gets it already, no need to comment on the other 5 drawings saying the same thing. She didn't make the glitch happen in order for her to gain attention.

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mako109 [2011-12-19 08:15:58 +0000 UTC]

how cute!!!! I love it!!!

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PHURA12 [2011-12-19 04:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Aria-Melodie In reply to PHURA12 [2011-12-19 04:04:44 +0000 UTC]

No thanks. Prolly a virus.

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FlurryTheBear [2011-12-19 03:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Good sketch! *HUG*

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Aria-Melodie In reply to FlurryTheBear [2011-12-19 04:05:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!! *hug* I think this is my second time virtually hugging you. hahahah XD

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FlurryTheBear In reply to Aria-Melodie [2011-12-19 16:35:22 +0000 UTC]

Hehe That's okay. I'm a teddy bear, and teddy bears are for hugging. *HUG*

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Aria-Melodie In reply to FlurryTheBear [2011-12-19 18:13:51 +0000 UTC]

*hug*

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EMandMy [2011-12-19 02:41:33 +0000 UTC]

VERY cute.!

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Aria-Melodie In reply to EMandMy [2011-12-19 04:05:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly! :3

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EMandMy In reply to Aria-Melodie [2011-12-19 21:06:55 +0000 UTC]

Quite welcome hon

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Hana-NekoS [2011-12-19 01:24:56 +0000 UTC]

I love it! I want to get really good at drawing so I can draw something like this.

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Aria-Melodie In reply to Hana-NekoS [2011-12-19 04:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! All you gotta do is just don't give up and keep drawing. It took me like 5 years before my stuff even looked ok.

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Hana-NekoS In reply to Aria-Melodie [2011-12-19 08:36:14 +0000 UTC]

K thanks and I will I was planing to draw an idea i've had in my head for like a week in a little while

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Aria-Melodie In reply to Hana-NekoS [2011-12-19 20:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Send me a note with the link once you're done!

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Hana-NekoS In reply to Aria-Melodie [2011-12-19 21:02:46 +0000 UTC]

K I'll try but I might have my friend help me cause she's more experienced with deviantart than I am cause she's had an account way longer than me.

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Aria-Melodie In reply to Hana-NekoS [2011-12-19 21:32:50 +0000 UTC]

ok!

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supernovajazzy [2011-12-19 00:08:19 +0000 UTC]

So cute!!!

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Aria-Melodie In reply to supernovajazzy [2011-12-19 04:06:30 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!!!

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supernovajazzy In reply to Aria-Melodie [2012-01-14 07:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Welcome sweetie!!

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Rinukki [2011-12-19 00:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow, good drawing! I like it.

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Aria-Melodie In reply to Rinukki [2011-12-19 04:06:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!! I love your icon! Link is so cool!

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Rinukki In reply to Aria-Melodie [2011-12-19 12:57:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I just noticed that yours is a retro Nyan Cat, thats so amazing

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Aria-Melodie In reply to Rinukki [2011-12-19 20:18:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!! I just took one I found on the internet and sized it down on GIMP and then used it.

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Rinukki In reply to Aria-Melodie [2011-12-19 23:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Is the cat wearing a monacle and bowler hat? It looks like it to me xD

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Aria-Melodie In reply to Rinukki [2011-12-19 23:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Yup!

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